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The Ballad of Martha May

for the "Steal from Yourself" challenge

By Imola TóthPublished a day ago • Updated about 3 hours ago • 2 min read
The Ballad of Martha May
Photo by Mushvig Niftaliyev on Unsplash

Sadness pierced her little soul,

in deep ol' woods she lost her doll.

She carried grief along the road,

down the hills and through meadow.

With heavy sighs she carried on,

marching all the way back home.

She rode the winds like poplar leaves

in late December, wond'ring how she landed,

Where she ended,

by the ye ol' Thompson creek.

The air was cold, she smelled damp earth,

then heard the crying of the birds.

They followed her and called her that:

"Young blood, baby fat."

All the life packed in her soft lil' body,

they wanted, demanded, loudly.

She knew a bridge was somewhere near,

but found no crossing anywhere

Through her watery gaze, lost in a maze,

by the ye ol' Thompson creek.

She jumped around on rocks and scree

wet from the trembling black creek.

She jumped to cross the raging stream,

until she slipped with a scream.

The sky, so blue, she saw its hue

before it turned dark all through.

Heavy woolen skirt she had,

with the current, down she went.

Now, so scarlet, she is stained,

by the ye ol' Thompson creek.

Black birds gathered in a murder,

all along the river border,

On ghoulish branches they calmly sat,

waiting to pick her flesh and fat.

Came new spring with all its wonders,

people found four-pound bone fragments.

They recognized her from the wool,

and tears they shed by pocketful.

Now, her bones are sprinkled yonder,

by the ye ol' Thompson creek.

For this challenge, I decided to rob one of the first haiku (#4) that I've written, back in high school.

When I read the prompt I immediately knew I wanted to do something with the line "young blood, baby fat". I always loved that line. I think I came up with the haiku just to have an excuse to include it somewhere that wasn't my graveyard notes.

I initially started working on a prose poem for the challenge, but it was a struggle. I was literally in pain writing it. I rewrote it again and again. I even changed the topic twice, but it only got worse with every rewrite. I considered abandoning the project and not submitting anything for this challenge either.

I wrote this ballad some time ago, but struggled with the second stanza. It just didn't want to come together. I felt like something was missing but couldn't figure out what. So, I left it to marinate...

Then, the other day, I was scrolling through my drafts and stumbled upon this ballad, which I completely forgot about. When I read it again, I knew that the stolen line wanted to be part of it. I just didn't know how.

Then, I got the idea for the birds... and the whole poem came together. I think this is my first-ever rhyming poem, so I'm not sure how good the rhymes are but I tried. 😄

Thank you for reading ❤️

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Imola Tóth

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    Written by Imola Tóth