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The Stalks

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By Sara WilsonPublished 5 months ago • 11 min read

"Hot damn, Baby! Sugar Island, you better be ready!" Terrell’s voice cracked across the upper deck, competing with the throb of the ferry’s engine. He leaned over the railing, grinning at the emerald smear of land rising from the Atlantic. "Look at this place! It’s a postcard... but with better odds of getting lucky." He winked.

"Keep yelling, T, maybe the sharks will hear you and come up for a snack," Jade said. She wiped a spray of salt water from her sunglasses and nudged Trent. "See? Better than staring at your phone waiting for a text that’s never coming."

Trent managed a weak smile. Beyond the white sand, the island was swallowed by vast, swaying walls of green. The sugar cane stalks were twelve feet high, rippling in the wind like a separate, terrestrial ocean. "It’s a lot of tall grass." Trent said as he rubbed his ring finger. He hated how his chest tightened whenever he thought about the night in the parking garage. He could still hear the shouting and the gun. He could still feel the way his whole body locked up. His wife never said the word “coward,” out loud, but he knew that's how she thought of him in the end.

"That’s the money, man," Emmett said, interrupting Trent's train of thought and pointing to a rusted freighter anchored a mile offshore. "The only reason ships even come out this far is to haul the cane. Otherwise, this place is totally off-grid."

"Perfect," Renee whispered, her head resting on Emmett’s shoulder, a small, coy smile playing at the sides of her lips. "Just us and the... sugar."

When they hit the private dock, the heat hit them like a sauna. It was thick, sweet, and smelled of fermentation. Terrell was the first one off, hooting as his boots hit the sand. Emmett and Renee followed, leaving Trent to wrestle with a caught strap on his duffel. A shadow fell over him. He snapped his head up, expecting Terrell’s mocking grin.

Instead, a girl stood a foot away. She was bronzed, her hair lightened to the color of straw, holding a shortboard under one arm. She watched him struggle with a blunt, quiet intensity.

Trent froze for half a second, his hands still tangled in the strap. It was the same useless stillness that had gripped him in the parking garage. That awful, instinctive pause before his brain caught up.

"You're doing it wrong," she said. She reached out, her fingers calloused and warm, and flicked the plastic buckle. It snapped into place instantly.

"Thanks," Trent managed. "I'm Trent."

"Willow," she said. Her gaze dropped to the faded tan line on his ring finger. She didn't smile, but she didn't look away. Her eyes lingered on his naked hand.

“You're alone,” she murmured, almost to herself.

Trent stiffened. “What?”

Willow blinked, expression smoothing. “Nothing.”

Terrell let out a piercing whistle. "Looks like Trent’s already got a fan club!"

Trent felt the heat climb his neck as Willow smirked.

The rental was a sprawling wood house on stilts over the dunes. Behind it, the cane fields started abruptly. They were a wall of sharp-edged leaves that whistled in the wind, a sound like a thousand knives being honed.

By afternoon, the group had settled. Terrell slammed an ice chest onto the porch and popped a beer. "No cell service, no emails. This was the move."

"Just drop it," Jade said, twisting open a peach wine cooler. She looked toward the fields. "Does it feel like the wind is only blowing back there?"

Terrell shrugged and took another swig of his beer.

Downstairs, Emmett and Renee wandered toward the edge of the stalks. They pushed through a narrow footpath, the serrated leaves brushing against their skin. The deeper they went, the more the light changed, filtering through the overhead canopy into a dim yellow.

"It’s so quiet," Renee whispered.

Every few steps, they passed rusted gears and grinding wheels half-swallowed by the soil. They were remnants of a colonial mill. Renee froze.

"What?" Emmett asked.

"I think someone’s watching us."

Emmett looked around. The cane was a solid wall. There was no wind in the clearing, yet a cluster of stalks ten feet away twitched. He took a step toward the sound. "Yo? Anyone there?"

Silence. Only the sound of their own breathing and the distant thud of the surf.

"Let’s go back," Renee urged. "That freaked me out."

As they turned, Renee tripped. She looked down at what had caught her foot. It wasn't a root. It was a pair of heavy work boots, caked in mud, tucked neatly under a grinding wheel as if someone had just stepped out of them. They were wet.

They hurried back to the beach. By the time they arrived, a bonfire was roaring. The smell of roasting fish filled the air, mixing with the cloying sweetness of the fields. The mood soured when two men emerged from the darkness of the inland trail. Paul and Liam were massive and had tan skin that looked like a tapestry covered in black-ink tattoos.

