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The Forgotten Dark Town

A Town Of Blood

By Maleko KamahalohanuilaiPublished 3 years ago 4 min read
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The sound of the rain hitting the ground counties thru the night. The cold air blew and howled as i recover my sights. Upon opening my eyes every thing is a blur. I lay face down in a puddle with blood, cuts and bruises from a night i'll never forget.

The Beginning of the Night

You could tell that there was something odd about this place and not only that you could feel this unwelcome presence in the air as we approach this abandon town. We enter the building that was the closet to where we was not knowing what awaited us in this dark forgotten town. Inside of the building was dark, damp, cold and from the dark corners you can feel eye's staring at you and some times i felt like someone or something was breathing on my shoulder making me look over my shoulder and nothing being there. As i keep walking i can feel my body getting this chill feeling that sparks a little fear in me causing my body to slightly tremor. Then i became even more caution in what i did besides shining my flash light all over the place thinking that i see something hiding in the dark. That's when it happened, the beginning of a never ending night.

One Hour Into the Night

I try to tell them lets turn around but being as drunk as they where my words fell on deaf ears and they continues to goof off like they where in a horror movie. They played pranks on each other and made jokes then James tells everyone to quite down and listen, as the room stood silence James made a loud banging noise scaring the whole group then he started laughing... but what took place after was the star of a horror movie. A little girls voice from out of nowhere whispered loud enough for us to hear her say "know that looks like fun can i play". James jumped real quick and flashed his light to the left then to the right, where is she he yelled before he looked at me and asked if i heard her as well? I looked at him and nodded yes in agreement to him. Then a gust of wind blew thru the building and you can hear the humming of a nurser rhyme coming from a little girl. It echo all around us mixed with laughter from multiply kids that we couldn't see but you could feel that thy were there around you. The voice of the little girl from earlier repeats what James told the group before whit a creep scary voice. "quite down everyone and listen". Once she said that the humming and laughter came to a complete stop and silence filled the air. At that moment we grabbed flares and lit them to give us better lighting around us. Then a chuckle sound could be heard before James was lift into the air and thrown into the ground head first. The sound of his neck breaking could be heard from all of us and in that moment we screamed, and ran in different direction out of panic. When i came to a complete stop Lisa and Jon was the only person with me. As we caught our breath you could hear screams coming from other's from the group.

Mid Night

We decided to find a spot to hold up in til sunrise cause it was pitch dark and our flash light was running low, also none of us wanted to be wondering around in this dark forgotten town. We were far from being safe. It started with Jon, slashes marks across his chest then across his face Lisa took off once she noticed it and i ran after her thinking that Jon would follow but when i looked back i could see Jon trapped, I watched frozen as the Jon gets multiply cuts all over his body trying to escape. Lisa grabs me by my arm and yells come on we got to go and as i turn towards her direction i can see a tall deformed looking creature in the shadow behind her then her head slid off her shoulder falling to the ground. The only thing that ran thru my head at that moment was to move cause i was frozen stiff. Boom i was blasted thru a building getting multiply injuries. I was certain i was a goner then that little girls voice spoke again and said let him live, i had fun tonight and he will bring even more fun to our town was the last thing i heard before passing out.

The sound of the rain hitting the ground counties thru the night. The cold air blew and howled as i recover my sights. Upon opening my eyes every thing is a blur. I lay face down in a puddle with blood, cuts and bruises from a night i'll never forget.

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