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The Last Room

nightmare that ends where waking begins

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago 6 min read
Runner-Up in Out of the Dream Challenge

I was searching for a room I could no longer remember.

That certainty existed before anything else I could call thought. There was no memory of entering this place, no recollection of what came before, and no clear sense of identity beyond the motion of continuing forward. Even the idea of my name felt distant, like something written on a page I could no longer open. Still, the purpose remained intact with unsettling clarity: somewhere ahead lay a room I needed to reach, and everything about me moved in service of that single direction.

The passage stretched beneath a vaulted ceiling of pale stone marked by grooves that crossed and overlapped in dense patterns. At first glance, they resembled decoration, but the longer I studied them, the more they resembled something else entirely. The lines were uneven, sometimes shallow and controlled, sometimes deep enough to fracture the surface beneath. In places they converged so tightly that the stone appeared worn down by repetition rather than intention, as though pressure had been applied again and again across a span of time too long to measure.

Narrow alcoves lined both sides of the corridor at regular intervals. Each one contained a metal plaque mounted at eye level, and though I passed many before paying attention, repetition eventually forced me to slow. The first plaque I studied bore a name engraved with precise, careful lettering. Beneath it were two dates.

The first belonged to the distant past. The second belonged to a day that had not yet occurred.

I moved to the next alcove, expecting some variation, but found none. Another name. Another pair of dates. The same structure repeated endlessly, though the intervals between those dates varied in unsettling ways. Some suggested brief spans of life. Others implied impossible stretches. One indicated a final date only hours away. Another pointed toward a future so distant it no longer felt connected to time as I understood it.

As I continued forward, I began to notice a change that resisted immediate explanation. The plaques ahead appeared newer. The metal showed less wear. The engraving looked sharper, as though recently completed. Even the names began to feel less abstract, though I could not explain what that meant. It was as if I were moving toward something that was gradually aligning itself with my own existence.

The corridor itself seemed to tighten around me in subtle increments. The change was gradual enough to ignore at first, but undeniable once noticed. The distance between walls diminished slightly with each section passed, and the ceiling appeared to lower in relation to my position. I adjusted my pace without conscious decision, as though the structure itself was influencing how I moved through it.

Then I saw my name.

The recognition was immediate and absolute, arriving before thought could intervene. The plaque stood at eye level like all the others, yet it carried a weight of meaning that made everything around it feel momentarily distant. My name had been engraved into the metal with precision that left no room for doubt, including the irregular spacing I had always associated with it.

Beneath it were two dates.

The first matched the day I had been born.

The second matched the present day.

I remained still for a long time, trying to find any explanation that could survive contact with what I was seeing. Coincidence failed under its own specificity. Error failed under its precision. Even the possibility of illusion felt insufficient, because the plaque existed with a certainty that did not depend on interpretation. It was simply there, and it referred to me.

A low sound moved through the corridor then, emerging from the stone itself rather than any identifiable source. Dust drifted from the ceiling in slow trails. The grooves along the walls appeared deeper, as though pressure had shifted within the structure. A fracture formed beside the plaque, then extended outward in branching lines.

I turned away.

The corridor responded to my movement with a subtle but undeniable narrowing, as though the space itself were adjusting to ensure continued progression. What had once felt like a passage now resembled a channel that permitted only one direction of travel.

Eventually the corridor opened into a chamber so large that the shift in scale felt disorienting. The ceiling disappeared into darkness above, and immense pillars rose at irregular intervals throughout the space. Between them stood mirrors, hundreds of them, each differing in frame, condition, and placement. Some were intact and polished. Others were cracked or stained. A few had surfaces so distorted they seemed to refuse any stable reflection.

At first I studied them as objects, trying to determine pattern or purpose. What I found instead was inconsistency. Each mirror reflected the chamber differently, as though the space itself varied depending on the angle of observation. Some revealed structural details I could not see directly. Others showed arrangements that contradicted what I knew to be physically present. A few reflected nothing recognizable at all, offering only versions of the chamber that felt adjacent rather than identical.

Then movement appeared within one of them.

My reflection stood motionless at first, then shifted in a way that did not match my own movement. The delay was slight, yet unmistakable. When I raised my arm, the reflection followed a moment later. That moment of discrepancy broke something fundamental in the experience of seeing.

A second figure formed behind the first.

Then another.

They multiplied gradually, emerging from the reflective surface as though the mirror contained depth far beyond what its frame suggested. Each bore my face, yet none carried my stillness. Some appeared older, shaped by paths I could not recognize. Others appeared younger, as though they had taken directions I had not.

They all watched me.

Not with aggression.

With recognition.

And something close to understanding.

One of them raised a gesture toward a narrow opening between two mirrors at the far side of the chamber. I had not noticed it before. It blended so completely with the structure that it seemed absent until acknowledged. Now it stood out with undeniable clarity.

I moved toward it.

The passage beyond descended gently, carved from soil rather than stone. The transition felt like a shift in reality rather than architecture. The smell changed immediately, carrying a dense familiarity that stirred recognition without revealing source.

As I descended, objects began appearing embedded in the earth. A watch first, then fragments of paper, then items that felt increasingly personal. A ring partially exposed. A photograph folded and stained. A wallet pressed into the soil as though preserved by accident rather than intention.

The photographs drew my attention most. They showed moments I recognized with increasing clarity the longer I looked. A gathering of people around a table. A face I knew as my own, younger and unaware of what would follow. Another image showed a different setting entirely, yet carried the same sense of familiarity. The sequence suggested continuity, yet each fragment felt separated from the next.

The passage narrowed further as I continued downward. The space between walls diminished until movement required careful adjustment. Soil pressed closer from all sides, and the ceiling lowered until I found myself stooping to continue.

A realization formed slowly, resisting full acknowledgment.

This was no passage in the usual sense.

It resembled containment.

The narrowing continued until movement became restricted, not by resistance alone but by limitation of space itself. The walls closed in until contact became constant. Soil loosened intermittently from above, falling in small amounts that accumulated behind me.

Ahead, the passage ended.

A wooden surface blocked the way.

It took time to understand what I was seeing.

A coffin lay embedded within the earth, positioned so precisely that the tunnel appeared to terminate directly into it.

The sight removed any remaining uncertainty.

I moved forward.

The wood gave under pressure.

Everything collapsed.

I bolted upright.

For a brief instant, relief surged through me. Awareness returned with the certainty that the experience had ended, that what I had endured was confined to sleep or illusion.

Then my head struck something directly above.

Pain cut through the moment.

I reached upward.

Wood.

Above.

Around.

Beneath.

The space allowed no expansion beyond my own form.

A faint trickle of soil passed through a narrow gap overhead, followed by another, then another.

Understanding settled fully.

There had been no transition.

No separation between what I had experienced and what I now inhabited.

Only continuation.

I lay inside a coffin buried beneath the ground.

And above me, the world continued as though nothing within it had changed.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael