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By Curteeona BrelovePublished 3 years ago 37 min read
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Black girl goes in to get a mri on her heart doc tells her she’ll know in a few day but meanwhile she’ll need to come back tomorrow for some more blood work. (Athlete)

Goes to a party, heart starts racing and pays it no mind. Goes to practice. After practice, heart starts hurting..

Ends up going to the hospital with trainer to get mri and receives a call from “doc” saying “there’s a lot of inflammation around your heart, looks similar to an infection. We need you to come in again”..

With a questioning face, she lifts the phone from her ear to look at the number and it’s definitely the same hospital. Is walking along with the phone to her ear looking around the hospital for the mri room as doc continues to talk. Puts phone back to ear and says “yeah.. uhm I think I’m gonna have to call

You back doc.”

Without saying anything to her trainer- she looks back at him as they walk with pace with the phone still in her hand. She looks down to see if she hung up- she didn’t; So she does.

They get to the desk and she asks the nurse where the mri room is and the nurse points. She nods her head and says thank you. As they walk for a few seconds the pathway gets a little empty and brighter. They look around/ very few nurses, just double doors.

She turns to talk to her trainer “is it me or this looks a little weird”.. trainer responds “yeah. But it’s a hospital so... proceed”

Looking with worry she poked her chest out and starts back walking. Then they get to another set of double doors and see from a distance a very pale white) and skinny girl (with a black shirt that stops above her belly button with white and black block pants and boots) the girl continues talking to a nurse, then walks away towards the double doors. The nurse keeps trying to talk to her but she keeps walking away abruptly. Nurse keeps pleading for her to stop but she snatched away each time and looks sad and angry, until she sees the athlete. Then she starts to look sick. And slows down. Once she reaches the door she drops to her knees and the nurse goes to get help.

In shock the athlete stops and looks back at her trainer who was further back looking at the art on the wall and talking in the phone. She looks back into the window to see the girl, on the floor as if she’s crying and gasping for air.

Confused and nervous the athlete feels as if she may know the girl. She looks at the girl closely through the glass (camera moves from window to directly on the girl- moving up and down her body slowly- catching her panting motions, hair, clothes and body). The athlete felt saddened, almost as if it were her best friend in the floor. Taking one more glance at her trainer, who had found the MRI ROOM- waiving her to come back in.. she pushes the double doors which happened to be locked.

The girl looked up with surprise then calmed down as she look into the eyes of the athlete (as if she knew her). The girl’s breathing slowed and she looked back down as if she were deeply saddened then a bit happy.

The athlete pushed both doors again and they went forward, only to come back locked. Her trainer has caught up to her with a skip before reasoning for her arm “hey, the room is this way, cmon”.. Still looking at the girl, the athlete turned to her trainer again and said “they just left her there, I gotta help her”.. Trainer: “[Meems]... (sigh) (looks at Meems, looks at girl] Come on the nurses will help her, [Meems interrupts- “Like she’s been down there for a while, I gotta he—]”...”you have your own problems to worry about remember? Let’s go”..

Pulling Meems away from the door, she walks a bit. Looks back to see the girl still on the floor. The Athens her back then goes back towards the door.

She pushes both doors. Looks up then pushes the right door- it opens. She looks up at the door, looks around and the girl tried to stand, still in tears. Meems goes in to grab her arms to assist her and the girl falls back down.

Meems: Heyyy.. it’s ok, I gotchu.

Girl: thank you(shakey voice)

Holding on to Meems, the girl drops back down, Meems catches her

Meems: “whoa whoa, be careful”, (as she drops down with her and brings her back up.)

Where are the doctors bro, like you’ve been in the floor for minute.”

(Camera pans to the Trainer as he takes two tries to figure out how to open the door)

Trainer: Meems... what are you doing? Call the docs

Meems: I had to help her man

Trainer: okay, take her to the nurses station and let’s go.

- noticing how cold the girl was, Meems grew silent. Her head shook a little as if she were remembering something. She blinked 3 times and looked at the girl who happened to to be looking at her. They locked eyes and Meems remembered her ex girlfriend’s face as she threw her head back and laughed at a pool party.

Coming back to reality, Meems told the girl to calm down as she walked her to the nurses station and told them she needed help and explained what happened. Looking shocked the nurses came from behind the counter and took the girl.

Walking away slowly and looking at the girl twice as she walked away, Meems had a feeling she knew the girl.

Without knowing because she’s looking back. she catches up to the trainer who interrupts her thoughts...

Trainer: you good now? You’re a hero Meems (jokingly.)

Cutting her eyes at her trainer she replied

“Yeah a whole captain save a h—“

Trainer interrupts again “laaaaaaannngguuuaaaggeee”

She smirks and says “Black Panther strikes again”

As the approach the mri room, her phone rings again and it’s the hospital. She shakes her head..

