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Review of 'Lost in the Never Woods'

Lost in the Never Woods is a retelling of Peter Pan that will offer fans and readers a new and unique take on the tale, leaving the reader with their jaw-dropped.

By Cyn's WorkshopPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
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Lost in the Never Woods gives readers a unique retelling of Peter Pan that will haunt the reader with its twists, turns, and jaw-dropping revelations.

Unique

Lost in the Never Woods follows Wendy five years after she and her brothers disappeared for six months. However, only Wendy came back. Already this sets the stage for a unique direction of the story because kids are going missing, and Wendy has no idea what happened in those six months she was gone.

Everything is tied to those six months, to Wendy. Lost in the Never Woods is a mystery, but it does not lose that fantasy that marks it as a retelling. Thomas did an excellent job of blending these two genres – mystery and fantasy – to make this a compelling story for readers.

Now, the opening pacing is slow, but Thomas is creating the world and history. Thankfully it is not all thrown at the reader but instead focuses on giving the reader a clear understanding of who Wendy is on her own and what is going on in her home. So again, the pacing is good; it builds wonderfully, raising that tension and creating an unpredictable story.

It all leads up to the ending that is so unsuspecting. The plot twists and turns are jaw-dropping. However, they still fit within the context of the story. Thomas did an excellent job of making the ending unsuspecting while making it fit within the story because if it had not fit, it would not have worked, ruining the story.

Just thinking about that ending still blows my mind.

Not Perfect

There are some things that Thomas could have worked better to bring to life the characterization and character dynamics.

When it came to the Darlings as a family, I was not as attached to them as I had been in the past, and that was due to language and dynamics. When John and Michael did not return home with Wendy, they became a broken family. Now that is understandable for them to be a fractured family. However, the word choice often made it seem as though Wendy was afraid of her father. The way she avoided him, the word choice of when they did interact, almost made it seem like he became an abusive man rather than an emotionally detached father.

Now, given the context, we as readers know that not to be true. The context reveals, as said above that he is still drowning in his grief and anger of losing two out of his three children.

Thomas did an excellent job of building up the dynamics between Peter and Wendy, but the execution could have been better when it came to the Darlings as a family.

Final Thoughts

Lost in the Never Woods may have its faults, but it holds its own with amazing twists and turns and a bittersweet ending that will stay with the reader as a retelling.

  • Writing Quality : 8/10
  • Character Development : 9/10
  • "Couldn't Put It Down"-ness : 8/10
  • Intellectual Depth : 8 /10
  • Originality: 10/10
  • Overall Rating: 3.75 out of 5.

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About the Author

Cynthia Bujnicki graduated from Emerson College with a BA in Writing, Literature and Publishing. She has always loved to read since she was a child. A contributing writer for YA Fantasy Addicts, she is also the Editor-in-Chief for Cyn's Workshop. She lives in sunny South Florida with her husband and son and their two cats, Mr. J the Kitten and Nyx.

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