The Cabin of Silence
Be Silent or Be Silenced

The cabin in the woods had been abandoned for years, but one night, a candle burned in the window.
Logan 11.12 p.m.
Dude, we’ve been over this a million times! Just go in already! 🙄
Hayden 11.13 p.m.
It’ll take years for me to explore the cabin if I can only make 1 step every 2 seconds.
Logan 11.13 p.m.
God! Are you some special kind of stupid?! It’s called ‘The Cabin of Silence’ for a reason!
Hayden 11.13 p.m.
Those are just stories that were made up. The Witch isn’t real!
Logan 11.14 p.m.
Then why are you afraid to go in? Plus, I’m gonna be here by this tree until you come back out. Let me know if you see anything unusual and I’ll come in.
Hayden 11.14 p.m.
I’M NOT AFRAID! GOING IN NOW!
Logan 11.14 p.m.
Finally! Make sure your phone is in silent mode and turn off your vibration as well.
Hayden 11.15 p.m.
Don’t worry, I’m way ahead of ya!
Logan 11.21 p.m.
See anything yet? 👀
Hayden 11.28 p.m.
Dust. Thick layers of dust. Cobwebs. Doesn’t look like the cabin has been used for many years.
Logan 11.28 p.m.
The candle certainly didn’t light itself, did it? Do you try hard to be stupid or is it effortless?
Hayden 11.29 p.m.
SHUT UP! I’M DONE! I’LL FIND SOME OTHER WAY TO MAKE IT UP TO YOU!
Logan 11.29 p.m.
That’s not your decision to make. I still have that video of you. If you don’t want me to post it on Instagram, do as I say.
Hayden 11.30 p.m.
Alright, alright! Well, there’s nothing much really. Just a wooden table and four wooden chairs.
Logan 11.30 p.m.
Come on, dude. You gotta do better than that!
Hayden 11.31 p.m.
I can only move at a snail’s pace! Deal with it!
Logan 11.31 p.m.
Sorry, I forgot, my bad. Hey, did you put the tape over your mouth? Just a small sound is enough to make the Witch appear in front of you.
Hayden 11.39 p.m.
There. Is. No. Witch. But despite it being eerily silent, I can sense some movement.
Logan 11.40 p.m.
How’s that possible?
Hayden 11.41 p.m.
I can see shadows cast by the candlelight. The shadows seem to be moving.
Logan 11.41 p.m.
Well, go on then, see where it is coming from!
Hayden 11.42 p.m.
Wait a sec. Aren’t you gonna come in?
Logan 11.42 p.m.
Nah! I lied about that. Lol! 😝
Hayden 11.43 p.m.
Fine! It seems like it’s coming from the kitchen.
Logan 11.43 p.m.
I hate that you can only move so slow. I’m dying to know what’s going on in there.
Hayden 11.47 p.m.
Dude…
Logan 11.47 p.m.
What?
Hayden 11.51 p.m.
I made a mistake. I mean not purposely. It was an accident.
Logan 11.51 p.m.
Shit! Did you make a noise?
Hayden 11.51 p.m.
Worse. I slipped on something wet and fell. Now the Witch is towering over me.
Logan 11.51 p.m.
Heyyy, I didn’t know you could make jokes! But now’s not the time.
Hayden 11.55 p.m.
The Witch dragged me into the kitchen. Surprisingly, she didn’t take away my phone.
Logan 11.55 p.m.
Dude, you gotta stop this. The story isn’t real and the Witch isn’t real. You yourself said so.
Hayden 11.56 p.m.
Yes, yes I did. But I never said the Warlock isn’t real.
Logan 11.56 p.m.
Lol, you gotta do better than that if you wanna scare me! So, who’s this so-called Warlock?
Hayden 11.56 p.m.
Me!
Logan 11.56 p.m.
LOL! That’s the funniest thing ever! 🤣🤣🤣
Hayden 11.56 p.m.
I was so sick of you bullying me. I wanted to do something to make you stop pushing me around.
Logan 11.57 p.m.
So, you became the Warlock? Lol! 🤣
Hayden 11.57 p.m.
You’d be surprised at how easily witchcraft can be learned from the dark web.
Logan 11.58 p.m.
Dude, I’m getting sick of your bullshit!
Hayden 11.58 p.m.
I know how obsessed you are with this cabin. So, I decided to use those made-up stories to my advantage. I conjured the candle in the window. I knew you wouldn’t be able to resist.
Logan 11.59 p.m.
If you don’t cut the crap and come out right now, I’m leaving without you!
Hayden 11.59 p.m.
I’m already out.
Logan 11.59 p.m.
Yeah, right! I’m looking at the cabin door and I didn’t see you come out.
Hayden 12.00 a.m.
Turn around. I’m behind you. And it’s your last day to live.
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Chat fiction stories are presented as digital text conversations between two or more characters, without any narration. The format limits possible storytelling options, and presents a challenge to authors in conveying narrative only through dialogue. Most popular stories are of the horror and thriller genres.
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Comments (21)
Brilliant! I love the way you creatively wrote this as a text chat, and the twist at the end was spine tingling. Incredibly well done!
YOU HAVE A TRUE GIFT KEEP WRITING!!!!
Gurl you truly tapdanced on this genre! Awesome work!!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Wow nice twist at the end. I love the chat storytelling! ❤️
Well done. Interesting chat story dialog. Good job!!!
Great read!
Interesting concept! I like that you times it to conclude at midnight!
Nice one. I write a lot of character driven stories with little or no narrative at all. I find it an awesome way of having to use your creativity to tell the story the way you would like to. Nice job my friend.
Great job. Intriguing methodology. This is a new format for me. The story is very good.🥰
Fantastic and scary! Great horror story.👏💖💕
I've seen a few text-based stories in ads, and I've always liked them. They let your imagination run wild, which is a bonus (from my view). Well done!
Different and refreshing!
That was great. Well done.
A nicely written piece right here!
Great job at the style! Loved this!
This was so much fun in a creepy, scary way!! I've never read chat fiction before, but I've seen it mentioned. I think you did a great job with it :)
Wow... I didn't expect that! I enjoyed reading it. ❤️
This is fabulous 🖤 I appreciate how challenging this format is, and you absolutely nailed it!
It's a fascinating take to do it in a chat. Took me awhile to catch on to the format though so perhaps for some readers it may have been easier to set up that it was a chat from the start. The revelation that it is a revenge story really works, but it could have been more powerful if that got explored more - to truly see his bullying of her and how much it upsets her and has pushed her to do what she does. Good job though!
Wow this is brilliant my friend. I’m speechless…….just WOW!
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Ooh , great take on this, chat fiction can be challenging and you hit it perfectly