Trainer asks who’s calling, she shakes her head, declines the call and hands her phone to him.

“See ya in a bit bud” she says to him “I’ll be right here”.

Going into the mri room, she changes and lays down on the table.

Nurse: “you should be outtA hear in about an hour, just relax hun” (the nurse winks and walks away.) (Meems gives a forced smile then back to a straight face. Then starts thinking about her ex- Jay)

Lying in the table, the MRI begins and she thinks back to the good times they had and smiles

(Flashes of them in the bathroom together- one in the toilet the other doing her hair (jay singing with the flat iron and Meems in the toilet w/ her head in her hands shaking it back and fourth.

Meems throwing flour on Jay in the shower- jay laughing and pissed at the same time- Meems laughing, then kissing her multiple times and telling her sorry- then Jay rubs the flour on Meems who hugs and kisses her more and jay rolls her eyes.

ArtistsFeeding each other fruit in the kitchen- in the floor, at night in gym shorts and sports bras, and Meems jumping in the bed to wake Jay up.) — no sound just the images playing back and fourth and panning back to Meems face after every two memories

Meems doing Jay’s makeup, jay is directing Meems. Sound comes in and Meems puts lipstick all over her jay’s face. (“are you kidding me Meems?really?” Jay pushes Meems. “For real? This is what you do?” Meems starts to laugh hysterically. , grabs Jay’s face, jay pushes her again and mumbles words with an attitude. Still laughing, Meemz (“you’re so pretty, hands down you have the best makeup) jay responds “get tf outta my way- you play too much” Meems responds with a laugh “Okay Joker” and continues to laugh.

Camera pans back to Meems in the mri chamber with a slight smile. Then back to makeup scene.

Jay is standing in the mirror with her arms folded glaring at Meems. Meems is dancing and singing “you’re so beautiful girl by Sean Kingston twice. The. Grabs jays arms and starts dancing- lipstick still all Over her face. “You make me sick, you know thAt? For real. Move....... moooovee”

Meems: “giiiiirrrlll.. you’re so pretty with your joker makeup on.”

Jay pushes her to get around her and get a face rag. Meems grabs her by the waist from the back and pulls her close, wrapping her arms around her.Jay rolls her eyes and let’s out an aggravated puff/ sigh and let’s Meems embrace her.

Jay looks at her nails as her head is tilted to the side from Meems holding her from the back and burying her head in her neck.

Jay: “alright Meems. You had your fun now let go” taps Meems arms

Meems: (swaying back and fourth) hey, I’m

Sorry. I looooveess you. I was just playing. I sowwy Jay.

Both looking into the mirror, Meems starts to laugh, Jay still Looks upset without blinking. Meems begins making fish faces and noises in Jay’s ear then biting her cheek with her lips.

They both laugh (jay rolls her eyes). Meems let’s Jay go, turns her around, and brings her back in close. Looking down at her as Jay looks up Into her eyes.

Jay: “you play entirely too much”

Meems: “ so I’ve heard” with a smirk

Jay: “you cant focus and be civil for five minutes... “

Meems: (swaying back and fourth) “NOPE!!” kisses Jay really fast

Jay: “why are you like this?”With a smile

Meems: shoulder shrug with a smirk

Jay: looks at Meems with love and shakes her head... “where did you come from?”

Meems: folds mouth up, shrugs shoulders

Jay: “why are you like this? Be normal”

Meems. “ No one is normal babes. Clearly there’s something wrong with you since you like me. And youre the one standing here looking like the joker, but I’m weird? Okayyy”

Jay: scowling at Meems “uuuhg.. let me go. Seriously. Let me go”

Meems. Looks at Jay seriously, and responds softly “okay”..

Meems Lets jay go, completely. Walks out of the bathroom and jay proceeds to wash her face.

A little upset, Jay turns on the water and sets the wash cloth. She smiles while doing so, squeezes the rag and starts to wipe her face. When she pulls the rag down, she smiles and Meems comes back into the bathroom and leans in the doorway. She looks at jay up and down(slowly- capturing her nails, body, neck and face)

Jay blinks and looks at Meems seductively but smooth as she shakes the water off her hands. Meems walk out to her, grabs her arm and turns Jay towards her.

Jay looks up at Meems, who’s biting her lip and looking at Jay.

Meems: “ You know I love you right?”

Jay just looks at her.

Meems: “right”

Jay: “I guess”

Meems: “oh you guess?”

Jay: “yeah I guess”

Meems: looking into Jay’s eyes “I gotchu”.

Meems grabs Jay’s chin, looks into her eyes for two seconds then she moves in to kiss jay. They French kiss for about 5 seconds. They pull apart and Jay smiles and looks secure. Her shoulders relax and they look at each other again.

Camera goes back to Meems in the MRI room. And Jay’s voice comes in “I love you too”.

