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A ghost texts me

DIFFERENT VERSIONS OF THE STORY

By Sandra BongjohPublished 3 years ago 22 min read
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This story is about a ghost. (FIRST VERSION)

This story happened in the night, a white lady was watching television. She was watching a horror movie. In the horror movie, a group of students was walking in the night.

The students were in high school. They were going to a party for high school students and university students. The person who was organizing this party was black from African parents, from Cameroon.

He owned the night bar. His name was Akere. He sells alcoholic drinks, soft drinks, and not food. Akere took some loans to start his business. HE holds a high school diploma and worked first in a restaurant as dishwasher. After working for ten years at Dairy Queens, he decided to rent the bar and paid with the money that he earned by working for ten years at Dairy Queens, he decided to rent the bar and paid with the money that he earned by working. He is not well-educated but he works hard to attract his customers. He hires five people who sells the tickets, for people by entering the nightclub for the party. He is the person wo plays the music who started all types of music. He plays rap, and R'N'B, in his nightclub.

After meeting this black-American, the group of students who was supposed to go the party went in the wrong direction. The second group of students who went in the right direction.

These students went to the direction where there was a ghost. This ghost has on a mask and black pants.

He was hidden in a small hole. Two of these students were fifty because they liked a girl, because they liked a girl, with blond hair pretty and bright teeth.

The group of students stopped the dispute between the two boys. The second student decided to go back home and not to go back to the party.

At that time, the ghost left the hole and attacked the boy. The lady who was watching the movie was scared and decided to change channel. This story is my story.

The lady who is a lady of eighteen years old was called Rose. She works hard by washing dishes at the bar. She is a lady of eighteen years old.

My ghost texts me ( SECOND VERSION)

This story happened in Boston, Massachussetts. A girl with short blond hair lived in an average house. She lives with her parents. The name of the girl is Aubri. She is in the last year of high school. Aubri shares the same bedroom with her brother. In the courtyard, where she lived there was a boy who lived in the courtyard who lived his parents.

This boy liked Aubri. He did not know how to get to know her. He had one of his friends who is Aubri's cousin. He knew everything about her.

He wanted to act as a ghost by texting her a poem on her phone. He liked her a lot. He wanted the day to the notebook that his friend has and see Aubri's contact so he can text her his love letter.

It is difficult to steal the boy's notebook. His friend, Matt, Aubri's cousin wanted to steal his friend's notebook. Simon wanted to commit the theft at the class of the swimming-pool. Tomorrow, it is class.

Simon decided to start what he planned to do. He wanted to steal the notebook of his cousin and looked at it when it is swimming-pool class.

Aubri went to church today with her brother and her parents. Her brother is in elementary school. When they went to church, and the priest preached the Bible about disciples.

This story happened in the night, a white lady was watching television. She was watching a horror movie. In the horror movie, a group of students was walking in the night.

The students were in high school. They were going to a party for high school students and university students. The person who was organizing this party was black from African parents, from Cameroon.

When the day was over, Cathy had dinner with her whole family. Her father cooked for dinner macaroni and cheese and biscuits. For dessert, she made chocolate chip brownies.

Before eating, the family started to pray. Mr. Anderson is the person who started the prayer. This is what he said in his prayer.

"Dear lord, thank you for the day! Bless it!"

"Bless the food!" Bless the Lord who prepared it." Give food to people who do not have."

After the prayer, the whole family started eating. Mrs. Anderson even though she is busy and she has a lot of work at her job. For each, the family enjoyed the cornbread and the chili sauce that their mother and Mr. Anderdon's wife made. She cooks most of the food from scratch.

He liked the macaroni and cheese that his wife cooked. After the macaroni and cheese, there were chocolate chip and caramel brownies. There are homemade brownies, made from scratch. Mrs. Anderson did not buy the brownies from the box.

She bought ten packs of chocolate , the purpose flour, the caramel separately. Most of brownies liked to buy food that has already been made, that has already been made in the boxes.

