The Last Message
She texted her best friend goodnight. The problem was — her best friend had been dead for three days.

Maya had not slept in three days.
Not since the accident. Not since she stood at the edge of that rain-soaked road and watched the ambulance take Carrie away — sirens screaming, lights bleeding red into the wet asphalt, and nothing, absolutely nothing, she could do.
They had been inseparable since the fifth grade. Two girls who finished each other's sentences, who shared playlists and secrets and 2 a.m. conversations about things that didn't matter and everything that did. When people saw Maya, they looked for Carrie. When people called for Carrie, Maya answered. That was just how it worked.
Now Carrie was in a white box at Hendricks Funeral Home on Fifth Street, and Maya was sitting alone in her childhood bedroom, staring at her phone like it owed her something.
She hadn't deleted the thread. She couldn't. Twenty-two thousand messages. A decade of laughter compressed into a glowing rectangle she held against her chest at night like a wound she refused to let heal.
At 11:47 p.m., unable to sleep, Maya opened the thread one more time.
She scrolled up to the last message Carrie had ever sent — sent forty minutes before the crash, before the drunk driver ran the red light, before the world cracked clean in half.
"Goodnight, Maya. Love you to the moon 🌙"
Maya stared at it. Her throat tightened. She typed back, just like she had every night for the past three days, knowing it was irrational, knowing it was grief doing strange and terrible things to her mind.
"Goodnight, Carrie. Love you more."
She hit send. She watched the message deliver. She watched the little icon beneath it — the tiny circle with Carrie's face — glow to life.
And then it said: Read 11:49 p.m.
Maya's blood went cold.
She sat up straight, her heart slamming against her ribs. She blinked hard, certain she was hallucinating, certain exhaustion had finally broken something important inside her head. But the timestamp was still there. The "Read" receipt glowed back at her like an open eye.
Then the three dots appeared.
The typing indicator. Carrie's typing indicator. Those three small, bouncing, impossible dots.
Maya dropped the phone. It hit the floor screen-up, and she stood against her bedroom wall, pressing her back into the plaster, breathing in short, ragged pulls. She counted to five. She told herself: it's a glitch. It's the phone. It's nothing. It's nothing.
She picked the phone back up.
The message was there.
"Maya. Don't come to the funeral."
The room tilted. Maya sat down hard on the edge of her bed, her legs no longer capable of holding her upright. Her thumb hovered over the screen. Every rational thought she had ever owned told her to put the phone down, call someone, call her mother, call anyone.
She typed instead.
"Carrie?"
Three dots. Then:
"I'm not there. I'm not in that box. Please listen to me. You need to leave your house. Right now. Don't ask why. Don't pack anything. Just go."
Maya stood. She didn't know why. She crossed to her bedroom window and looked down at the quiet street below — the oak tree, the parked cars, the yellow circle of the streetlamp.
There was a man standing beneath it.
He was looking directly up at her window.
She did not recognize his face. But she recognized the jacket — brown leather, torn pocket, silver zipper. She recognized it because she had seen it on the security footage. The police had shown it to her three days ago, during the investigation.
It was the jacket of the drunk driver. The man who had killed Carrie.
The man who had been arrested. The man who was supposed to be in custody.
Her phone buzzed.
"He followed you home from the funeral home, Maya. He's been outside for two hours. I've been trying to reach you. GO."
Maya ran.
She did not look back at the window. She did not check if the man moved. She grabbed her keys, flew down the stairs, and burst out the back door into the cold night air, running until her lungs burned and the streetlamp was far behind her.
She never found out how Carrie's phone sent those messages.
Some things, the living are not meant to understand.
But she knew one thing, with absolute certainty, as she collapsed into a stranger's doorstep and dialed 911 with shaking hands —
Carrie had kept her promise.
"I'll always look out for you. No matter what."
About the Creator
Noman Afridi
I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.
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