The Hollow-Root Orchard
Not dangerous in the obvious way.
The orchard behind the old farmhouse had always been wrong.
Not dangerous in any obvious way. Just wrong in the quiet, persistent manner of something pretending to be harmless. The trees grew too close together, their trunks bowed inward like they were listening. Their roots curled above the soil like knuckles. And at night, the orchard made sounds—soft, deliberate sounds—like something shifting its weight.
Lisa had lived on her one‑acre homestead long enough to know when land was trying to tell her something. But she had ignored the orchard for years. Until the night the roots started moving.
It began with a thud against the back wall of the farmhouse. Then another. Then a dragging sound, like something heavy being pulled across the yard. When she stepped outside with her flashlight, the beam caught a shape retreating into the orchard—low to the ground, pale, and disturbingly smooth.
She should have gone back inside. Locked the door. Called someone.
Instead, she followed.
The orchard swallowed her quickly. The air was colder here, damp enough to cling to her skin. The trees leaned in, branches creaking softly, as if whispering to one another. Her flashlight flickered, then steadied, illuminating a narrow path she had never seen before.
Halfway down the path, she found the first hollow.
A tree trunk split open like a ribcage, its interior scooped out. Inside lay a pile of objects: a child’s shoe, a cracked mason jar, a rusted pocketknife, and a small wooden carving of a rabbit. She recognized the carving—it was one she had made years ago and lost.
The orchard had taken it.
Her breath fogged in front of her. The air tasted metallic.
Something moved behind her.
She spun, flashlight trembling. The beam caught a figure crouched between two trees. It was the pale shape she’d seen earlier—small, childlike, but wrong in every proportion. Its limbs were too long. Its head too smooth. Its mouth too wide.
And it was smiling.
Lisa stumbled back. The creature tilted its head, curious, then scuttled sideways into the dark with a speed that made her stomach drop.
She should have run. She knew that. But the orchard felt alive now, pulsing with a slow, rhythmic thrum beneath her feet. And something in that thrum felt familiar—like a heartbeat she had once known.
She followed the creature deeper.
The path narrowed until she had to push branches aside. The trees here were enormous, their trunks swollen and split, each hollow filled with objects—photographs, toys, scraps of clothing, even a cracked phone she recognized as her daughter’s old one.
The orchard had been collecting her family.
The thrum grew louder.
She stepped into a clearing.
At the center stood the largest tree she had ever seen. Its trunk was split open from root to crown, forming a cavernous hollow. Inside, something glowed faintly—warm, pulsing light, like embers breathing.
The pale creature crouched beside the hollow, watching her with wide, unblinking eyes.
Lisa stepped closer.
Inside the hollow lay a shape.
Human.
Her breath caught. The shape was curled on its side, facing away from her. Hair matted. Clothes torn. Skin pale.
She reached out, trembling.
The shape turned.
It was her.
Her own face stared back at her from inside the tree—eyes sunken, lips cracked, skin stretched thin over bone. Her double opened its mouth, and a sound spilled out, soft and wet, like roots tearing through soil.
“Help… me…”
Lisa staggered back. The creature beside the hollow clicked its teeth, excited.
Her double reached out with a trembling hand. Its fingers were long, bark‑thin, and tipped with rootlike tendrils.
“Come… back…”
The orchard throbbed around her, the trees leaning in, branches creaking in anticipation.
Lisa turned to run.
The roots rose.
They burst from the soil like grasping hands, wrapping around her ankles, her calves, her wrists. She fell hard, the flashlight skittering away. The pale creature crawled onto her chest, its weight impossibly heavy for its size. Its face hovered inches from hers, mouth stretching wider, wider, until it split at the cheeks.
The orchard whispered.
The roots pulled.
She was dragged toward the hollow, her nails tearing against the soil. Her double reached out, smiling now, its teeth sharp and wooden.
“Come home.”
The roots lifted her into the hollow.
The pale creature followed, crawling over her body, settling beside her like a child curling up to sleep. The tree closed around them, bark knitting shut, sealing her inside.
Darkness swallowed her.
The thrum became her heartbeat.
The orchard sighed.
At dawn, the farmhouse looked peaceful again. The orchard stood still, quiet, innocent.
A single pale creature crawled out from between the trees. It stood upright now, its proportions more human. Its face more familiar.
It walked toward the farmhouse with steady steps, wearing Lisa’s clothes, carrying Lisa’s keys, moving with Lisa’s gait.
Behind it, deep within the largest tree, something new began to grow.
Something with her voice.
Something with her memories.
Something waiting.
About the Creator
Elisa Wontorcik
Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.
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