There was a big tray of brownies that were hot. The brownies were for a week. She made chewy brownies. Everybody liked the brownies.

Each person at the table had two big pieces of brownies. The brownies were hot, not too hot since they have been on the table for a while.

Mrs. Anderson put the leftovers of the brownies in a big plastic box and she also put the leftover of the food in the plastic container. She put the leftover of the macaroni and cheese in one plastic container

, the brownies in a single plastic container, and she put the biscuits in its own plastic container.

After dinner, each member of the family washed his plate. Mrs. Anderson put the plastic containers of the food in the fridge they were already cool. She washed her own plate, and the other containers that she used to pour out the food that she made. The whole family Anderson had one television. Their television is big. It has a big screen. This television has a lot of channels. It has all American channels such as cartoon networks, BET, MTV,

Right now, the two kids were watching a movie on BET. Mr. Anderson was reading his novel. He was seated on a armchair. His wife was also watching the same movie that the kids were watching. In the family Anderson, the members of the family shared the hours between each other they watched the television.

It means the children have three hours to watch the television in the morning and in the afternoon and the others members of the family it means the father and the wife have the rest of the other hours to watch the movie. The children spent two hours to watch the television in the afternoon, then they have an hour remaining. The movie was an hour and half. They already spent thirty minutes to watch the first program. When the parents retire to bed, the children can still watch the television even if they passed the number of hours to watch the television.

Cathy went to the shower. She uses pomegranate body wash to take a shower. Her lotion is Jergens. Jergens is what she likes to use for her body.

She wore her night gown to sleep with. She was in her bed reading her novel. Cathy likes to read, to listen to music. The type of music that she likes to listen to isbthis type of music such as Justin Bieber, Carl Rae Jepsen...

This is the type of music that she likes to listen to. Right now, she was reading her novel. Her novel's title is "The travelers in the boat".

She was at the middle of her novel. She was reading started at where she left. She always leaves a ball pen at the page where she stopped reading.

Her brother was playing game boy. He liked the games. He liked the games that were in the game boy.

He liked all the games in his game boy. In the house of the family Anderson, they have a computer that they use. The computer that they use is average and its brand is "Toshiba".

The computer has WiFi. When the children cannot watch the television, they use the computer because on Internet they have movies, other videos, even cartoons.

Cathy is reading the rest of her novel, and wants to listen to music to relax. She likes to listen to Carly Rae Jepsen, to Justin Bieber, to Celine Dion, to the Blues.

She does not spend too much time on the computer. Cathy was a good student in mathematics. Mathematics was not an easy for many people in her school.

She was one of the best students in mathematics and was willing to get a scholarship. Jonathan the young boy who likes Cathy wanted to be able to scare her and reveal his identity. He wanted to act like he is a ghost.

He has plans in his head. He does not know much about Cathy. He has friends who know about her because they are in the same class as her.

He wanted to appear like a ghost one day at an event. He wants to prepare his idea and to be successful in it. He wants to scare Cathy and tell her why he had this idea and hope that she will forgive her for scaring her, and also that she will accept to date him. Is this idea good? Is he doing the right thing to text me?

Among Jonathan's friends, there was one of his friends who is in the same class as Cathy and has his phone number. Cathy was given a cell phone at Christmas. She had good grades and had honors. She was happy to be given a cell phone so she can keep in touch with her friends. She was a bright student, an intelligent student.

She was about to be accomplished. She reached the last year of high school. She is a senior now. When you are a senior, it means that you are accomplished when you graduate from high school. Cathy still wanted to pursue her education until university. She really wants to graduate from the school where she is enrolled. With a high school diploma you can have a decent job in the United States. There are a lot of jobs with a high school diploma that offer you benefits. The benefits that Cathy wants is to be able to have a medical insurance. She wants to have a good pay.

The music she is listening to is Katy B Please me.

She has a couple of CD's and a big radio. She is listening to her favorite songs that are in the same CD of the singer.

She was listening to all the songs of the CD. She already done her schoolwork. Mr. and Mrs. Anderson were watching their favorite soap opera "Seven heaven."

