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The Flashlight (Part Two)

The Homecoming

By Rick Henry Christopher Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 8 min read
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Here is the link to The Flashlight (Part One) for those of you who may have not read it yet. The Flashlight Part One (Click Here)

The Flashlight (Part Two)

It's 6 a.m. on Tuesday morning. Ididoro Bellio has been awake for 20 minutes. He's dressed in his sweatsuit and running shoes. Isidoro is ready to take his early morning jog throughout his middle-class suburban neighborhood in Santa Ana, California.

Isidoro, age 35, lives the American Dream as he peeks into his 15-year-old daughter's bedroom before leaving for his jog. Isidoro thought, "She looks sweet and safe in her warm, cozy bed," as he gulped down a sip of water and walked out the front door for his jog.

As Isidoro stepped out onto the porch a strong gust of wind hit him hard, knocking him off-balance. He fell, hitting the ground, and blacked out.

When he awoke he found himself back inside the darkened, plywood box in which someone, or something, imprisoned him. Isidoro was experiencing flashbacks to the day that his daughter, Alexia, died. When he realized he was still in the box he began pounding his hands on the plywood surface yelling out, "Let me out of here! I want to see my daughter!"

"I want to see my daughter! I want to see my daughter!" Isidoro kept yelling when suddenly he heard a loud pounding on the top of the box. It sounded as if someone was hitting the box with a heavy chain repeatedly. Then he felt a rocking motion. Back and forth, back and forth, it became more and more forceful and pronounced. Isidoro was aboard the sinking USS Partridge (AMS-31/YMS-437). He could feel the vessel rocking and tilting. "I can't breathe! Help me, someone! I can't breathe!" Once again Isidoro blacked out as he felt the ocean water rising upon his body.

When he came to, he was once again lying in quiet, dark solitude. His stomach was queasy, and his mouth was parched. His mind was hazy, and he wasn't sure where he was.

His left hand was tightly clenched. He tried opening his hand, but it must have been clenched for such a long time because his fingers felt like they were frozen shut. He wiggled each finger until he was able to slowly open his hand. Inside his hand was the flashlight locket he bought for his daughter when she was five years old.

He tried squeezing the plastic locket so it would light but the battery inside must have been weak. All he got was a dim flicker of light, and then it went out for good. This brought tears to his eyes as the light from the locket was the last grasp he had of Lexi's existence, and now that was gone.

Suddenly, Isidoro felt movement. He heard wheels moving. He wondered if the plywood box was on some sort of cart being pushed to another area. When the movement stopped Isidoro could hear the muted sound of people talking, maybe five or six people. Isidoro's mind became foggy, and he blacked out again.

When Isidoro woke up it was once again quiet. He felt groggy, as if he had been drugged. He was lightheaded and the back of his head felt like it had been banged up against a wall. He had such a sharp, throbbing pain. It was unbearable. Then in a flash the pain subsided. It was odd but he felt at peace. A sort of happy feeling came over him. Kind of like that feeling he'd get after drinking a few beers on a lazy, sunny afternoon.

Isidoro’s mind drifted. He was cooling down from his 35-minute jog. He was now briskly walking Eastbound on 17th street heading toward Lynnwood where he lived with his wife and daughter.

In his mind Isidoro was going over what he would do once he was back home. Take a quick shower and dress casually for a nice afternoon with Lexi. Then cook a scrambled eggs and bacon breakfast for the two of them. Isidoro's wife, Betty, was out of town visiting with her mom. So he and Lexi were left to cook and clean for themselves. This was fine as Isidoro aspired to be a chef and loved cooking. But he retired in 1951 at the age of 21 due to a severe brain injury he incurred while in the US Navy. He was on the USS Partridge which sank on February 2, 1951. As the shipped tilted and began rapidly sinking his body was forced across the cabin where he banged his head hard against a wall. His head split open, and he ended up in the hospital for several months.

When Isidoro made it back home he yelled out from the living room, "Get up out of bed, Lexi. I'm gonna take a shower, then cook us some breakfast." He walked over to her bedroom to wake her up. When he made it to her room Isidoro was shocked when he saw Lexi's body on the ground face down. It looked like a struggle. Her sheets were all twisted. He knelt next to her and shook her in hopes of waking her. But there was no response. He quickly ran to the kitchen and picked up the phone and dialed “0” for the operator. "Operator, please connect me to the police department! Something has happened. I think my daughter has been murdered!”

Within 10 minutes two police officers showed up at the house. Soon afterwards a team of crime scene investigators and a coroner arrived.

It was quickly determined that there was no evidence of a crime. The coroner stated her death was due to suffocation. Not by choking or by any force. He explained that something happened while she was sleeping to cause her airway to become obstructed. The coroner called her death at 6:25 a.m. on Monday, June 28, 1965. A few minutes later an ambulance arrived to take Lexi's body to the coroner's office.