Zoned out with tears in her eyes, the nurse disrupts Meems’ train of thought

Nurse: “you’re all done hun”

Meems is putting her shirt on, looks up, and takes a deep breath. Pulls shirt over her head and walks out of the mri room where she meets her trainer.

Trainer: How’d everything go?

Meems. Good I guess.

Trainer: you weren’t claustrophobic were you?

Meems looks at him with a weird expression

Trainer: I didn’t see any guards coming to strap you down so I’m guessing it went well.

Looking straight ahead and down at times, Meems walks along slowly and silently thinking about Jay.

Trainer: oh, here’s your phone back. Someone was blowing you up. I guess since you’re a superstar that’s normal.

Meems, Looking at him with a “yeah right”

Type of face she made it clear “telemarketers and the family group chat was all the action my phone gets”.

Walking around the hospital it seemed like they were walking in circles.

Meems. It all looks the same. Let’s ask how we’re supposed to get out of this place man.

Nodding his head, the trainer asked one of the floor doctors who gave him turn by turn directions. In the corner, Meems is standing with one leg on the wall scrolling through calls. Then she goes to her pictures and starts looking at all of the pics with her and jay

*swimming pics, bathroom pics, bed pics, going out, bedroom, costume, driving, pics with friends.*

Trainer walks over, stands in front of Meems and looks over her phone. He asked “you miss her don’t you?”

Meems doesn’t reply and continues to scroll with her head down.

Trainer: “still haven’t heard from her?”

Meems: Locks phone, looks up with anger, and starts to walk briskly. “He said this way right?”

Trainer skips to catch up to Meems “yeah”..

As they make their way to the parking lot, Meems takes a seat on the parking block. Trainer sits beside her as she folds her hands and and places them on her under chin.

Trainer: “you know.... sometimes people get overwhelmed.” (Camera flashes to him then Meems) “people Have their own battles Meems. And despite how much they love you, that may very well be their problem”

Meems: “yeah rich.” (Sniffling and letting a tear fall.

Rich (friend and trainer): “You guys seemed perfect my g. Really.” *camera goes to

Meems*..

Rich continues: “it was all a misunderstanding from what you told me. The way she went about it and left, was uncalled for”

Meems, nodding her head in agreement answered: “Yeap” tears falling. Opens up

Phone to her and Jay’s last text. Scrolls while Rich keeps talking.

Rich: (watches Meems scroll) are you sure you’re telling me everything about the situation?

Meems: “yeah”

Rich: “I’m your BESTFRIEND now. Keep it 100, now. Did you do anything with ole girl?”

Looking hurt, Meems began rotating her phone and staring into the distance thinking of what happened.

Rich: HELLO! Earth to Meems.

Meems: Yo!! What?!

Rich: Did you? Bruh? Di-

Meems: I didn’t do shit! Gets up and walks paces in circles

Rich: you’re acting like you’re guilty dawg, straight up. But ima mind my business

Meems glares at Rich and continues walking and looking into the distance. Rich pulls out his phone and begins to scroll.

Meems: DAMMIT MAN!!!

Rich: “oh so you did fuck up?! Now you’re hurt and shit..” slaps head and shakes it

Meems: “No. I really didn’t. I swear man.”

Rich: “so it’s been over a year of zero communication from her?”

Meems:.... “Yes!” (Softly and hurt)

Rich: “none of her friends will tell you anything.”

Meems: “NO”.

Rich: “her parents won’t speak to you? Nothing? No one?”

Meems: Man! Nooooo!

Rich: “okay damn! Calm down Killa. It’s me bring it back” shows both hands and motions her to come back

Meems gets up with constant tears and paces back and fourth.

Meems: “I didn’t touch that girl. I... I.. I just wanted to see how she was after so long...

Rich nods his head as he looks up and follows Meems pacing with his eyes.. “uhm hmm”

Meems continues to cry and tell her side fully

Meems: “like, I still had her number saved and every time I switch phones I keep the texts.

Rich’s faves twists “you keep the texts? Yeah you fucked up: and you don’t have a password.. nigga!” Throws hands up

Meems: “Not any freaky texts stupid. Just the texts where she told me I made my choice and all that other stuff. Just arguing basically. The final time we ended everything”

Rich: “so the girl you weren’t in a relationship with, but you basically were for 4 years. Where y’all mind fucked and fucked each other up.”

Meems rolling her eyes and stopping in her tracks- “yes rich”

Rich: “the same girl you said told you you were dead to her, she was dead to you, you loved, she didn’t love you, and y’all haven’t spoke in years.. that girl?

Meems: “YAAAASSS RICH” irritated tone

Rich: “so.. help me understand.. this girl hit you up about 5 year later”

Meems: yes!