There are other soap operas that Cathy used to like to watch with her entire family such as "The young and the restless".

When Cathy is a little bit hungry after dinner, she has snacks. What she likes to eat as snacks is "barbecue lays chips."

She also likes to drink cocktail juice. Her father and mother buy snacks so it can last for a month. When the entire family goes for shopping, they buy pop corn with sour cream onion, two big bags of chips, two big bottles of apple cider, four packs of chewy brownies, egg rolls. When they buy more food, they buy it the following month after they bought the snack.

Now, it is 10PM, Mr. and Mrs. Anderson retired to bed. Cathy has already taken a shower, so her brother did. She went downstairs to watch a movie. There are different DVDs of different types such as horror movies, comic movies, romance movies, crime movies. Mrs. Anderson knew that her daughter Cathy was eighteen years old, but she did not want her to watch romance movies. She confiscated the romance movies that Cathy bought with her and husband's money or even given to her as a gift. Cathy really wanted to be independent. Jonathan was in his house. He went to swimming-pool today and had fun with his friends. He also went to the ice cream shop to buy three scopes of ice-cream. Jonathan and his friends combined their money together to buy ice-cream. Jonathan was thinking on how to play his game and get to know Cathy. Jonathan was also an attractive boy. He was handsome to the eyes of many girls in the school.

The friend that he had who had Cathy's contact number is Katy. He does not know Cathy only because they are in the same class but because he is one of her cousins. He used to come to her house with his parents for events such as Thanksgiving, Christmas parties, Easter parties.

He knows very well Cathy and her brother. His parents are closed relatives and know their secrets. Jonathan who was in his room was thinking of asking Matt for Cathy's name and contact number. But it will be very difficult because he knows that Jonathan is not going to let him borrow his book with his contact information in it. He decided to try to take his diary from his backpack and to borrow his notebook. He would like to write quickly on a piece of paper Cathy and her contact number and start the game that he wanted to play. He wanted to start his (plan).

He has class with Matt in PE, and in Pre-Calculus. The only class, he can go and steal things from his bagbis when he is in PE. He really wanted to prepare his game right now. Tomorrow it is Monday. He and his friends Matt are in PE. They have swimming-pool. They have two hours of swimming-pool. Each student put their school bag with their clothes inside in a locker. The locker does not have a lock. You put your bag inside and you close it back. Jonathan knows that Matt has a diary where he writes his schoolmates, classmates, and friend's phone number. He wanted to start his game to be able to keep in touch with Mary not on her landline because she will recognize his voice. He decided to get her mobile number it means her cell phone number so he can text her.

There are different events at school such as Thanksgiving, Homecoming, Christmas, Easter, prom, and other events. Jonathan decided to start his game right now. Tomorrow was for him the best to start his game. He wanted to disguise himself and go to the night club that the school organizes. He wanted to go to Cathy's window, and speaks like a ghost. He wanted to act like a ghost. He wanted to imitate, and to copy the voice of a ghost.

Cathy was watching a comic movie with Hillary Duff playing in it. She knows that tomorrow she is going to school but she will not start class until 9:00 A.M.

She does not have class because one of their teachers is absent. She emailed all the students and told them that she has the flu. This is why she will sleep until 8:45A.M

She does not need to rush tomorrow. Her school is not far away from her house. It is at fifteen minutes from her house. She will be sleeping from midnight to 8:45. She wants to enjoy her sleep.

She watched her favorite movie with Hillary Duff in it until midnight. It is 11:00P.M, she left her room and she took a DVD to watch a movie.

Her brother was sleeping. Cathy now has her own room before she was sharing the same room with her brother, but now she has her own room, the room that her mother showed her since she is an adult. Actually, she is a teenager. A lady of eighteen years old or of twenty years old is still a young lady. Even twenty three, twenty four or twenty six you are still young. An adult is a person who is in between the range of twenty seven years to thirty years old.