"Willow," Paul barked. He didn't look at the tourists. "Why you slummin' it with these losers?"

"I'm busy, Paul," Willow snapped. She leaned into Trent, her hand resting on his knee. Paul’s jaw tightened.

“You shouldn’t be out here after dark,” he muttered, eyes flicking toward the cane.

Willow’s smile was thin. “I’m not the one who needs to worry.” A loose cane leaf drifted on the wind and brushed Willow’s arm. Instead of falling, it clung to her skin for a moment like it recognized her before sliding off.

Liam spat on the ground, his eyes lingering on Renee’s neck. "Just make sure you stay on the sand, city boy," Paul sneered, looking at Terrell. "The cane belongs to the people who know what they're doin'. People get lost in the field. They don't always come back."

"Is that a threat, big man?" Terrell asked, standing up and puffing out his chest.

Paul let out a short laugh. "It’s a geography lesson. Free of charge."

The two men disappeared back into the dark.

"Creeps," Jade muttered, tossing a shell into her bag. "Willow, who are those guys?"

“Just locals,” Willow said.

Jade opened her mouth to press further, and Willow’s head snapped toward her with a sharpness that made Jade flinch.

Willow smiled again quickly and fixed her eyes on the flames.

"They’re protective of the harvest. Don't worry about them."

The next morning, Willow led them to a clinic tucked in a grove of banyan trees. "I have to check on my brother," she said. Inside, the air was cold and smelled of sterile gauze. In a back room, a man named Adam lay motionless. His body was a landscape of ruined burn scars and deep, knotted tissue that pulled at his features.

Willow stroked his arm. "Tourists left a bonfire burning near our house years ago. The wind carried it into the dry cane. The whole field went up like a bomb. My parents didn't make it. Adam... he tried to save them."

She turned to Trent. "People come here and treat the island like a playground. They don't realize how fast things burn. Places remember what people forget and my island keeps score."

Trent swallowed. The memory of the robbery pressed in on him. He hated remembering the way he just stood there, useless, while someone he loved begged for her life.

Willow’s gaze flicked to him, sharp and knowing.

“Some people freeze,” she said. “Meaning well doesn't save anyone.”

Outside, Terrell was already loud, breaking the silence. "Look at those two! You guys gonna get married in there?"

Trent laughed, the tension in his chest loosening. He looked at Willow and saw a vulnerability that felt real. He kissed her cheek. Willow pulled his face into her hands and pressed their lips together, her teeth grazing his bottom lip. Trent sighed as their warm, wet tongues danced.

"Yes!" Terrell laughed, clapping his hands.

Later, as the sun began to dip, Willow led Trent away from the nights blazing bonfire and into the heart of the sugar cane. The stalks were closing in around them until the rest of the world vanished. She didn’t have to push them aside, she just slipped between them like she knew exactly where the gaps were. Trent had to fight through the leaves, but Willow moved like the field parted for her. The air was thick with the sweet, fermented scent of bruised cane.

She pulled him toward her, her body hot and frantic. Trent felt her hands, rough and strong from years of surfing and harvesting, slide down his back, pulling him down into a bed of crushed, dry leaves. The cane stalks rattled above them like thousands of dry bones as he moved with her. She was aggressive, her teeth grazing his shoulder, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps against his ear. The friction of the sharp leaves against their skin and the overwhelming sweetness of the field made Trent feel completely consumed. She arched against him, her nails digging into his shoulders as the wind whipped through the stalks, a symphony of rustling green that muffled their moans until they both collapsed, breathless, into the dirt.

She stayed on top of him for a long time. "You're a good guest, Trent," she whispered.

For a moment, he let himself believe her. That he wasn’t the man who stood frozen while someone else suffered. That maybe someone could still see strength in him.

Finally, he laughed softly into her hair. "Thank you." He breathed. "You're a phenomenal host."

The storm hit that night with a rattle that shook the whole house. The freighter was gone and the ferry was days away. Terrell went down to the porch for more drinks.

The wind was howling. It was carrying the now familiar smell of the bruised sugar cane. He looked toward the tree line and saw a single, long-stemmed sugar cane stalk standing in the middle of the sand. Terrell frowned. The stalk seemed to be planted, its roots still wet with sap, as if someone had torn it straight from the field and driven it into the beach like a marker.

The insects had gone silent. Even the storm seemed to hold its breath. Terrell stepped closer, and the cane leaf fluttered once, brushing his arm like a warning . Pinned to the stalk with a rusty nail was Liam's severed ear.

