Writing Exercise Where Meaning To Action Is Hidden In The Subtext

Anne Bernays and Pamela Painter — What if? Writing Exercises for Fiction Writers prompts —

The Exercise —

Write two very short examples of text, in which the true meaning of the action or dialogue is hidden in a subtext. Under each text explicate the subtext.

The Objective —

To learn to use indirection to illustrate the power of hidden meaning. This is something like a double exposure, a photograph that shows two images simultaneously.

Text: Thank you for your help during a time when many families need support. Many families will have empty tables during the upcoming Thanksgiving meal, as there are still many who need our help.

Subtext: Please donate. We need even more financial assistance in the coming days.

Text: Can we count on you to help us get this building built? We are calling on all the members to contribute more money than the initial $100. membership fee.

Subtext: We plan to ask each member to sign a pledge to give $1,000. over a period of time, and in doing so, you will be entered into a drawing to win a prize of your choice. A chest freezer or standing freezer, laundry appliances, or two kitchen appliances of your choice.