Cathy brushed her teeth long time ago when she finished eating the barbecue chips that she poured out in a plastic plate. She also took a shower before dropping the stairs to watch her movie. Her brother who now lives alone in his room also took a shower. The whole family takes a shower at night, or before night. Mr. and Mrs. Anderson are in the same room and have a bathroom.

Their bathroom is big. It is for the couple. It has a big bath, a water closet, a big sink, a soap , a trash can, a towel. , a drawer to put the toiletries in it. Mrs. Anderson most of the time cleans her own bathroom. Mr. Anderson cleans it sometimes.

Cathy's brother is going to school tomorrow. He will wake up at 7:00A.M. He will wake up at this time to go to school. He takes the bus. He attends the Middle school of New Jersey. This middle school is public be and accepts thousands students. They charge students only for their books, their school supplies.

Cathy was in her pink nightgown. Her new bedroom was very comfortable and clean. She was dreaming of the man of her dreams. She was dreaming of a young boy of nineteen years old who was white with blond hair. He is handsome.

He dresses well, and likes the Lord.

He goes to church. Her dream was long. Cathy met this boy at the nightclub. The school organized a party. And at this party, there were many students from her school who came to dance. The nightclub in which people were dancing was a bar. They were offering soft drinks and pretzels. The ticket for this party was $6.00.

$6.00 is a good amount of money for the party. She dreamt that the guy that she met at the party was ordering a glass of coke. And,she was in the same town as him and asked another waitress:

"Hi, I would like a glass of coke as well and some pretzels in a plate. Suddenly, she saw that the guy closed to her who asked a glass of coke turned and saw how beautiful she was. He said: "Hi, girly how are you doing?", and he had his eyes starring at her. This is a sign of love. She looked at the man he was looking at him and found that he was attractive.

She wanted to know if he goes to church. At the party, they danced together without touching each other. The title of the song was "Party USA."

They really enjoyed the party. Cathy had a red dress and red shoes that were opened. Her companion had a white trousers and blue shirt with a while jacket which is the same color as her trousers.

They danced the whole night. He gave her her phone number and home address. She met him at the church she was going to every Sundays. She also met him at other places such as school. She never saw him at school before, but he goes to the same high school as her. She slept well. She woke up at 7:55A.M tomorrow.

She thought that she needed more sleep. She decided to study again for the quiz that she will have at 9:00 A.M. She has a quiz in Spanish.

Her brother was eating cereals "Cinnamon Toast Crunch.

He was eating "Cinnamon Toast Crunch". This is one of the best Cinnamon Toast Crunch that are sold in the United States. Cathy eats Cream of wheat, Grips, or sometimes Quaker oats. She does not take cereals. It is funny to see that she never takes cereals since she started her senior year. She used to eat cereals. But now it seems like she changed her diet. She decided to change her breakfast and drink Cream of wheat, Grips or oatmeal.

She washed her face with Proactive and brushed her teeth with Cinnamon toothpaste Colgate. This is the toothpaste that she uses to brush her teeth with. She eats at the cafeteria, and uses this toothpaste to brush her teeth after lunch.

Right now she is done working on her Spanish quiz. She takes Spanish classes. She does not speak Spanish fluently even though she started studying Spanish since 8th grade.

She likes Spanish but she does not care to speak it fluently. After studying for her Spanish test, she went to the living-room and ate some of her caramel shortbread cookies that she bought at the Dollar general. She eats sometimes short bread caramel cookies for breakfast. She does not all the time have for breakfast either oatmeal, grips, or Cream of wheat. She eats shortbread cookies with a cup of milk sometimes for breakfast. She was eating at the eating table. She did not want to create a mess in the living-room.

Her brother brushed his teeth after eating his cereals and already taken the bus to go to school. Cathy was done eating and washed the plate in which she poured out her shortbread caramel cookies and also washed her glass that she used for her milk.

She liked this breakfast. She four cookies and kept the leftover of the shortbread caramel cookies in the cupboard for snacks. The remaining cookies in the pack were eight cookies.