Rich: “on multiple occasions- calls

, texts And all types of communication ”

Meems: “yes”

Rich: “you didn’t respond”

Meems: “no”

Rich: “ok”

Meems. *shrugs shoulders* yeah (sarcastically)

Rich: folds arm and grabs chin. “So after damn near six years, she still knows all your info and your phone number? Even though that shit has change at least 3 times?”

Meems: yes!

Rich: “HOOOWWW?” See now ya ass is lying, I would beat your ass if I was Jay”

Meems: “bruh. I didn’t give it to her” our old teammates did”

Rich: “so you mean to tell me you never responded to her?”

Meems: “nope”

Rich: “not even once?”

Meems. “Noooooo, damn.!! Why doesn’t anyone fuckin believe me dawg”

Rich: “that’s a lil fishy homie but okay. Cool” shakes head and looks at Meems in disgust

Meems: *paces* get in the car bro

They walk to the car and get in. Drive in silence. Rich looks confused and begins to talk

Rich: “so you never condoned or did anything sexual with the woman? Be real With me Meems. Come one man.

Meems: “Rich I swear. I love Jay, and I wasn’t going to lose her. I didn’t do anything”

Rich nods and turns back straight In His seat.

Meems Steers and thinks back to her and Jay’s last time together- the last words of the argument.

Jay screaming “you’re a fucking liar yo!”

Meemz screaming “I didn’t lie to you”

Jay screaming “you’re a fucking liar. Then you bring her to the fuckin party. You’re stupid. All those times your phone was buzzing, all the times you were in the gym. Can’t forget when hot guys met up and got food”

Meems screaming: “ i didn’t bring her here Jay, I’m telling you the truth.”

Jay screaming: “it doesn’t fucking matter!! You lied! And I’m done” her voice cracking from crying - I’m Done”

Flashes back to the car, and they pull up to Rich’s apartment. Meems puts the car in park and sits there for a second.

Meems: “ I was in the mall one day, supposed to be meeting up With Jay. Sat down at a table, on my phone and I here. ‘Long time no see’- it was the girl.’

Rich: “please tell me you ran”.

Meems: “nope. I looked up and was shocked”

Phone rings from hospital “hi I’m calling in regards to your mri it shows.. (same as earlier)..

Meems hangs up. “Yo it’s the hospital that keeps calling and giving my the results of my mri”

Rich: “how and you just took it?”

Meems: it’s creepy as fuck. They said the same thing before I took it saying I had an infection around my heart. Like wtf?”

Rich: idk who’s playing with you but we’re gonna report their asses tomorrow”

Meems shakes her head and continues her story.

Meems: “anyways.. yeah, we hug and she immediately refers to me not responding to anything.”

Rich: “I know she was hot”

Meems: “Nah, she made snarky comments but i told her about Jay and how she didn’t want me to respond; she respected that.”

Rich: “ wow”

Meems: we caught up. She told me about her business taking off, ball, relationships- her kid. All great —

Rich: “wait.. a kid!!?l

Meems: “yeah. A whole kid. A daughter”

Rich: “the fitness junkie had a kid? I’m appalled. Yooooo. What?”

Meems: “yeah, a whole kid.” (Looks down, and starts tapping on the wheel)

Rich: “How’d that make you feel”

Meems pauses, tooted her lips up and bit her lip searching for words.

Rich: “still hit home huh?” “Brought bAck hella memories and threw you completely off huh?”

Nodding her head in agreement, Meems responded “yeap”

Rich: “Wow. You really were in love with her”

Meems: “yeah man, but it wasn’t meant to be so 🤷🏾‍♀️”

Both grow silent- rich looks away and slumps down in the seat

Meems: “like all the emotions were gone and Jay is perfect. All those feelings I had for that girl from way back when came back in a matter of seconds. None of the bullish we went through just feelings.”

Rich: “must be nice”

Meems rolls her eyes and smacks her lips “no dummy.”

Meems: “so I look at my phone and Jay has called my 30 times and texted my phone was in silent”

Rich: “ and you knew right then, that you had fucked up”

Meems: “yeah and no”..

Rich: yeah.. you fucked up.

Meems: (looks away) so yeah, she stands up and says she has to go and it was nice catching up. she grabs my hand and squeezes it and turns to walk away..”

Rich: “and what did you do when she walked away big papa”

Meems looks at him angrily and continues

Meems: I didn’t let go. I pulled her back in and hugged her. We squeezes each other tight as hell just like we used to do, rocking back and fourth and relaxing in each other’s arms. Then I look up and see Jay halfway towards us.”

Rich: “oh hell, I know she tore that place up”

Meems. “Surprisingly no”

Rich: “yeah she had to be sick

Or something because We’ve both seen her act up. I know you were shook”

Meems. “Honestly I was and wasn’t. She knew how much the girl meant to me, but that didn’t last long. As she walked up with her purse in her arm. I stepped back from the girl and being Jay, she smiled and said ‘who’s your friend?’

Rich: “so she knew who she was?”

