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Wrong Identity

chapter 21

By Forest GreenPublished about 24 hours ago 3 min read

"They've found the secondary vent," Silas said, his voice devoid of surprise but laced with a grim urgency. He didn't panic; he simply stepped back and grabbed Curtis’s good shoulder, hauling him up from the copper array. "The quartz is spent. You're a beacon again, and the hunters are in the house."

Curtis felt the gold throb return to his wrist, more violent than before, as if the attempt to dampen the signal had only served to prime it for a louder broadcast. The "Curtis" protocols flickered back to life, overlaying the dark tunnel with a series of frantic, red-pulsing vectors. Intercept imminent. Tactical options: Zero. For a heartbeat, the clinical side of his mind wanted to surrender, to simply stand and wait for the recalibration. But the "Jake" side—the side that belonged to the amber light and the blurred face—refused to be a specimen.

"There's a boat," Silas whispered, steering him toward a small, rusted iron gate that led to the tidal basin. "A skiff in the reeds. It’s old, it’s slow, but it’s made of wood and iron—no electronics for them to sniff. If we can reach the water, we can lose the signature in the salt-spray."

The iron gate groaned with a sound that felt like a scream in the confined space, protesting decades of salt-corrosion as Silas heaved it open. They stepped out into the tidal basin, where the air was a thick, grey soup of Atlantic mist. The water was a mirror of liquid lead, undulating slowly with the incoming tide. A few yards away, half-buried in a tangle of black mangroves and dead reeds, sat the skiff. It was a wretched thing—a wooden hull bleached bone-white by the sun, with an outboard motor that looked like a relic from a forgotten century.

"Jump in," Silas commanded, his voice barely cutting through the wind.

Curtis didn't jump; he scrambled. He felt the "Curtis" protocols fighting for dominance again, trying to calculate the drag coefficient of the water and the optimal angle of escape. Warning: Hypothermic risk. Probability of motor failure: 42%. He shoved the calculations into a dark corner of his mind, focusing instead on the visceral, freezing shock of the salt-water as it splashed over his boots. He collapsed into the center of the boat, his dislocated shoulder pulsing in time with the gold light in his wrist.

As Silas yanked the starter cord, the engine coughed—a wet, hacking sound that echoed across the basin. On the shore, the first of the cleaners emerged from the drainage vent. It didn't run; it glided, its matte-black form a sharp contrast against the grey mud. It stopped at the water's edge, its featureless head tilting as it processed the signal. To the cleaner, Curtis wasn't a man in a boat; he was a pulsing, golden coordinate of data, a stray piece of hardware that needed to be retrieved.

The engine gave one final, shuddering gasp and then roared into a chaotic, smoky life, the vibrations rattling the wooden slats beneath Curtis’s boots. Silas didn't wait for the motor to settle; he jammed the throttle forward, and the skiff lurched violently, slicing through the brackish water and sending a spray of freezing brine across Curtis’s face. The sudden acceleration tore them away from the shoreline, but as Curtis looked back, he saw the cleaner didn't stop at the water's edge. With a series of terrifyingly fluid leaps, the entity bounded across the surface of the basin, its feet barely touching the water, maintaining a steady, geometric pace that mirrored the boat's speed.

"Hold the rudder!" Silas yelled, his voice strained against the wind. "The tide is pulling us toward the breakers; if we hit the rocks, the boat's a coffin!"

The "Curtis" protocols surged, attempting to calibrate the boat's trajectory against the current, projecting a series of translucent blue lines over the churning grey water. Current velocity: 3.2 knots. Optimal heading: 114 degrees. But the data was fragmented, flickering as the gold light in Curtis's wrist continued to throb, fighting against the remnants of the quartz’s interference. He felt a strange, dual existence: he was a navigator calculating vectors, and he was a terrified man clinging to a piece of rotting wood for dear life. The conflict caused a sharp, stabbing migraine that felt like a needle piercing his temple.

The cleaner was closing the gap, its form a smudge of charcoal against the mist. It didn't use a weapon; it didn't need one. It was a retrieval tool, and its only objective was to neutralize the asset. As the boat hit a crest of a wave, the entity leaped, a blur of matte-black motion that soared through the air. It landed with a heavy, metallic thud on the bow, the impact nearly capsizing the skiff. The creature didn't attack immediately; it stood there, its featureless head scanning Curtis, its presence an oppressive, cold void that seemed to suck the heat out of the air.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green