She brushed her teeth and watched television. It was 8:00am. She was already dressed for school. There was no dress codes required for the students to go to school. Cathy wears whatever she wanted to go to school. But the color of the uniform needs to be blue and white. Students can wear jeans but only on Fridays because it is the last day of school. Cathy has all her notebooks for school. She has a big bag pack "Jansport".

This bag is red. It is good quality. It cannot be spoiled easily. She can put many things in her bag pack. She did not want to exaggerate. Today was a good day. She had class from 9:00A.M to 11:00 A.M.

It is two hours of class that she has. After her Spanish class, she has biology. She needs to change class because the Spanish class does not have a laboratory.

The biology class has a sink, a tap, a microscope for experimentation. Right now,. Cathy was watching her favorite soap operas "The young and the restless." She likes Eva Longoria who is one of the actresses in the movie. She plays in the movie. She is very pretty, attractive.

She has now twenty five minutes remaining before going to school. She has a beautiful jumper with a white shirt in it. This jumper stops at her knees. It is very nice. She has a fashionable white shirt in it. The jumper that she had on is blue since all the students girls clothes color needs to be blue and white. They do not have a specific dress code. The catalog about the students dress code is online on the school site. The boys wear a brown pants with a white shirt. They can also wear brown shorts with white shirts, any type of shirts, but not boxers. Biders are excluded for boys. The shirt that they need to wear should be a plain shirt, no pictures in it. The girls also need to wear a plain shirt with something blue below.

After she saw that that it was 8:45#a.m, she turned off the television and went to school. Her father already left at the same time the bus took her younger brother to school. Her mother left without telling her to go to work as well. Cathy can call her mother at her phone's number because she has her mother's phone number on her phone among the contacts that she kept in it. Cathy has friends. She has two friends. They visit her not too often. PE class starts at 2:00 P.M. Jonathan decided to use this opportunity to rob Matt's notebook really quick and write on the piece of paper that he kept in his pocket his crush's name and phone number. He also wanted to put back the notebook in his friend's backpack the way he put it and put it in the locker where it was and closed the locker the same way his friend does it. He was used to see how his friend was tidying his bag pack most of the time. He wanted to succeed what he had in head.

He was now in Fine arts class with his other friends. He wanted to start what he intended to do at 2:00P.M.

They have swimming-pool. This is the last class. Jonathan had brought a new swimming-suit and his red towel.

Now, Cathy was in biology class. She was learning a new lesson on the prey.

She was with her friend Brenda who has dark and long hair with glasses on. Brenda was miope.

She seats all the time behind and she always has glasses on. Cathy was next to her. Before Cathy had long hair and not short hair, but she decided to cut it short because she wanted to change look for her senior year.The biology class lasts an hour. Cathy and Brenda eats at the cafeteria. She has another friend named Bonnie. They are three in the group. At lunch time, the cook prepared chicken tenders with mashed potatoes and gravy. They have salad at the end of the line for all the students with different types of salad dressing and vegetables. Dessert varies rarely. Most of the time, they have ice-cream or fruits for desert. They have a big fridge where there are many types of ice-creams. There is a big basket of bananas and apples in the big table not too far from the fridge.

Cathy was done with her biology class. She is not going back home. She brought most of the school supplies that she needed with her. There are other books that she left in the locker.

At the cafeteria, there was a long line. Break lasts from 11:00A.M to 1:00P.M. It means when lunch time starts at 11:00A.M, the students have two hours of break. When the line is long, some of the students wait on a bench outside of the cafeteria or some others stand and are patient. The line was not too long. Cathy, Brenda and Bonnie were lmost through with the line and were the next to take the plate of food that was on top of the table of the kitchen.

All the students are having chicken tenders and mashed potatoes and they can serve themselves salad with vegetables and have desert such as ice-cream or fruits.

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Sandra Bongjoh

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I am Sandra Bongjoh. I am an author. I currently live in West Roxbury, Massachusetts. I write stories for both children and adults. I also write novels on other topics such as politics books, cookery .

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