Meems: “Yeap”

Rich: “yeah she was sick that day. She woulda grabbed home-

Meems: “man shut up”

Rich: “Aite continue”

Meems looked away and continued to tell the story as she twirled her phone with one hand

Meems: “I didn’t lie. I told her the girl’s name and how she walked over and we caught up and she was about to leave”

—- “jay smiled, nodded her head and I introduced Jay. They shook hands and Jay made it clear she had heard so much about her and the girl did the same”

—- “the girl responded I’m glad to know Meems is happy (with a relieved but pain smile)

— “jay responded thank you we are. The girl said it was nice meeting you to jay and told me it was ice catching up and made her way out”

Rich: “that’s it? No wig snatching, drink throwing, nothing? Jay must of really held back”

Meems: “I was a bit surprised too. But she turned up As soon as homegirl was out of sight”

Pans back to jay and Meems at the restaurant as the girl leaves.

Meems goes toward Jay to kiss her and jay puts her and up and say ‘you tried it’.

Meems say “what” then back away and sits down.

Jay sits down and picks ups the menu. The waiter comes and takes their drink orders and says ‘I’ll be right back with your drinks’

Meems is touching the top of her wine glass and looking away.

Jay closes food menu, sits back, and crosses her legs.

Jay: “so you ignored me all day so you can meet up with this bitch?”

Meems cuts her eyes at Jay it stays silent.

Jay: “ oh you didn’t hear me? Okay so you’re still in ignore mode. Okaaayy sis” (points finger)

Meems: “don’t start”

Jay: “I’m not starting baby.” With a devilish smile

Meems: “you know my phone is always on silent—

Jay interrupts: “silent my ass. You knew we were meeting up to get food didn’t you”

Meems tried to answer but gets cut off

Jay: “didn’t you? You did. So you should have been paying attention to your phone instead of meeting up with someone I told you not to speak to or communicate with on any level”

Meems. “I didn’t plan this. I was here. By myself. Waiting for you. Texting you”

Camera goes to Jay who sitting with her fingers on her face.

Meems: “she saw me and came over”

Jay: “yeah right Meems”

Meems starts to raise her voice “I didn’t tell her to come here or anything. Get that shit outta ya head”

Starts dragging words out Jay: “I’m your giiirrllfriend. I told you not to talk to her, respond to her see her, NOTHING!!!!!”

Meems: “I haven’t”

Jay: “let me see your phone, right fucking now”

Meems hands it over

Jay scrolls and throws it back.

Jay: “probably deleted that shit. Don’t try me again, I mean it” (grabs food menu and sits back, props it up on her leg then grabs glass of wine

Meems: “I’m not trying you I told you what happened.”

Jay: “you’re lucky I didn’t act the fuck up. Last time dawg.

Meems. “I didn’t—“

Jay: “ehh eeh, last time”

Goes back to car with rich and Meems at night.

Rich: “again shit isn’t adding up”.

Meems look sideways at Rich.

Rich: “so wtf happened at the pool party?”

Meems: “the girl showed up”

Rich: “well duh.. ass.. it was your teammate’s house so of course she would show up and she was so gahddamn fine. Whew!!!”

Meems looks up to the roof in irritation

Rich: “oh my bad dawg... continue”

Meems: “so yeah. Me and Jay are in the pool- she’s on the floating chair and I’m on the side”

Rich: yeah nigga I know, get to the good shit”

Meems: “well you know.. the girl walked in and my teammate announced the shit in the mic and Jay started being weird”

Rich: “as expected”

Meems: “she pushed me away and told me ‘don’t touch her’ and started talking to one of her friends”. So I went over to Ice and we got drinks

Rich: “and you should have known Ice was going to Fuck some Shit up.

Meems: “for once she wasn’t petty”

Pans back to the pool Party. Meems and ice are standing and sitting at the bar upstairs getting drinks

Ice: “yo I can’t believe she showed up. Jay is clearly pissed.” Takes shot

Meems: “for what reason idk. Like this is a team event at Chad’s place and chad always invites everyone.” Takes a shot

Ice: “we all know how that can go. Especially with Millie who’s still Petty.”

Meems: “ikr”

Ice: “so did you do with her? You know y’all can’t keep your hands off each other.”

Meems: “Ice, not a thing.”

Ice: “okaaay.. heat drink this”

Meems throws the shot back and the girl appears in the doorway. Meems looks at her and ice looks at both confusingly.

The girl: “hey ice. How are you?”

Ice responds normally “great and you? You look great long time no see”

The girl: “thank you, you look great as well”

All Three looking around.

The girl: “Ice...”

Ice: “yeah?”

The girl: “could you give me and Meems a minute? Please.. no disrespect”

Ice looks confused and giving Meems a warning with her eyes.

Ice: “oh yeah yeah, sure. I’ll be outside”

The girl: “cool thanks”

Ice walks away and the girl sits down.

