Timothy Schoenfeld
Joined June 2021
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Show don’t tell
I’m writting this guide cause I’ve notice a lot of people in the doomsday diary are falling into the pitfalls of show not tell. Now I’m no expert writer. My brain still can’t comprehend ‘and’. Im baffled by the coma. Where do you put it? But there is one golden rule I was taught. Show dont tell.
By Timothy Schoenfeld 3 years ago in Fiction
Heart Cinder
The past night’s trauma was fresh in his mind. Despite keeping his eyes shut for a few blissful hours, Martin remained painfully awake looking for dangers, some real and some only in the furthest realms of his imagination. The other bunkmates were staring at him. The closest man to him asks, “Frederic Martin, you ok?”
By Timothy Schoenfeld 3 years ago in Fiction