visiting the asylum
Paul's Explicate My Poem Unofficial Challenge

I visited the asylum today at four
saw an inmate, we’ll name him Paul
then scribbling wildly upon the wall
asked I, why do prudence thy ignore?
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spake he, not impudence but wisdom I vouchsafe
nor madness which may or may not affect
the appearance of this tiresome seeming defect
stay awhile, let not thy conscience chafe
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idle here with me in search of the key
perchance the world’s ills we might together solve.
so stared I long and hard at the wall
whilst he with jibes and taunts spurred me
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what exegetical nightmare hast thou wrought
how might I extricate, or explicate this riddle?
till a light pierced my fog-like muddle
Not one puzzle but many thou hast brought
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in lunacy I scribbled above R. A. P. I. D.
at first fast and then with measured pulse slow
ten safety rules and six denotes Ayatana, so
stab me a short lais, lai, lay for love of poesy
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MC Escher, ytniatrec, stands opposed to certainty
till reading between the lines and stripping
away all the ledger’s credits and debiting
Paul in sudden fervor began to dance with glee
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for ownership of the lais ends when lay we the pen aside
the meaning vouchsafed by thee or me
allows the laity or critic to set our poesy free
whilst we watch it sorrowfully upon the winds fly.
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his euphoria waning, he gazed sadly at his cell
how do I this place escape? whispered Paul
and replied I with knowing grin, stop scribbling upon the wall.
fat chance, laughed he, and embracing bade our fond farewell
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John Cox
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