Meems: hey

The girl: hey, uhm. How’s it going?

Meems: going well and you?

The girl: can’t complain.

Meems shakes her head and takes another shot

The girl orders a shot and takes one

The girl: “ice still orders drinks doesn’t drink them and gets you drunk?”

Meems: (laughing) “she definitely does”

The girl: “she won’t ever change huh?”

Meems: (still laughing) “not a chance”

The girl: so I take it your girl hates me?

Meems shifts in her chair “she doesn’t hate you.She’s——“

The girl chimes in: “scared”

Meems: “yeah”

The girl: “I noticed how she gets the two times I’ve been around and I’m sure she’s not a fan of me blowing you up all the time.”

Meems: “definitely not”

The girl: “I’m sorry I just wanted to reach out and apologize for a lot. That’s all.

Meems: “no need for apologies, I was wrong a lot too”

The girl: “I’ve missed you a lot but I’m glad you’re happy Meems.”

Grabs Meems’s hand

Meems: thank you, I really appreciate it. I do. Glad you’re doing well too.

They start staring in each other’s eyes for about 10 seconds.

Meems snaps out of the trance and gets up.

Meems: “I’m glad you’re doing great girl. I think I’m Gonna go... head back to the party.”

The girl: “okay girl”- small smile and let’s go of Meems’s hand

Meems turns and walks towards door and the girl follows. She catches up and the stand there and hug again. (Jay is looking from a distance) They let go, and the girl kisses Meems and Meems pulls away saying

Meems: ‘no dawg this isn’t right I’m in love with Jay. I gotta go’

Jay walks in yelling and swearing

“You and this bitch got me fucked up Meems.

Jay starts swinging and Meems grabs her and pulls her to another room.

The girl explains to the team that it was the heat of the moment and don’t even know how it happened.

Ice and Chad explain that Jay is crazy and Meems was real Deal happy and it took forever for her to trust and love someone.

The girl explains that it felt as if someone pushed her into Meems and that she didn’t mean that.

The girl: “like I wanted to hug her that’s it. Then it’s like I blacked out. We’re kissing and her girl walks in and I was so confused. I swear I wasn’t trying to fuck things up. But I real live felt someone’s presence. You guys have to believe me”

Rich: “so y’all kissed.. well she kissed you. That’s it. I mean it’s not like she caught y’all

I’m the bed or something. Women man”

Meems: “yeah.. women”

Goes back into room with Meems and Jay

Meems: “yo chill. I was leaving and I didn’t kiss her she just kissed me outta nowhere. You gotta believe me”

Jay: *sobbing* “I fucking trusted you Meems. I trusted you and you fucked up” (repeating you fucked up)

Meems: “I didn’t lie to you or do anything. I swear”

Jay: “you’re a fucking liar. You just kissed this bitch.”

Meems: *tears in her eyes* “Jay! Stop! I promise I didn’t.

Jay: “you brought her here yo”

Meems: “I swear I didn’t”

Jay: *crying harder* “you brought her here. (Meems saying no over and over). You met up with her. She kept blowing up your fucking phone.

Meems: “baby, I’m telling you I didn’t respond to her”

Jay: “you’re a fucking liar. And I’m fucking stupid. It’s no way someone is going to hit you up that much if you’re not responding”

Meems: “I didn’t not respond. I only communicated the day she showed up to the mall that’s it.

Jay: “you’re a fucking liar and I’m done”

Meems: “jay,’please!!”

Meems reaches out for jay, who immediately pushes her hand back and starts fighting her off. Meems grabs jay and consoles her telling her not to leave and telling her none of that is true. Meems hugs jay tightly and jay continues to cry and say you’re a liar. She rests In Meems arms still crying and tries to get away.

Jay: “let me go Meems. Just let me go”

Meems: “no.. I gotchu.. I didn’t do anything I promise I didn’t.”

Jay: “Meems. You broke your promise. Please... please... just let me go”

Meems: “no. I didn’t do anything

Jay: “Meems”

Meems: “I love you jay. I love you”

Jay: “get off me. Just let me go”

Meems holds her tighter.

Jay: “get tf off me. Im done. Im done”

Jay gets loose and heads for the door. Meems chases here. Jay rounds up her friends and tells them “let’s go”. The girl apologizes to Jay, but jay doesn’t acknowledge her.

Jumps to Jay and Meems house- Jay is packing her stuff and Meems is talking and putting things back. They hug and cry. And Jay keeps packing.

Meems: “Jay please don’t go. Please baby. Nothing.... happened. Outside of what you’ve seen... we didn’t have sex or anything more.. please stop”

Jay keeps packing with a straight face then stops.

Jay: “You lies to me and you kissed her”

Meems: “i didn’t..” gets interrupted

Jay: YOU DIDNT CHEAT!! I KNOW THAT!!

