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Revenge in the Dark

A Love Story Transformed into a Nightmare

By Satnam GautamPublished 2 years ago • 3 min read
Haunted by broken promises, Evan finds himself face-to-face with the past he thought he buried. Some vows can never be escaped… even in death.

The rain poured harder as Evan stared at his wife, the comforting warmth of her arms feeling suddenly wrong—ice-cold, rigid. Her lips curved into a haunting smile, her eyes impossibly dark. He stumbled back, heart racing, as she whispered, “You’ve come back… at last.”

“Stop it, Mia. What’s going on?” His voice cracked, a blend of confusion and dread thickening in his throat.

Her expression shifted, and her eyes narrowed, something cruel sparking in their depths. “You never kept your promises, Evan. You forgot what you did.” Her voice had an edge, an almost feral undercurrent that wasn’t hers. She took a step forward, her movements eerily fluid.

Evan backed away, barely processing her words, his mind racing to understand. Mia was always gentle, calm—this, whatever this was, felt like a waking nightmare.

A strange glimmer flashed in her eyes. “Didn’t think I’d find you, did you?”

“What… what are you talking about?” His voice was barely a whisper, but she just grinned wider, closing in on him until he was pressed against the wall, her breath cold against his face.

“Tell me, Evan, how many lives have you ruined? How many promises broken?” Her hands, cold and claw-like, trailed along his neck. The touch made his skin crawl as memories bubbled up—faces he’d long forgotten, places he’d erased from his mind. He shook his head, horrified.

The lights flickered, and a new darkness seemed to envelop the room. His surroundings started shifting—the cozy walls of his home peeling away, revealing damp stone and old, scratched wood. His living room had transformed into a decaying cabin, one he hadn’t seen in years.

“No, no… this isn’t real,” he murmured, pressing himself further into the wall, his breaths shallow.

But there she was, now standing by the rotting window, staring out at the mist-covered woods. She turned, her eyes glistening with memories. “You promised me forever, Evan,” she hissed, her voice twisting into a mix of Mia’s and someone else’s. “Remember our nights by the lake? The vows you broke? The body you left behind?”

The pieces clicked, the horror of it making his blood run cold. Clara—his first love. Years ago, a night of drunken passion had turned to betrayal, then fury. Their last encounter by the lake had ended in screams, a struggle, and an icy silence that still haunted his dreams.

“No… you’re… you’re dead,” he stammered, horrified.

Her face twisted, the once-beautiful features now shifting between Mia’s and Clara’s, a grotesque mix of memories and revenge. “Dead, yes… but bound to you.” She approached him, a dangerous glint in her eyes. “For as long as you breathe, I am part of you, and I’ll take what’s owed.”

He tried to run, but the door slammed shut, trapping him inside. The walls seemed to pulse, breathing like a living entity, sealing him in with her rage. Her cold hands gripped his face, forcing him to meet her gaze. “We made a pact by the lake, Evan. Remember what you said?”

“I-I don’t remember!” he choked, panic spiraling.

“You said we’d be together forever. Even in death.” Her voice, laced with venom, sent a shiver down his spine. Her face, contorted with fury, grew closer until he felt her icy breath on his lips.

Without warning, she kissed him, and he felt his chest tighten, his very soul being siphoned away. His memories flashed before him—her laughter, the warmth of their nights together, and finally, the horror of that last night. He was drowning, trapped in the darkness of his past.

When she pulled away, he collapsed to the floor, gasping for air. His heart pounded, weakened, and as he looked up, she smirked, her form fading into the shadows.

“See you soon,” her voice whispered from the darkness. The walls returned to normal, and Evan found himself alone, the night’s events pressing down on him like a curse.

The phone in his pocket buzzed, and with trembling hands, he pulled it out. It was a text from his wife: “I’ll be home in a few hours. Everything okay?”

But when he looked around, he saw a message written on the mirror in dripping red: “Until death do us part, Evan.”

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    Written by Satnam Gautam