A figure in a dark slicker emerged from the shadows under the stilts. A heavy-duty meat hook, attached to a nylon rope, swung through the air. It caught Terrell under the jaw, the metal point punching through his tongue. He tried to scream, but the sound was nothing more than a bubbling gurgle. The killer stepped forward and, with a curved fillet knife, opened Terrell's throat.

Jade saw the flash from the window. "Terrell!" She bolted toward the door, slipping in the mud as she hit the beach. She saw the blood mixing with the rising tide.

From the stalks, Paul stepped out, his face pale. "I didn't do it! You have to get out!"

A harpoon whistled through the rain. It caught Paul in the chest, the force slamming him back into the cane. He gasped once and went still. Jade turned to run, but a silhouette was already there. A mask made of bleached bone stared at her. The fillet knife zipped across her chest, leaving a shallow, agonizing cut before the killer moved in.

Emmett and Renee burst out of the house. They saw the carnage and turned toward the only cover they had, the sugar cane.

"In here!" Emmett yelled. They ran blindly, the stalks slapping their faces.

"Emmett, I can't breathe!" Renee sobbed.

They reached the clearing with the rusted gears. Emmett turned, holding a heavy rock. "Come on then!"

A harpoon flew from the green wall, catching Emmett in the foot. He went down with a scream. The killer stepped into the clearing and removed the mask. She walked slowly up to Emmet and pulled the harpoon from his foot before bringing it slamming down into his skull. Blood splattered everywhere and Renee screamed. She stumbled backward, her foot catching on a tangle of roots. The cane around the clearing leaned inward, their tips bowing like witnesses.

“Why?” she cried.

Willow didn’t answer at first. She touched one of the stalks, letting her fingers trail down its length.

“The cane remembers,” she said softly. “It always does.”

Tears were pouring from Renee's blood shot eyes.

"The island doesn't want you here," Willow said. Her voice was flat. "My parents are buried under these stalks. Adam is a walking scar because of people like you." She stepped over to Renee and drove the blade into her stomach with a practiced flick of her wrist. She slowly turned her head to the side, admiring her work, as she wiped the blood splatter from her face.

Willow ran toward the house, her own arm gashed and bleeding. She collapsed into Trent’s arms near the clinic. "He’s insane! Paul killed them all!"

Trent held her, but as he pulled her close, he felt something hard in her pocket. He reached in and pulled it out.

It was Jade’s shell bag. The one she’d been carrying all day. It was soaked in fresh blood.

Trent pushed her back. He looked at the cut on her arm. It was straight and clean. A harvest cut.

"Where are they, Willow?"

She didn't answer. She just watched him.

Trent backed away, turning and sprinting into the clinic. He ran to Adam’s room, looking for a weapon, anything.

Trent looked at Adam. The "burn victim" wasn't a vegetable. His eyes were open, tracking Trent with a terrifying, lucid hatred. Adam’s hand, hidden under the sheet, was gripped around a harpoon trigger.

Trent dove as the floorboards behind him creaked. Willow was there, sharpening the fillet knife on a whetstone. The sound of metal on stone grated against the thunder.

"He likes to watch," she said. "He remembers the tourists laughing while the house burned. I promised him I’d make the island quiet again."

"You killed them for a grudge they didn't even start."

"I saved the island, Trent." She lunged.

Trent ran, knocking the tray down behind him.

The chase went through the high stalks. Trent ran, finding the firmest ground by instinct. The serrated leaves tore at his skin as he scrambled through the brush. He reached the cliff’s edge.

Willow stepped out of the cane, lunging with unnatural speed. Trent didn't move away.

“You froze,” Willow hissed. “Just like before. Just like with her.”

Trent felt something inside him harden. “Not this time.”

He waited until the last second, grabbed her wrist, and used her momentum. He spun, putting his shoulder into her chest, and hurled her toward the ledge.

She didn't scream. She just watched him with those dark, calm eyes until the Atlantic swallowed her whole.

The ferry arrived two days later. The captain found Trent sitting on the pier. He didn't ask questions. Trent sat on the deck, staring at the green smudge of the island as it shrank. He looked at his hands. They wouldn't stop shaking. He had survived, but the salt water couldn't wash off the smell of the sugar.

He wondered if surviving counted as redemption, or if he’d only run again. The island shrank behind him, but Willow’s last words clung to him like humidity. A faint rustle drifted across the deck like cane leaves brushing together in the wind.

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    Written by Sara Wilson