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Who was she?

The story of a young man

By Kamran AlamPublished 17 days ago 3 min read
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The text describes the story of a young man who visits a shrine called Mazar Sharif, which is spread over a large area. The main building, which contained the grave of a nobleman, was short but its enclosure was large and made of red bricks. The shrine was believed to be a great saint, and childless couples would pray for children, and Koti would come to fulfill her daughter's marriage vows even in a formal wedding dress.

The specialty that Mazarapani was most famous for was the healing of demon-possessed people. People from far and wide would come to Mazar-e-Sharif for the treatment of their devil-affected sons and daughters and stay there and return with their perfectly healthy patients. The author and his friends were quite young at the time, and they found these scenes attractive.

One day, the author saw a young girl sitting outside the compound outside the shrine where the brick floor ended and the crumbly earth began. She had a dupatta draped over her head and wrapped around her well, and her face was very fair and beautiful. After coming home to Mazar-i-Sharif, the girl completely lost her mind.

On the next morning, the author noticed the girl again when he was going to college. She was similarly seated on the ground in the shrine compound, and his face was completely open. The author was amazed by her beauty and couldn't help but feel sad. On the way back from college, the author prayed for the girl to be seen, but the premises were almost empty. The girl was nowhere to be found, and the author searched for him for some time before he went home.

On the third day of college, the author looked inside the shrine compound and found the compound empty. The author thought that the girl might have come from a distant city and had been staying there for three or four days. After looking at each other for a few moments, they both looked away.

The author started walking towards the house with fast steps, and his heart was beating faster than his feet. He thought he had fallen in love with the girl and did not sleep that night. The next day, the college was closed due to heavy rain, and the author was leaving the house even in the heavy rain.

In summary, the story revolves around the fascination with demon-possessed youths at the shrine, the author's encounters with the girl, and the story's connection to the shrine. The author's fascination with the demon-possessed youths and the shrine's reputation as a healing center has left a lasting impact on the author's life and experiences.

She was so beautiful that I even forgot where I was standing. At that moment he raised his eyes and looked at me.

Oh, her eyes, deep black but so sad, maybe the person she came with is very sick. I thought.

As I said in the beginning, people used to come to this shrine from far and wide with their patients and for those who could not come daily, they stayed here. There were countless cots in the shrine grounds. On which such people used to spend their nights. And spent the whole day at the shrine. Food was not a problem because of the daily langar at the shrine.

That girl might have come here from a distant city. That's why she was staying here for three or four days. After looking at each other for a few moments, we both looked away. I started walking towards the house with fast steps. My heart was beating faster than my feet. this girl I think I have fallen in love with him. I did not sleep that night. The next day I started getting ready for college early.

But luckily there was such a downpour that the college was closed. I was leaving the house even in the heavy rain, but my poor friend called and informed me that the college was closed.

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Kamran Alam

"Kamran Alam: Karachi-based Digital Marketing & Content Writer. Crafting captivating narratives and driving online success. Let's elevate your brand's online presence together!"

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