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The Abandoned Asylum

Leave This Place Before It's Too Late

By Gina MelindaPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
The Abandoned Asylum
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The wind howled through the barren trees, their skeletal branches scraping against the dark, foreboding sky. The air was heavy with a sense of dread as Sarah and her friends approached the decaying building that loomed before them. It was the abandoned asylum, a place rumored to be haunted by the tormented souls of its past inhabitants.

They had heard the stories, the whispers of the asylum's dark history. It was said that the asylum had been a house of horrors, a place where the mentally ill were subjected to cruel experiments and unspeakable cruelty. The building had been abandoned for decades, but its sinister reputation remained.

As they approached the entrance, the group of friends exchanged nervous glances. Sarah, the bravest of the bunch, took a deep breath and pushed open the creaking door. It swung open with an eerie groan, revealing a long, dimly lit hallway that seemed to stretch on forever. The walls were lined with peeling wallpaper, and the floor was littered with broken glass and debris.

"Are we really doing this?" whispered Mark, his voice quivering with fear.

"We've come this far," Sarah replied, her determination masking her own unease. "Let's just explore a bit and see if there's anything to these stories."

With cautious steps, they ventured further into the asylum. The air grew colder, and an oppressive silence enveloped them. It was as if the very walls of the building were watching, waiting for intruders to disturb their slumber.

They entered a room that appeared to have once been a patient's cell. The walls were covered in disturbing etchings and scratches, and a rotting mattress lay in one corner. As they examined the room, a sudden noise made them jump. It was a faint, ghostly whisper that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once.

"Did you hear that?" Sarah asked, her heart pounding in her chest.

The others nodded, their faces pale with fear. They continued to explore, their footsteps echoing in the empty halls. As they moved deeper into the asylum, they began to notice more unsettling signs of its dark past. Bloodstains on the floor, shackles attached to the walls, and rusted surgical instruments left a chilling impression.

"I don't like this," said Emily, her voice quivering. "We should go back."

But before they could retreat, they heard it again – the whispering. It was louder now, more insistent, and it seemed to be coming from the end of the hallway. They followed the sound, their fear driving them forward.

They reached a door that was slightly ajar, and the whispering was coming from inside. Sarah pushed the door open slowly, revealing a small, dimly lit room. In the center of the room was an old wooden chair, and in the chair sat a figure, its back to them.

"Who's there?" Sarah called out, her voice trembling.

The figure slowly turned around, and what they saw made their blood run cold. It was a gaunt, emaciated man with hollow eyes and a twisted, malevolent grin. He raised a finger to his lips, urging them to be silent.

"Get out," he hissed, his voice a nightmarish whisper. "Leave this place before it's too late."

The friends wasted no time. They turned and fled, their footsteps echoing through the asylum as they ran for their lives. The whispers followed them, growing louder and more sinister with each step. They burst through the front door and into the cold night, gasping for breath.

As they stood outside, trying to catch their breath, they looked back at the asylum. The windows glowed with an otherworldly light, and the whispers continued to fill the air. They knew they had encountered something truly evil within those walls, something that should never have been disturbed.

From that day forward, they never spoke of their harrowing experience in the abandoned asylum. But the memory of the gaunt man's twisted grin and the haunting whispers would haunt their dreams for the rest of their lives. They had ventured into a place where the darkness of the past still clung to the present, and they had narrowly escaped with their sanity intact.

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Gina Melinda

Hi, I am a new writer. I apologize if there are still many shortcomings in writing stories. I will strive to continue to learn to write. Please kindly leave suggestions and criticisms for me to become a better writer. Thank you

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    Written by Gina Melinda