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Mercy Cut

A Deed of Malevolence

By Lori ArmstrongPublished 5 months ago • 8 min read
Image by Stefan Keller from Pixabay

The deed arrived in a thick yellow envelope that smelled faintly of mildew and old paper. At first, I thought it was another scam—another company trying to sell me a sliver of land I’d never seen. But the signature at the bottom belonged to my great-uncle Mac, dead three months now, and the property attached to his will sat deep in the mountains of Placer County where gold was first discovered in California.

The deed was for an abandoned gold mine.

At least, that’s what everyone called it.

The locals referred to it differently.

They called it Mercy Cut.

“Bad things stayed alive up there,” the woman at the diner told me when I stopped for coffee on the drive in. “Even after they died.”

I laughed politely.

She didn’t.

By the time I reached the property, dusk had already settled into the trees. The road twisted through dense pine forest before opening into a clearing scarred by old mining equipment and rotting wooden structures leaning toward collapse. Rusted rails disappeared into the earth near the mouth of the mine.

And there were lights. Not electric floodlights, there were camp lights.

Someone was living there.

I parked beside a broken water tank and stepped out into cold mountain air sharp with marijuana and wood smoke.

A man emerged from behind a trailer carrying a shotgun loosely in one hand.

He was thin, filthy, and smiling too hard.

“You lost?” he asked.

“This is my property.”

His smile faded slightly.

Behind him, more figures appeared from the shadows—three men and a woman, all twitchy-eyed and exhausted-looking.

The grow operation became obvious immediately. Black irrigation tubing ran through the brush. Tarps covered drying plants as generators hummed somewhere behind the trees.

The woman stepped forward.

“You got papers?”

“I inherited the mine.”

At the word inherited, something shifted across all their faces.

The shotgun man scratched his beard nervously.

“You family of Elias Armstrong?”

I froze.

Elias Armstrong was my ancestor. A miner who disappeared in the 1870s after part of the tunnel system collapsed.

“How do you know that name?”

The group exchanged uneasy glances.

Finally, the woman muttered, “Because people hear him.”

The forest suddenly felt colder.

One of the younger growers laughed nervously.

“Don’t start that ghost crap again.”

But nobody else laughed.

The shotgun man lowered his voice.

“People disappear up here.”

“Probably because you’re growing weed on stolen property.”

“No,” he said flatly. “I mean disappear.”

Behind us, deep in the woods, something metallic clanged once.

Everyone turned toward the sound instantly.

Nobody spoke.

The silence afterward felt wrong.

Like the mountain itself was listening.

“We should get inside before dark,” the woman whispered.

“Inside where?”

“The cave.”

“The mine?”

“No,” she said quickly. “Not the mine. The cave behind it.”

Another clang echoed from the trees. The clang seemed closer now.

The youngest grower—a skinny kid named Travis—rubbed his face anxiously.

“He’s out there.”

The others ignored him.

I pulled out my phone and tried calling for help.

Of course there was no signal.

The shotgun man grabbed a flashlight.

“We move now.”

The group started quickly through the trees behind the mining structures. I followed because staying alone suddenly felt worse.

Branches snapped somewhere behind us.

Not random movement, but footsteps. These were heavy ones.

The trail narrowed as darkness swallowed the forest. Pine branches scraped against our shoulders. The generators faded behind us until all I could hear was breathing and boots crunching over loose rock.

Then the scream emerged. It was clearly a man’s scream.

Close enough to feel human.

Everyone stopped.

Travis spun around wildly. “That was Cody!”

One of the growers was missing.

Nobody had noticed him disappear.

The scream cut off abruptly.

The shotgun man aimed his light into the trees. But we could see nothing.

Then another sound emerged from the darkness.

Pickaxe striking stone.

Clang.

Clang.

Clang.

The rhythm was steady and deliberate, approaching us fast.

“We need to move,” the woman whispered urgently.

The group stumbled forward faster now, nearly running.

The forest thickened around us. Every tree looked twisted and skeletal in flashlight beams. The smell hit next. The aroma was of wet earth, rot and something older.

Something trapped underground too long.

Travis began muttering to himself.

“He follows lights… he follows noise…”

“What are you talking about?” I demanded.

The shotgun man answered without looking back.

“The old miners.”

I almost laughed again, but the terror in his voice stopped me.

“They broke through into something when they dug Mercy Cut. Whole crews vanished. Others came out… wrong.”

Another scream erupted behind us.

This screech was unmistakably female.

Then silence.

The group broke into full panic.

Flashlights jerked wildly through the trees as everyone shoved forward toward a jagged opening in the mountainside barely visible ahead.

The cave.

We reached it gasping for breath just as night fully consumed the mountain.

The entrance yawned black and enormous.

Cold air poured from inside carrying the smell of minerals and decay.

The shotgun man motioned everyone in.

“No,” Travis snapped suddenly. “He’s in there, too.”

A tall, broad shadow moved behind the trees.

Whatever it was, wore something that glinted faintly in the moonlight. My eyes squinted closer when I saw mining gear.

My stomach dropped.

The figure stepped forward slowly.

Its helmet lamp flickered weakly.

The face beneath it wasn’t fully there anymore. Skin hung in strips blackened with dirt and age. One eye socket was decrepit and empty.

And in its hand—

A pickaxe.

Travis fired first.

The shotgun blast exploded through the towering trees, but the miner didn’t stop walking.

