A critique of Psycho Joe (You)
Joe Goldberg
I get it, Joe is intentionally handsome to disarm us all. Unfortunately, his looks have stifled his potential to have a stronger character arch. I would be far more impressed by his ability to swindle if he had to depend solely on substance versus surface. He is not that cunning.
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ImperfectlyPerfect
My favorite well known saying: An amateur does it until they get it right, while a professional does it until they can't get it wrong. Don't work to get it right, work to not get it wrong!"
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Money filled envelopes began to make their way into the collection plates. It was the annual Family Day Event at Mount Beau . Every member of each family was required to attend. The pastor officiated the mini service, and after the final choir song, the treasurer walked ominously to the front of the church. In descending order, she gave a total collective donation each family contributed. When she got to the last family on the list, the Jones's, many of them stood and began to hastily make their way to the exit doors blocked by the armed church ushers. Despite their screams, attempts at fighting, and pleas, they are pushed into the sacrifice chambers.
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I love Joe but I gotta agree with you! Excellent review!