
The map said the trail ended at the lake.
It didn’t mention the cabin.
They saw it at dusk, when the sky had already begun to bruise purple and gray. It stood just beyond the tree line, half-swallowed by dark, its silhouette warped. No path led to it. No smoke curled from its chimney. It simply… existed.
“Was that on the map?” Nancy asked.
None of the other three answered.
Jose checked again anyway, turning the paper over like something might be printed on the back. “No,” he said after a moment. “Nothing out here but water and woods.”
“Good,” Jonah muttered. “Means it’s empty.”
They all looked at him.
He shrugged. “Better than running into people out here.”
They were tired, and the temperature was dropping. They didn't feel like setting up their tent. Logic, or something like it, nudged them forward.
The cabin door was already open.
Not wide. Just enough to suggest it had been left that way, deliberately. The wood around the handle was scratched—not weathered but scored.
“Probably animals,” Mary said, too quickly.
Inside, the air was stale and cold. Not the natural cold of nightfall, but something deeper, older—like the cabin had forgotten what warmth was.
There was no dust.
Everything looked untouched. The table was set with four plates. A chair was pulled back slightly, as if someone had just stood up. Even the floorboards were clean, their age betrayed only by the occasional warped plank. A lantern sat on the mantel, full of oil.
“Okay,” Nancy whispered, “that’s not normal.”
“No,” Jonah agreed. “It’s not.”
Something creaked overhead.
They froze.
“Wind,” Mary said.
“There’s no wind,” Nancy replied.
Another creak. Slower this time. Measured.
A footstep.
They argued in hushed voices about whether to leave or stay. The darkness outside had thickened into something oppressive. Leaving didn’t feel like an option anymore. Not without sunlight. Not without knowing where they were going.
So, Jonah lit the lantern, and they climbed.
Each step groaned under their weight, the sound too loud, too deliberate. As if the cabin were announcing them.
The second floor had a single room. The door was closed.
Jose reached for it. Paused.
“Listen,” Nancy said.
They did.
Nothing.
Which was worse.
Jose pushed the door open.
The room was empty.
No bed. No furniture. Just bare wooden walls and a single window, fogged from the outside. The floor was clean, like the rest of the cabin.
Except for the footprints.
They were concentrated at the center of the room.
Bare feet. Human-shaped, but wrong somehow—the toes too long, the arch too shallow. The prints were dark, as though pressed into damp wood, but the surface was dry.
They formed a circle.
Round and round, overlapping in places but always following the same path.
“What the...” Jonah whispered.
The prints didn’t lead to the door.
They didn’t lead to the window.
They didn’t lead anywhere.
They simply… circled, as if something had been pacing.
Waiting.
They went back downstairs without speaking.
Darkness had swallowed what little light remained. The trees outside were gone now, replaced by a blank, shifting gray. The world beyond the cabin had been erased.
Jose said, “Okay,” forcing steadiness into his voice. “We stay here for the night. First light, we leave.”
“Are you sure we're safe?” Nancy asked.
He didn’t answer.
Jonah moved to the table, staring at three plates.
“There are four of us,” he said slowly.
Jose frowned. “What?”
Jonah gestured. “When we came in. There were four plates.”
“No, there weren’t,” Nancy said immediately.
“Yes,” Jonah insisted. “I remember because I thought—”
“Thought what?” Jose asked.
Jonah shook his head. “Never mind.”
They stood in silence.
And then—
A sound.
From behind them.
A chair scraping.
They turned as one.
The chair at the end of the table was pulled back.
Slowly.
Deliberately.
As if someone had just sat down.
But the chair was empty.
The wood groaned under a weight that wasn’t there.
Mary made a choking sound.
Nancy stepped forward, heart hammering. “Hello?”
The chair creaked again.
And then—
A breath.
Not theirs.
Close.
Too close.
Right past Jonah.
He turned.
Nothing.
But the lantern flame bent sharply, as though something had passed by it.
A shape—not seen but felt—moved between them.
Nancy stumbled back, colliding with the wall. “It’s here,” she whispered. “It’s right here.”
“What is?” Jonah demanded, panic rising. “What are you seeing?”
“I’m not seeing it,” she said, voice breaking. “That’s the problem.”
Another breath.
This time, they all heard it.
Slow.
Hungry.
The front door slammed shut.
The sound echoed through the cabin, final and absolute.
Jose ran to it, yanking at the handle.
It didn’t budge.
“Open!” he shouted, pulling with all his might.
Behind him, Mary screamed.
Jose turned.
Mary was staring at the floor.
At the footprints.
They were appearing again.
One by one.
Dark impressions pressing into the wood, as though something invisible were stepping forward.
Toward them.
Nancy backed away, shaking her head. “No, no, no—”
The prints circled her.
Just like upstairs.
Slow. Patient.
She turned, trying to follow them, to see what wasn’t there.
“Stop,” she whispered. “Please stop.”
The circling tightened.
Closer.
Closer.
Until—
She gasped.
Her body jerked.
As if something had grabbed her.
Jose lunged forward, grabbing her arm.
“Let go!” he shouted into empty air.
For a moment, nothing happened.
Then Nancy screamed.
Her feet lifted off the ground. Just slightly.
Jose pulled harder, but it was like tugging against something impossibly strong.
Jonah stood frozen, eyes wide, watching the invisible struggle. Mary cowered behind him.
“Help me!” Jose yelled.
Jonah didn’t move.
He was staring into nothingness.
“Jose,” Jonah whispered.
Nancy started bleeding from her eyes, ears, and mouth. Her eyes went blank.
“Jose,” Jonah said again, voice trembling. “There’s—”
The lantern went out.
Darkness swallowed them whole.
In the black, the sounds multiplied.
Footsteps.
Breathing.
The slow scrape of wood.
And something else.
A voice.
Not spoken.
Not heard.
But understood.
"You weren't invited."
***
When the search party found the cabin three days later, it was empty.
No signs of struggle.
No footprints in the dirt outside.
No indication anyone had ever been there.
Inside, the table was set.
Four plates.
Four chairs.
Perfectly aligned.
Upstairs, the room was bare.
Except for the footprints.
Circling.
Waiting.
For the next uninvited guests.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
I'm a soon-to-be retired music educator. This is my 40th and final year at the same school. I enjoy writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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