The adrenaline rushed through Isidoro's body, and his head was throbbing with pain. He was lying there, trapped inside this boarded up plywood box, and he began shouting out, "No, no, please don't take her away! Don't take my baby from me. She can't, she can't leave!" He kept shouting this as visions of that day kept flashing through his mind. Isidoro began sobbing quietly as he hit his fists against the floor of the plywood box. He kept pounding and pounding uncontrollably until his fists became raw and riddled with pain. "I just want to die," Isidoro faintly gasped as he passed out from the trauma of this experience.

The faint sound of voices surrounding him woke Isidoro. He couldn't understand what they were saying. But it sounded as if one person mentioned his daughter, Lexi. He heard someone say something about the Korean war and the sinking ship. He realized they were talking about him.

Isidoro tried calling out to let them know he was there inside the darkened plywood box. These voices were different from the ones he heard a few days back. They were human voices. He tried banging on the floor of the box, but he couldn’t move. It's as if he was paralyzed. He couldn’t talk or move. An immense fear came over him thinking that he would never be rescued and would die inside the box hungry and thirsty.

The voices came within earshot and Isidoro could now clearly hear every word they were saying.

"His body was twitching as he went in and out of consciousness. He was yelling for his daughter," said one of the voices. A softer, feminine voice responded, "Yes, his daughter, Alexia, experienced an epileptic seizure while sleeping. The muscles in her throat became stiff which blocked her windpipe causing her to suffocate to death."

There was a pause in the conversation. During this time Isidoro could hear what sounded like the movement of some sort of wheeled carts.

A husky deep voice spoke. "Mr. Bellio has been completely blind for almost a year now. His blindness was caused by an occipital lobe tumor which was diagnosed after he went blind." This shocked Isidoro. "I'm blind," he thought to himself. "Why? Why is this happening to me?"

The husky voiced man continued talking, "The tumor has caused him to become delusional. A few days ago he was tapping out S.O.S. in morse code on his bed." "Bed?" Isidoro was startled. He thought, "But I'm lying in a plywood box. I'm not on a bed."

"And he thinks he is lying inside a crated plywood box," the feminine voice stated. "When he first got here he was talking about how he had worked 16 days in a row then went hiking. Right away I knew he was delusional because he never worked. He retired at the age of 21. I don't think he realizes he is in the hospital." Stunned by this revelation Isidoro did not know what to think. He was confused. "How can I be in the hospital when I've been in this plywood box?" Isidoro tried yelling out to the people talking but nothing came out. He tried shaking his fists to get their attention but was unable to move. "What's going on?" he thought.

Isidoro could hear the shuffling of paper and then an Asian male voice spoke. "Mr. Bellio has been in this vegetative, comatose state now for 52 hours. He has shown no motor response to any of the tests we've done on him. At his advanced age the possibility of him waking from this coma is less than 3%.”

Isidoro went into shock. His breath became shallow. He began to choke and stopped breathing, despite being on a ventilator.

The staff of nurses and doctors that had been caring for Isidoro ran into his room when they heard his monitor beeping. One of the doctor's shouted out, "He's flatlined!"

The head doctor pressed the defibrillator paddles against his chest and sent an electrical shock to his heart. But nothing happened. His body did not respond. The doctor then opened his mouth to see if anything was obstructing his trachea. The muscles in his throat became rigid, when he went into shock, causing the blockage of the trachea. Like his daughter, Isidoro suffocated to death.

The doctor called his death at 7:15 p.m. on Wednesday, October 13, 2021. Today was his 91st birthday.

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About the Creator

Rick Henry Christopher

Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.

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  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Aha. Now that was a twist. I did a part one, so I must do a great twist in my part 2. Hopefully if fits the category of the challenge,

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    A very sad but riveting story, Rick. Well done!

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    That was a twist I didn't see coming. Well done, Rick. Well done.

  • River Joyabout a year ago

    What vivid imagery and location. I did not see the twists coming! I really enjoyed this, it kept me captured in both parts.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Love the build, and reality factor mixed with a little of everything from sci-fi to mystery. Excellent

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Amazing!!! A beautiful story

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Asian voice or Asian accent ? Very sad story 😔

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    This is so well done. Great twist. You told a life story in a few words. Loved it.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Oh wow, I did not see those twists coming! What a roller coaster of emotions for Isidoro and the reader. Great work keeping the tension high and the reader engaged :)

  • Loved the suspense! I was as confused at Isidoro was and I gasped at the revelation. A very gripping story with an excellent plot twist! You did a fantastic job on this one!

  • That was so good. I was wrapped up in the nature scene,utter relaxation , and then wow a complete mood change on the part of the reader in the next section. Nice descriptions make the reader feel the story

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