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The things never said

Echoes

By Eiman AsifPublished 6 months ago • 5 min read

In a dynasty of killers, two names stood above the rest—Zhào Bàtiān and Lín Ruòyǐng, generals whose cruelty was spoken of in lowered voices. Beyond the borders of China, their names travelled like a warning. To imagine them face to face was to imagine a blade at the neck—for they were serving to rival states Hán and Zhèng, bloodthirsty for each other, yet fated never to meet on the battlefield.

On a scorching summer day, the troops of Hán returned in triumph, marching across burning dunes. At their head rode Zhào Bàtiān—the great. At his signal, the army halted. He moved ahead alone, following a lone path through the dunes when suddenly his eyes rested on a creature-

He reached for his bow, prepared to hunt for the evening’s meal, when a sudden gust of sand swept across the desert and he saw a silk piece Billowing-

Curious—and unshaken—he stepped forward.

The closer he approached; he gasped and looked...

A white silk hanfu wrapped around a body of pureness—

layers of silk hugging the waist in quiet eagerness…

A veil cascading down the nose, as if hiding paradise from the impure—

hands so fragile, smooth and small, like a healer’s gentle cure.

Pearl-white skin, silky black hair—a woman or an angel in disguise?

Hair bound in a royal bun, a beauty? lust? love? left hypnotized…

The hem of the waist, stitched and drenched in blood…

Zhào Bàtiān gazed—was she made of snow or of mud?

He stood stunned before the luminous figure in front of him. Slowly, carefully, he reached out to unveil her face.

Suddenly, her hand seized his arm. The grip was firm—yet fading—as she whispered, “Don’t you dare…”

A faint groan escaped her lips, and then her strength gave way. She collapsed into unconsciousness. Zhào Bàtiān carefully lifted her into his arms and laid her within his chariot.

“军医!”, His voice thundered across the desert, “救她—save her.”

When the physician hesitated—his voice trembled and fainted with thundered Orders of Zhào Bàtiān, “她是我的女人—She is my woman”

Silence fell.

The army of a man known him for neither mercy nor attachment stood still, breaths held, as if the desert itself had gone quiet. Whether it was the command, the claim, or the unknown meaning behind it—no one dared to question and they returned Hán.

And within the mansion of the great general , for the first time, he brought something not conquered—

but claimed...

He laid her down gently—and left!? did He?

Later, as evening settled and the breeze kissed the tender blossoms, the mansion fell into a strange quiet. Birds hushed, and even the night seemed to listen. Then—

A Melody...

Soft, aching, carried by the breath of a 箫 (xiāo), escaping free and settling into every restless heart.

Zhào Bàtiān stilled. Then, as if pulled by something unseen, he followed the sound—each note steeped in something dangerously alive...

He reached the chamber and pushed the doors open...

Her gaze, ocean-grey, rested upon the night sky—as though the heavens themselves had sunk into her eyes....

Like the sea before a storm.

A warning? A longing? A quiet peace?

Until she turned and said:

“Honoured General… I am grateful you saved me. May I know who stands before me?”

His instincts stirred.

“My lady,” he said, his voice measured, edged with quiet steel, “what makes you so certain I am a general?”

A pause... “Or” he added coldly, “Or do you already know more than you should?”

She knelt, tense. “My—my lord… forgive me if I have spoken too much. I do not deserve your kindness… I will not trouble you any further.”

She lowered her head, as if preparing to leave. “Wait.” His voice cut through the air—sharp, controlled, undeniable.

“Zhào Bàtiān. I am Zhào Bàtiān of Hán. And You?”

She froze. A breath caught in silence.

Fear? Recognition? Rage? Unreadable— when she spoke again, “ I’m from Zhèng, just a citizen name, umm... Lín... Lín Huàn”

He repeated softly,

林幻— Lín. Huàn.

Forest. Illusion.

And left.

But he did not forget.

“Zhào Bàtiān of Hán”, she murmured to herself... “The territory of enemies? I should gain their trust and prepare for a victory then?!”, she planned in her head but - Days turned to something dangerous.

She smiled.

She stayed.

She learned.

Was she winning? Or falling?

He had given her something no one else had ever seen—

his trust, his care… the quiet softness he had buried beneath war.

Was it weakness? Or something far more dangerous?

And if there was a prey—

was it truly him?

Days carried away—

Days that should not have existed—brief, stolen, almost sacred.

Neither Hán nor Zhèng… but somewhere in between.

They spoke little.

And yet, everything remained unsaid between them.

Late one night, beneath a restless sky, wine blurred the distance they tried so hard to keep.

He laughed—soft, bitter, almost lost to himself.

“Lín Huàn… Huàn…”

The name lingered, uncertain—mockery or confession, even he did not know.

His gaze lowered, voice deep, unraveling:

“幻象…果然。这世间一切,皆为谎言与虚幻。”

(Huàn … indeed. Everything in this world is but lies and Huàn.)

Silence followed.

Heavy. Knowing. Unforgiving.

Even the heavens seemed to understand the distance between them—

the weight of all the things they never said.

Then—

she removed her veil.

Not for the world.

Not for fate.

For him.

They looked at each other— not as enemies, not as strangers— but as something far more fragile.

His lips parted:

“我爱——” (I love—)

A voice shattered the moment.

“Kill! Enemies are meant to kill—never to stand together!”

The words fell apart before they could live...

They turned away.

Walked—

distance gathering in steps, not in hearts.

And then—

both stopped.

Something—unspoken, unfinished—pulled them back.

They turned.

Looked—

—and in the same instant, fear struck.

Not for themselves.

For the other.

They ran.

No names called, no words given—only the urgency of feet breaking silence.

They reached—collided—arms finding each other as if they had always belonged there.

In that breath, they shifted—

a turn, a fall, a tightening of hold—

—and the arrows came.

From opposite shadows.

Neither saw.

Only the impact—sharp, sudden—stealing the air from their lungs as their bodies stilled against each other.

Zhào Bàtiān saw her face—

tearful, trembling—lips parted, as if a confession had finally found its way to the edge of her breath.

Lín Ruòyǐng saw his eyes—

soft, certain—holding something she had longed to hear, now forever unspoken.

Each believed the other had come—to say it.

Each believed they themselves had come—too late.

Their hands tightened, not in pain, but in quiet refusal to let go.

Words hovered—never born.

They had feared them once—

feared leaving the other behind with something too heavy to carry.

So they had chosen silence. What they knew not?? Both were Dying in Saving one another-

And in that silence—

they had chosen this.

Their foreheads rested together, breaths faltering, fading.

A whisper passed between them—

“Goodbye.”

And gasp of what they had never said...

And when stillness claimed them,

their entwined bodies, their mingled blood—

spoke the things never said...

-EIMAN ASIF

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    Written by Eiman Asif