Objectified
A seductive supernatural thriller
Brian and Dan are hanging out at their favorite club The Night Life looking for a good time. “A lotta potential here tonight, ay Danny boy?” Brian starts. “Sure is, blow job Brian.” Danny jokes. “The only thing blowin’ me is one of these baddies by the end of the night.” Dan replied. Dan and Brian warped their way across the packed dance floor. “Yo, are we running a train tonight?” Brian asked. Dan then gave him a mischievous grin of confirmation. “You damn right we are. Don’t we always around this time of the week?”.
“How bout her?” Brian suggested while pointing to a girl on the other side of the dance floor who seemed to be talking to two of her female friends. “Nah, probably not a good idea.” Dan assessed. “We like to get our targets alone and if she’s got friends with her that means we risk the possibility of a couple cock blocks or homegirls tryna play captain save-a-hoe. “Good point.” Brian agreed. “What about that one over there?” He suggested while pointing to the girl in a blue halter top who seemed to be walking in the direction of a man on the dance floor.
“Eh, she’s taken.” Dan shrugged off. “It’s not like that’s ever stopped us before.” Brian chuckled. “Yeah, but last time a little boy jumped stupid at us because we were gettin at his girl we ended up putting his ass in the hospital.” “Yeah, that ass whoopin’ was well deserved.” Brian laughed. His laugh came to an abrupt stop when the sight of a beautiful woman with curly hair and curvy body caught his eye from the bar. “Whoa whoa whoa, Danny boy. Check out that cola bottle at the bar.”
“GOODNESS GRACIOUS!!!” Danny exclaimed in an animated tone. “I guess that’s what Shock-G was taking about when he said he liked his oatmeal clunky.” Danny joked. “Yo, D, is it just me or is she looking at both of us?” The gorgeous woman was focused on both men with an infectious smile that lit up the darkened dance floor. “I think we got one.” Brian uttered with a smile.” Damn right we do, obvious Otis. Let’s get at that.” Danny concluded as the pair walked over to the bar where the gorgeous woman was sitting. As the two approached the woman Brian suddenly felt a cool breeze in the warm club air.
“So what’s a place like you doing in a woman look like this?” Dan joked. “Well I see someone is a big Deadpool fan.” The woman laughed. “Well I’ll be damned. It looks like them cheesy movie pick up lines won’t work.” Brian added sarcastically. “Well lucky for you two, movie buffs just so happen to be my thing.” “You…two?” Dan emphasized. “That’s right, cutie. “We’re all adults here and I think we all know what we want.” “So what do you want?” Brian asked with eager curiosity. The woman stood up so that Brian and Dan could see her full figure. “How about you both follow me out back and I’ll show you what I want.”
Brian and Dan exchanged smiles as the woman motioned for them to follow her out back. They leave out of the club’s back door and find themselves in a darkened alleyway with no one in sight. “Is this a game?” Dan asked with intrigue. “Oh yes.” The woman began seductively. “This is a game…and it’s time to play.” Standing between both men she embraced Dan with a passionate kiss on the lips. An aroused Brian watched from behind as she reached back to grab him by his shirt and pulled him closer. By this time both Brian and Dan’s hearts were racing as she leaned over to Brian and whispered in his ear.
“You wanna fuck me don’t you?” She whispered softly and seductively. “Yes…yes we do.” Dan and Brian replied simultaneously as their hearts raced. “Well, I’ve got news for you cuties, you both are so fucked…Dan and Brian.” Both men suddenly shifted in curiosity and pulled back from the woman when they realized they never told the woman their names. “How did you know our names?” Brian asked. “Yeah, we sure as hell never told you.” Dan added. The woman kept her self centered between the duo as she readied her response.
“Well boys, I’ve been watching you for some time and I can see you love to play with vulnerable women as your sex objects. Now it’s time for me to play with you.” “Who the hell are you and what the hell are you talking abo-” before Dan could finish the woman’s arm turned into a dark red blade…and sliced him across the groin of his pants. “AAAAHHHH FUCK!!!” Dan screamed in agony. As he leaned over holding himself. Something fell out of the bottom of his pant leg and onto the ground. Both he and Brian looked down in shock when they realized it was his blood covered penis. Both men began shaking in horror as an evil smile spread across the woman’s face.
“I’ve been watching you both for some time and you have been VERY naughty boys. Preying on innocent beautiful women and using them for your sexual pleasure…and now I’m gonna use you for my pleasure.” The woman then fully transformed into an attractive red tailed, snake-like demon as Dan and Brian stood frozen in horror. She then turned around and sliced Brian’s throat as he briefly attempted to flee. He fell to the ground holding his throat and coughing as he choked on his own blood. As Dan attempted to crawl away she pierced his back with her red tail and it came out through his stomach as blood began pouring from his mouth. She then tossed his lifeless corpse on the ground in front of her.
She turned around to face the dying Brian, staring into his dying eyes with her fiery red ones. “You dirty boys are always using women to have a dick measuring contest to prove who’s is bigger. Well guess what? This time…mine’s is bigger.” She extended her red tail and stabbed Brian through the gut. She then retracted the tail as his near lifeless eyes looked up in shock and threw her tail back in his direction, decapitating him. As the two lifeless and bloodied bodies lie dead on the ground the woman shape shifted back into her human form and went back inside the club to enjoy herself.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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