Meems: well why are you doing this?”

Jay takes a moment to breath. Looks down and blinks disappointedly then continues.

Jay: “Meems.. it’s the way you look at her”

(Meems looks shocked)

“It’s the way you held her when you guys hugged. You’re still in love with her...

(Pans back to Meems) (Jay gets choked up)

*sniffles*

“You’re still In love with her and I seen it the very first time you told me about her. Everytime your phone buzzed from her texting you, the day you hugged her at the restaurant. And the moment she kissed you at the pool

Party.... that’s why I’m leaving”

Looking lost and torn.. Meems was silent..

Meems: “jay.. Im in love with you.”

Jay: “no you’re not. I’m done”

Meems: “allthe things we’ve went through, you’re giving it away.

Jay: “I’m done. I’m done”

Pans back to the car.

Rich: “damn dawg. That’s deep”

Phone rings with the same hospital- Meems answers and hears mri results and doc saying come in. She hangs up.

Rich: “but is it the though? Were you still in love with the girl?”

Meems yelling “NOO. For once I was certain. I was and still am In love with Jay. That ship with the girl sailed a long time ago. It was weird but I promise all I want and need is Jay”

Meems starts to sob and Rich sits up

To console her..

Meems: “I just want jay back. I just her back man”

Rich: I know. I know

A few days passed and both Rich and Meems kept receiving calls about the MRI and heading back to the hospital.

Girl in blasck is on the floor as if she’s throwing up and Meems tries to help her again, through the double doors.

Meems and rich leave the girl as the nurses come. Their phones ring again, even though they went to hear the results of the mri.

Stunned. Meems calls Jay but she doesn’t answer. She’s hurt and holds back tears.

Fight scene 1 where the girl in black

Is in the middle of the hallway standing up. Lifts head up and charges towards them. Rich and Meems are locked in a small bathroom and talking trash to each other as the girl tries to tear through the door and get in. They argue and eventually Meems pushes the door into the girl’s chest knocking her down and runs. Rich closes the door and stays

Fight scene 2: rich leaves bathroom running. Girl meets him and throws him. He picks up a mop handle and stats jabbing it at her. She knocks it out of his hand and he lands a few hits. She drops down and he takes off.

- he catches up to Meems as they hear their phones ringing again. They both hit decline. Rich throws his phone and says “wtf is this? What did you do?”

- Meems replies, panting “what did I do? Are you fucking serious”..

- the girl appears around the corner again. The lights start to blink and starts to move her head around..

- Memories of Jay and Meems surge through her heAd and the girl slows down. (Bathroom, pool party, the other girl)

- They continue running through the hospital as if it’s a maze.

- Every time they get to the bobble doors the MRI CALL GOES ONTO THE SPEAKERS In the hospital.

Fight scene 3: more flash backs, Meems chest begins to hurt, the girl in black continues to terrorize the hospital looking for Meems and rich. Some of the nurses try to grab her- she throws them off. Rich and Meems try to escape through the ceiling but the girl spots them. Before she can grab rich he makes his way into the ceiling.

She yells and somehow the ceiling falls down. Rich runs one way and starts throwing things as Meems is on the ground acting unconscious. As the girl looks at Rich and starts to fight. Meems falls into a inched state and relives the first time the girl emailed Meems and caught her reading it. Jay was upset, snatched her phone and had Meems in a corner reminding her of her infidelity throughout their time. Meems reminds Jay of her moments and they both settle and Meems deletes the email- promising not to talk to the girl.. later that night she responds to the girl and moves the email to junk.

Pans back in.. the girl throws Rich again, knocking him out and heads towards Meems. As she gets closer, and reaches for Meems, Meems turns over and blasts her with the fire extinguisher.

Meems runs through the double doors and is back where she started. Both her and rich meet up and hiding in a supply closet. Again Meems has a flashback about planning to ask Jay to marry her, picking out the ring, and then arguing so she waits..

The girl in black interrupts the thoughts by creeping by and trying to break into the door. Meems chest begins hurting again and her eyes start to roll into her head- Rich becomes terrified and searches for an alternative. They lure the girl in black to the door and once again push the door on her as she screams and grows nails and throws them

Both down a hallways.

Rich and Meems split up. And meems falls to the ground after the girl pops up in front of her with tears and rage in her eyes. They lock eyes once more and Meems feels a weird feeling. She reaches for Meems and misses. And Meems flees and the girl screams again and Meems takes off down the hall. As she runs rich jumps out and blasts the girl with a flare gun into a room with electric shockers. The girl struggles and tries to get up but rich made some concoction to blast the girl with electricity.

Each time he asks for answers and the more he shocks her the weaker Meems gets. Meems picks up something, chest hurting, tired, bleeding and takes the shocker from Rich as he hails cuss words.. Meems mumbles and asks how do they get out of the hospital and the girl answers in an unknown language. Meems shocks her and demands answer about 3 more times.

