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Malevolent Presence: The Haunting of Maria's House

When the Unknown Becomes a Terrifying Reality

By Zaeem ShakirPublished about a year ago 4 min read
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Maria was never afraid of the dark. As a child, she used to love to sneak out of bed after her parents had gone to sleep and explore the shadowy corners of her house. She loved the thrill of the unknown, the feeling of being surrounded by something mysterious and powerful.

But when Maria moved to her new house on the edge of town, something changed. She began to feel a sense of unease whenever she was alone in the house, and she started to hear strange noises at night. At first, she tried to ignore it, telling herself that it was just her imagination. But as the weeks went by, the feeling of dread only grew stronger.

One night, as Maria lay in bed, she heard a sound that made her blood run cold. It was a soft whisper, a voice so faint she could barely make out the words. But she knew that it was something sinister, something that should not be in her house. She sat up in bed, heart racing, and listened intently.

There was nothing at first, just the sound of her own breathing and the rustling of the leaves outside. But then she heard it again – the whisper, faint but unmistakable. Maria got out of bed and tiptoed to the door of her room, listening intently for any other sounds.

That's when she saw it – a shadow moving slowly across the floor. It was indistinct and shapeless, but there was no mistaking its malevolence. Maria stood frozen in fear, watching as the shadow seemed to grow larger and larger.

As it reached the foot of her bed, Maria closed her eyes and whispered a prayer. She didn't know what else to do – she was completely alone, with no one to turn to. But as she opened her eyes again, she saw something that made her heart skip a beat.

The shadow was gone, replaced by a figure standing at the foot of her bed. It was a woman, tall and thin, with long black hair and piercing eyes. Maria knew immediately that this was not a human being – there was something otherworldly about her, something that made her shiver with fear.

The woman didn't move, didn't speak. She just stood there, watching Maria with an intensity that made her feel exposed and vulnerable. Maria wanted to scream, to run, to do anything to escape the woman's gaze. But she couldn't move, couldn't speak. She was completely paralyzed by fear.

For what seemed like hours, Maria lay there, trapped in her own body. The woman never moved, never spoke. But as the first light of dawn began to filter through the window, she vanished, leaving behind nothing but a sense of dread and unease.

Maria tried to brush off the encounter with the mysterious woman as a dream, but she couldn't shake the feeling that something was off in her house. She began to hear strange noises at night, like footsteps in the hallway and whispers in the darkness. Every time she turned on a light, she would find nothing there, but the feeling of unease persisted.

One night, Maria woke up to find herself standing in the middle of her room, facing the window. She didn't remember getting out of bed, but she felt compelled to look outside. As she peered into the darkness, she saw a pair of glowing eyes staring back at her from the trees. They were too far away to make out any details, but she could sense their malevolence.

Maria backed away from the window, heart racing, and tried to calm herself down. Maybe it was just an animal or a trick of the light, she told herself. But as she turned around, she saw something that made her blood run cold.

There, in the corner of her room, stood the same woman she had seen before. She was even taller than Maria remembered, her skin pale as moonlight and her eyes glowing like embers. The woman's hair was long and black, but it seemed to move on its own, as if alive.

Maria wanted to scream, to run, but she was frozen in place. The woman took a step closer, and Maria could see that her fingers were impossibly long and thin, like talons. The woman's mouth opened, revealing rows of razor-sharp teeth, and let out a hiss that sounded like the wind through a graveyard.

As the woman advanced on her, Maria finally found her voice and screamed. She stumbled backward, tripping over her own feet and falling onto the bed. The woman followed her, her eyes fixed on Maria with an intensity that made her feel like a bug under a microscope.

Maria's heart was pounding so hard she thought it would burst from her chest. She knew she had to do something, anything, to get away from the woman. With a burst of adrenaline, she sprang from the bed and darted for the door.

But the woman was too fast. With a flick of her wrist, she sent Maria crashing to the floor. Maria felt a sharp pain in her head and then everything went black.

When Maria woke up, she was lying in bed, covered in sweat. At first, she thought it had all been a nightmare, but the bruises on her arms and legs told her otherwise. She looked around the room, half-expecting to see the woman there waiting for her, but the room was empty.

Maria knew that she couldn't stay in the house any longer. She had to get away from whatever was haunting her, before it was too late. As she packed her bags and headed for the door, she felt a chill run down her spine. She knew that whatever had been in her house was still out there, waiting for her.

From that day on, Maria never looked back. She moved to a new city, far away from the horrors of her old home. But sometimes, in the dead of night, she would hear a whisper on the wind, or catch a glimpse of glowing eyes in the darkness. And she knew that she could never truly escape the evil that had once claimed her home.

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Zaeem Shakir

Writing isn't just a job for me – it's a way of life.

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