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By Mark GrahamPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Christmas child (

What does Christmas mean to you? Is it a child opening his presents and smiling? Is it the feeling you get in giving to others. Even though at times it is to me about receiving a certain feeling you can only get at this time of year.

C is for caring and compassion of others and self.

H is for the health and help we give and receive.

R is for the realization of what is important.

I is for the individual ways that we show how we care and love each other.

S is for the way we feel safe.

T is for the timeliness of the season and how we seem not to take the time just to realize what is important to remember.

M is for the merry we all feel, but hopefully in the right way.

A is for All of us just to see and understand what is important always.

S is for the security that we feel.

I think I gave everyone a lot to think about and I hope everyone has a Very Merry Christmas!!!!!!

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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