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"Echoes of the Closet"

A horror short story

By Merissa ✨️Published 11 months ago 4 min read
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The old house squeaked as the wind howled outside, sending a quaver down John's spine. It stood tall and weathered, its wooden beams grunting in protest as gusts of cold air slipped through every crack and crevice. Nestled within its worn walls for a month now, John and his daughter, Emily, sought refuge from the relentless darkness that lurked beyond. The glow of a single lamp cast flickering shadows on the timeworn wallpaper, and the warmth it emitted battled against the chill that permeated the room.

With gentle hands, John tucked Emily into bed, their nightly routine serving as a solace respite from the uncertainties of the outside world. The frayed edges of her favourite blanket were tucked securely beneath her small frame, cocooning her in a sense of protection. It had been a long day, filled with laughter and the shared happenings of a loving father and his spirited daughter. But now, as fatigue tugged at Emily's eyelids, her bright blue eyes drooped heavily, their vibrant glow dimming.

"Goodnight, Daddy," she whispered, her voice barely audible over the melancholic symphony of the wind. The exhaustion in her voice mirrored the weight of the day's endeavours, and her fingers curled around John's hand, seeking solace in the familiar touch.

John's heart surged with love as he gazed down at his precious daughter. His own weariness melted away in the presence of her innocence, and he stroked her tousled hair with a tenderness only a father could muster. "Goodnight, sweetheart," he replied, his voice a soothing balm to her tired soul. He leaned down and planted a gentle kiss on her forehead, the brief touch conveying a world of unspoken affection.

As he straightened himself, John glimpsed out the window, where the moon played hide-and-seek behind hazy clouds. The ominous hooting of an owl echoed in the distance, its haunting call punctuating the stillness of the night. Yet, within the confines of their small haven, the bond between father and daughter remained unyielding.

"Sleep tight, and don't let the bedbugs bite," John whispered playfully, a faint smile dancing upon his lips. His words were lighthearted, a final offering of comfort before sleep claimed Emily's drowsy form.

As John turned to leave, Emily's voice quivered with a hint of fear, a tremor that sent an icy chill through his veins for some reason. "Daddy, can you... can you check my closet for monsters, please?" Her plea hung in the air, laden with a deep-seated unease that tugged at the edges of John's consciousness.

A flicker of concern danced across John's face, but he masked it with a reassuring smile. "Of course, princess," he said, keeping his voice comforting. "I'll make sure there are no monsters hiding in there."

Emily's eyes widened with expectation as John slowly moved toward the closet. He reached for the doorknob, his heart pounding in his chest. The creaking of the hinges filled the room, amplifying the tension that hung heavy in the air. John turned back and smiled at his daughter in reassurance before turning to the task at hand, flinging the closet doors open, ready to confront the imaginary horrors that his daughter thought lurked within.

But what he saw froze him in his tracks.

There, huddled in the corner of the closet, was Emily. Her face was depleted of color, a ghastly pallor that accentuated her wide, terror-stricken eyes. She quivered uncontrollably, her small form quaking as if she had just borne witness to something indescribable. John's blood turned to ice, his mind struggling to comprehend the impossible tableau that lay before him.

"Daddy," Emily whispered, her voice a mere whimper. "There's someone in my bed."

John's heart sank as he slowly turned to face the empty bed where Emily had been moments ago. The weight of dread settled in the pit of his stomach, a cold sweat drenching his forehead. Hadn't he just tucked his real daughter into bed? So who... or what... was lying there?

A sinister stillness encircled the room, amplifying the terror that clawed its way into John's mind. His breath hitched in his throat, and his pulse thundered in his ears, a wild rhythm that reflected the chaos consuming his thoughts. A sense of impending doom hung heavily in the air, suffocating any flicker of hope.

His thoughts were abruptly shattered by a soft, eerie giggle that slithered from the shadows. It was a sound that chilled him to the bone, a perverse mixture of innocence and malevolence that twisted his perception of reality. The giggle swelled, escalating into a macabre symphony that filled the room with an otherworldly, haunting melody.

John's mind spun, grappling with a terrifying realization that clawed at the fringes of his sanity. He was trapped in a nightmare, a waking horror that defied all reason. His daughter's simple request had unwittingly torn open a door to a sinister realm, where doppelgangers and terrors lurked.

As the giggle morphed into a bloodcurdling shriek, reverberating off the walls with a spectral intensity, John's world collapsed into a maelstrom of darkness. Panic surged through his veins, urging him to action, to protect his daughter from the abomination that now occupied her bed. But his trembling hand, drenched in cold sweat, seemed to move in slow motion as it reached out to confront the unknown.

And in that moment, the house fell silent.

The end?

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Merissa ✨️

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