Meems notices the girl is too weak and grabs a metal pole to attach to the concoction.

“Metal absorbs electricity Rich. If I hit her with this and turn the power on that’s it”

With fear in both of their eyes. Meems pulls the metal over heAd and as she prepares to swing. She looks in the girls sad and enraged eyes and she gets stuck.

She pauses and goes back into her trance and thinks back to the email, the girl, The gun times with Jay, and the day the girl she used to be In love with kissed her. The arguments and everything didn’t feel real.. she remembered how she felt every time she looked at Jay- bathroom memories, sharing food, road trips, meeting Jay, crying and being sad and then being there with each other and officially wanting to ask her to marry her. And the day Jay left without ever responding.

Meems came back to reality and the girl looked at her sadly.

Rich asks “what are you doing. Fucking end it! This bitch has trapped us in this fucking place. It’s a ducking nightmare do it.

Meems begins to lower the metal price and says “I can’t”

What do you mean you can’t. This bitch tried to kiss us. Fucking kill this thing”

“rich I can’t. Something isn’t right”

Yeah you’re about to fucking die and this thing is gonna fucking be the reason.”

“No Rich. Just look. Look

Deeper”

Fuck that dude, kill it. I told you to leave this girl alone and let the damn hospital deal with her”

Meems continues to shake her head and lock eyes with the girl the entire time.

“Either you end it or I will. This is some Freddy Krueger shit yo... tucking end her”

Meems yells” I can’t fucking do it. It’s Jay. It’s Jay”

Rich “That thing isn’t Jay. It looks nothing like her and if it is. Be fucking glad she left you cuz this is some sick shit”

Meems: it’s Jay she’s in there. I can feel

It, I know it’s her. Please just look.” Meems drops the concoction and falls

To her knees”

Rich: “you’re outta your fucking mind! Jay left you for being an ass. She left that’s it. She didn’t walk into a lab and become a fucking experiment just to kill us man. Wake tf up”

This is some Sick twisted shit so again, you kill it or I will.

On her knees, Meems slides in next to the girl who looks more enraged than upset. She never looks away and the girl starts to yell and screech as if she is about to kill Meems.

Meems: “Jay.. baby.. it’s me.. please.. “

The girl still looks like she is going to kill Meems and she keeps getting closer

Rich: “don’t do it Meems. Please.”

Meems: “Jay baby I’m Sorry. I know it’s you, nothing happened I swear. I love you, I’ve missed you. It’s me. Please.

Rich rolls his eyes and picks up the metal thing silently and makes his way closer.

Chest hurting and weak Meems Sita down right in front of the girl and reaches out to grab her chin. And Meems whispers “Jay I gotchu”

The girl snatched away and twists Meems arm and grabs her by the neck. And yells.. with even more rage in her eyes.

Rich swings the metal up and is swinging towards the girl. The girl looks up and let’s go of Meems and before rich hits her Meems gets in front of the pipe taking all the shock.

The girl and rich both yell and Meems drops. Rich starts to cry and drops the metal piece and all the memories rush back to Meems. The hospital starts to shake and everything crumbles. The girl yells and rich grabs Meems, throws her over his shoulder and heads for the exit but before he makes it out the door. The girl appears in front of the exit fully restored and looking up at him just as she did through the double doors. Then the lights get bright and the girl walks through 7 double doors as rich runs with an unconscious Meems over his shoulder. And as he get the same mri call, the real exit appears and the girl is gone. Then he gets blasted. Then they’re back at the bathroom Where Meems is doing jays makeup and rubs lipstick on her. Same convo same reactions. Skips to pool party where Ice and Meems go to get a drink. Knowing what happens, Rich sees them leaving and follows them. Asking people what’s going on they look at him like he’s crazy and he goes to get Meems from ice. He shoved her into the car and explains everything and she thinks he’s crazy. Then all of a sudden their phones ring with the MRI calls. They answer and immediate they’re back in the hospital. The girl is back on the floor Meems is going through the doors.

“Oh no no no Meems! It’s a trap”

Meems: “it’s Jay”

Everything goes back and all

Of a sudden Meems wakes up from surgery with Jay, Rich, her teammates and the girl from her past. They all say they’re glad she made it, MEEMS GRABS JAY and starts tossing and hugging her, forgetting about her stitches. Later she tells jay and rich about her dream and the both looked shocked but knowing it happened.

Jay and rich leave the room and know it was an experiment jay enrolled in to see if the live was real. Jay told rich all about it and he still thought she was crazy.

Jay explained

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Curteeona Brelove

I’m a Southern girl from the Panhandle of Florida that loves writing and basketball. Writing, basketball, nature and love are what keep me going. Basketball has been my life, let’s see where my creativity, experience and passion gets me.

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