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La llorona

The Weeping Woman

By M.Kamran ShaukatPublished 12 days ago 3 min read
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In the small village of Santa Maria, nestled within the rugged mountains of Latin America, there lived a woman named Elena. She was known throughout the village for her beauty, her kindness, and her unwavering devotion to her two young children—Pedro and Maria.

But behind Elena's radiant smile lay a heart heavy with sorrow, for she was haunted by a dark secret—a secret that threatened to consume her with guilt and remorse.

Years ago, in a moment of desperation and despair, Elena had taken the lives of her children, driven to madness by grief and loss. Since that fateful day, she wandered the streets of Santa Maria, her soul tormented by the echoes of her past and the specter of her children's accusing eyes.

As the sun dipped below the horizon and darkness descended upon the village, whispers began to spread among the villagers of a weeping woman who wandered the streets at night—a woman whose mournful cries pierced the silence like a knife.

They called her La Llorona—the Weeping Woman—a figure of legend and folklore said to be cursed to roam the earth for all eternity, forever searching for her lost children.

One moonlit night, as the villagers slept soundly in their beds, a young boy named Alejandro awoke to the sound of distant weeping echoing through the streets. Intrigued by the haunting melody, he crept out of his home and followed the mournful cries into the heart of the village.

There, standing beside the river that wound its way through Santa Maria, he beheld the spectral figure of La Llorona—a woman dressed in white, her face obscured by a veil of tears. With trembling hands, Alejandro approached her, his heart filled with compassion for her plight.

"Why do you weep, señora?" he asked, his voice barely above a whisper.

At the sound of his voice, La Llorona turned to face him, her eyes filled with an otherworldly sorrow. In a voice choked with tears, she recounted her tragic tale—a story of love and loss, of betrayal and despair.

Moved by her words, Alejandro reached out to comfort her, his small hand resting gently on her trembling shoulder. And in that moment, something miraculous happened—the curse that had bound La Llorona to the earth was broken, and her spirit was finally set free.

With a final, sorrowful sigh, La Llorona vanished into the night, her anguished cries fading into the darkness like a wisp of smoke. And as the first light of dawn illuminated the village, the villagers awoke to find a sense of peace and tranquility that had long been absent from their troubled hearts.

From that day forth, the legend of La Llorona lived on—a cautionary tale whispered among the villagers of Santa Maria—a reminder of the power of love and forgiveness to conquer even the darkest of sorrows.

And though her spirit had departed from this world, the memory of La Llorona would forever linger in the hearts and minds of those who had heard her mournful cries and witnessed the redemption of her soul.

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M.Kamran Shaukat

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 days ago

    This was so creepy! Loved your story!

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