“Oh God,” the woman whispered.

The thing tilted its head unnaturally and then charged.

Utter chaos erupted instantly.

Travis screamed as the pickaxe tore into his shoulder, spinning him violently to the ground. Blood sprayed across the rocks.

We all ran with a bewildered stride.

I stumbled into the cave with the others as Travis’s screams echoed behind us.

Then we abruptly stopped as the darkness inside swallowed us whole.

Our flashlights shook violently across damp stone walls covered in old mining marks and symbols carved deep into the rock.

The cave descended sharply underground when behind us came dragging footsteps.

The steps sounded slow now; more patient.

The thing was following us, which made one of the growers sob uncontrollably.

“This is because we dug near the old shaft,” he cried. “I told you not to touch it!”

The woman grabbed him.

“What shaft?”

“The collapsed one! The one with the human bones!”

The lights flickered.

Then something burst overhead.

There was an influx of bats; hundreds of them.

Their shrieks filled the cave as they exploded from the ceiling in a storm of wings.

I screamed, ducking instinctively as they dive-bombed past our faces.

The flashlights dropped as darkness consumed everything.

Someone fell hard, while someone else screamed hysterically.

The bats slammed into us blindly in the pitch black while deeper inside the cave another sound. It was the resonance of more pickaxes.

Not one.

Many.

Clang.

Clang.

Clang.

The mountain itself seemed alive.

My phone suddenly caught one weak signal bar. I called 911 instantly, but only static answered. After a moment, I heard a faint, distant voice.

“911, what’s your emergency?”

Relief flooded through me.

“We’re trapped in Mercy Cut Mine! People are dead—”

The line crackled violently.

Then I heard it.

Screaming; not from the cave. The shrieks echoed through the phone. I heard dozens of voices screaming together.

This was the sound of old miners.

The call disconnected.

Something touched my shoulder in the dark, and I spun around wildly with my flashlight.

One of the growers stood inches from me. Or what was left of him.

His throat hung open in a wet, red smile.

Before I could react, something jerked him backward into darkness. His body slammed against the rocks repeatedly.

Then I heard only silence.

The remaining survivors lost their minds completely.

The woman ran blindly deeper into the cave screaming for help, while another man curled against the wall praying. The shotgun man kept aiming into darkness at things only he could see.

Then the helmet lights appeared...one by one.

Dozens of them were glowing faintly deep inside the mine tunnels ahead.

Dead miners emerged from the dark with rotting faces and broken limbs.

Old tools dragged across hard stone.

The shotgun man fired wildly as the blasts echoed deafeningly through the cave.

The miners kept coming.

Then suddenly—

The cave trembled.

Dust rained from above.

A new figure stepped from the darkness ahead of the others.

Unlike the rest, this miner stood upright and still.

His clothes were older as is from the Gold Rush Era.

His face was gaunt but not rotted. And his eyes fixed directly on me. Recognition and clarity covered his face.

The miners behind him stopped moving when the figure slowly removed his helmet.

I knew the face immediately.

Not because I had seen him before; because I carried this face in old family photographs.

Elias Armstrong, my ancestor.

The cave shook harder now as the other dead miners began shrieking violently around him.

The shotgun man fired at Elias, but the bullet never reached him.

Something invisible snapped the man backward so hard his body folded against the cave wall with a sickening crack.

Elias never looked away from me. Then he spoke in a tone that resembled collapsing earth.

“You carry the blood.”

The miners surged forward screaming.

Elias turned sharply toward them.

And for one impossible fleeting moment, terror crossed the faces of the dead.

He raised one hand and the cave exploded into chaos.

Rock collapsed from above. The dead miners screamed as tons of earth crashed through the tunnels.

“RUN,” Elias roared.

I blindly ran.

Bats exploded around me again as the tunnel collapsed behind my heels. Dust choked the air. Rocks slammed against my back and shoulders.

The screams behind me became inhuman. These were ancient cries.

I saw moonlight ahead and the cave entrance.

I dove through it to escape just as the mountain thundered behind me. The collapse shook the entire forest. Then there was silence; complete silence.

I lay gasping on the cold ground staring at the stars above the trees.

The mine entrance had vanished beneath tons of rock.

The cave entrance was gone as well and the forest remained utterly still.

There were no generators, no voices and no footsteps.

There was only the soothing sound of the creek nearby moving softly through darkness.

Hours later, rescue crews finally reached the property after my car was located, abandoned near the road.

I told them people were trapped inside.

They searched for days, but found nothing - no bodies and no tunnels. There was zero evidence the haunted cave had ever existed.

The skeptical sheriff blamed my story on drugs and panic.

The grow operation disappeared from official reports completely.

But before I left Placer County, I returned once more to the collapsed mystic hillside alone.

It was dusk and the mountain stood silent. There was an ancient type of feeling that took me over.

I waited.

Then, faintly beneath the earth—

Clang.

Clang.

Clang.

A pickaxe struck stone deep underground.

The old timers were still working; still digging.

And somewhere within the mountain, I swear I heard a familiar voice whisper through the dark:

“You were never meant to stay.”

The spirit of my ancestor spared my soul.

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About the Creator

Lori Armstrong

Lori is an award winning author who writes multi-genre books. She has written and edited several books that are available on Amazon along with ghostwriting for clients worldwide.

She is also a published journalist for the news.

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