Sera always avoided the old walking path behind her Greendale homestead.
Not because it looked dangerous — it didn’t. It was just a narrow dirt trail winding between tall pines, soft moss, and quiet undergrowth. Peaceful, even.
But the path had a reputation.
People said it didn’t stay the same.
Finch, her best friend, never believed any of it. “It’s a trail,” he’d laugh. “Trails don’t change.”
Tonight, he convinced her to walk it with him.
Just a short loop.
Just to prove nothing was wrong.
The air was thick with humidity, the kind that clung to skin and made every breath feel warm. Fireflies blinked lazily between the trees. The path stretched ahead, narrow and harmless.
Sera’s pulse was already uneasy.
“Relax,” Finch said, nudging her shoulder. “It’s just a walk.”
They walked for five minutes.
Ten.
Fifteen.
The path stayed straight, which was strange — it usually curved.
Sera slowed. “Finch… this isn’t right.”
He rolled his eyes. “It’s fine.”
But the trees were changing.
The bark grew darker.
The branches leaned inward.
The air grew colder, even though the night was warm.
Finch frowned. “Okay, that’s weird.”
The path narrowed.
Sera’s heartbeat quickened. “We should turn around.”
They turned.
The path behind them was gone.
Not twisted.
Not overgrown.
Gone.
Just trees.
Dense, silent trees.
Finch’s voice cracked. “Where— where’s the trail?”
Sera grabbed his hand. “We need to move.”
They walked forward, pushing through the narrowing path. The trees pressed closer, branches brushing their shoulders, their hair, their backs. The air smelled wrong — metallic, like old coins.
Finch whispered, “Do you hear that?”
Sera stopped.
There was a sound.
Not footsteps.
Not animals.
Not wind.
A soft, rhythmic clicking.
Like fingernails tapping wood.
Tap.
Tap.
Tap.
Her breath hitched. “Finch…”
The clicking grew louder.
Tap‑tap.
Tap‑tap‑tap.
Finch pulled her forward. “Go. Go now.”
They ran.
The path twisted sharply, forcing them left, then right, then left again. The trees blurred. The clicking followed, faster now, keeping pace with them.
Tap‑tap‑tap‑tap‑tap.
Sera’s lungs burned. Her legs shook. She didn’t dare look back.
The path opened suddenly into a clearing.
They stumbled into it, gasping.
The clearing was wrong.
Perfectly round.
Perfectly silent.
Perfectly still.
No insects.
No breeze.
No sound.
Finch bent over, hands on his knees. “What— what is this?”
Sera didn’t answer.
Because she saw something at the far edge of the clearing.
A figure.
Tall.
Bent.
Facing away from them.
Its limbs were too long.
Its spine curved like a question mark.
Its head tilted as if listening.
Tap.
The sound came from its hand.
Tap.
It tapped the trunk of a tree with one long finger.
Tap.
Finch whispered, “Sera… it’s marking something.”
The figure stopped tapping.
Slowly, it turned its head.
Not its body — just its head.
All the way around.
Facing them.
Sera’s heart slammed so hard she felt her vision blur. Finch grabbed her arm, pulling her backward.
The figure stepped forward.
Its legs didn’t bend right.
Its arms hung too low.
Its head stayed perfectly still, locked on them.
Tap.
It tapped the ground with its finger.
Tap.
The clearing darkened, shadows stretching unnaturally.
Tap.
The trees behind them shifted, closing in.
Finch screamed, “Run!”
They sprinted toward the opposite side of the clearing. The figure moved faster — not running, not walking, just appearing closer each time they blinked.
Tap.
It was ten feet away.
Tap.
Five.
Tap.
Two.
Sera tripped, hitting the ground hard. Finch grabbed her, pulling her up, dragging her toward a thin break in the trees.
They burst through it—
And stumbled onto the familiar dirt path.
The normal one.
The harmless one.
The fireflies blinked.
The air was warm again.
The trees looked ordinary.
Sera collapsed, sobbing. Finch held her, shaking.
Behind them, deep in the woods—
Tap.
Just once.
Soft.
Patient.
Waiting.
They didn’t stop running until they reached the edge of Sera’s yard. The porch light glowed like a beacon, warm and safe. Finch doubled over, hands on his knees, gasping.
Sera stared at the tree line.
Nothing moved.
Nothing clicked.
Nothing watched.
But she couldn’t shake the feeling that the woods were holding their breath.
Finch finally straightened. “We’re not going back there.”
Sera nodded, but her pulse didn’t slow. “Finch… it followed us.”
He swallowed hard. “I know.”
They went inside, locking the door behind them. Sera shut every curtain, every blind, every window. Finch paced the living room, running his hands through his hair.
“It wasn’t human,” he said. “It wasn’t— it didn’t move right.”
Sera sat on the couch, hugging her knees. “It wasn’t supposed to be there.”
Finch stopped pacing. “What do you mean?”
She hesitated. “My grandmother used to talk about the Quiet Path. She said it wasn’t a trail. She said it was a place that opened when something wanted to come through.”
Finch stared at her. “Come through from where?”
Sera shook her head. “She never said.”
The house creaked.
A normal sound.
A harmless sound.
But both of them jumped.
Finch moved to the window and peeked through the blinds.
The yard was empty.
He exhaled shakily. “Maybe it can’t leave the woods.”
Sera didn’t answer.
Because she heard something.
Faint.
Soft.
Barely there.
Tap.
Her blood ran cold.
Finch froze. “Sera… tell me that was the house.”
Tap.
This time it came from the back door.
Finch backed away. “No. No, no, no—”
Sera grabbed his arm. “Don’t speak.”
The tapping stopped.
Silence filled the house, thick and heavy.
Then—
Tap.
From the side window.
Tap.
From the front porch.
Tap.
From the roof.
Finch whispered, “It’s marking the house.”
Sera’s breath shook. “It followed us.”
The porch light flickered.
Once.
Twice.
Then went out.
The tapping stopped.
Sera and Finch stood in the dark, listening to the house breathe around them.
Then, from the woods, far away but unmistakable—
Tap.
A promise.
A reminder.
A patient, waiting sound.
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Elisa Wontorcik
Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.
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