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The Shadow Over Blackmore

Horror, Mistery

By ankan polleyPublished 2 years ago • 3 min read

Blackmore was a quiet English village tucked between rolling hills and dense woodland. It was the kind of place where life moved slowly and the past never quite faded. It had one pub, a crooked church, and a scattering of stone cottages that had stood for centuries. But Blackmere had a secret, whispered behind closed doors and never spoken beyond its borders.

When Jonathan Hargreaves arrived, he was unaware of the village’s dark history. A historian by trade, he had come to research the ruins of Blackmere Abbey, a monastery that had burned down in the 17th century under mysterious circumstances. The villagers were polite but distant, their smiles never reaching their eyes. He dismissed it as rural suspicion towards outsiders. But then, he met Edith Thatcher.

Edith was old, her skin like parchment and her fingers gnarled with age. She called him over one evening as he passed her cottage, her voice thin but urgent. “You shouldn’t be here,” she said. “The Abbey… it’s still awake.”

Jonathan smiled, indulging the superstition. “Buildings don’t wake up, Mrs. Thatcher.”

She shook her head. “Not the walls, boy. What’s beneath them.”

That night, Jonathan began his research, poring over ancient texts in the local archives. The Abbey had been destroyed in a fire in the crypts, but no records explained what had been kept below. The monks, it seemed, had been guarding something. Something old. Something dangerous.

Curiosity drove him to the ruins. By day, they were nothing more than moss-covered stones, with the remains of an altar barely visible among the ivy. But as dusk fell, a strange unease crept over him. He heard whispers on the wind, voices murmuring in a language he did not recognize.

Then, he saw it.

A figure stood among the ruins, its form shifting in the twilight, neither fully there nor absent. It had no face, only a dark void where features should have been. And it was watching him.

Jonathan stumbled back, his heart pounding. When he blinked, the figure was gone.

Back in the village, he found the streets empty. The doors were locked, curtains drawn. It was as if Blackmere had sealed itself against something unseen. Only Edith’s light burned, a flickering candle in the darkness.

He knocked frantically. She opened the door, her eyes grim. “You saw it, didn’t you?”

He nodded.

She led him inside and sat him by the fire. “The Abbey was built over something far older,” she explained. “A thing buried long before the first stone was laid. The monks knew and tried to contain it. But something went wrong.”

Jonathan swallowed hard. “What is it?”

She hesitated. “A shadow. Not a ghost, not a demon. It is a hunger-given form. It watches. Waits. And once it marks you… it does not let go.”

A cold dread settled over him. “How do I stop it?”

She gave him a sad smile. “You don’t.”

That night, Jonathan barely slept. The wind howled through the village, rattling windows and whistling through keyholes. In the early hours, a scream tore through the silence.

He bolted upright. It came from outside.

He ran through the empty streets to the ruins. There, in the moonlight, Edith lay sprawled across the stones, her face frozen in horror, her body twisted as if something had wrung the life from her. But it was not her broken form that made Jonathan tremble.

It was the shadow standing over her.

Closer now. Clearer. Its form flickered and pulsed, growing taller, stretching toward him. Tendrils of darkness curled from its body, reaching, seeking. It had no eyes, but he felt its gaze burrowing into his soul.

Jonathan turned and ran.

He fled through the woods, branches clawing at his face, his breath ragged. But no matter how far he ran, the whispers followed, pressing against his mind like fingers against glass.

By dawn, he reached the outskirts of the village. His car was where he had left it. He fumbled with the keys, started the engine, and didn’t look back.

Blackmere faded in the rearview mirror, but the fear did not.

He drove for hours, not stopping until he reached the city, the safety of crowds, electric lights, and steel buildings. But that night, as he lay in his bed, exhausted and trembling, he realized something chilling.

The whispers had followed him.

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    Written by ankan polley