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Wrong Identity

chapter 28

By Forest GreenPublished about 23 hours ago 3 min read

As he reached the plateau, the first surge of the signal hit him. It wasn't the gold throb of the beacon in his wrist, but a psychic pressure, a sudden, violent attempt by the "Curtis" protocols to reboot. Connection established. Syncing... The ghostly blue lines flickered across his vision, mapping the terrain with clinical precision. For a second, he felt the seductive pull of efficiency—the way the world became a series of solved equations. But he gripped the oilskin of his coat, focusing on the rough, physical texture of the fabric, and pushed the data back into the dark.

The ridge of The Gaze was a jagged spine of basalt that tore through the mist, offering a panoramic view of the coastline. Below him, the Atlantic was a churning cauldron of slate and foam, the waves battering the cliffs with a rhythmic, prehistoric violence. Curtis walked slowly, his boots crunching on the salt-crusted stone, ignoring the phantom prompts flickering at the edge of his vision. Sighting: Target identified. Distance: 400 meters. Bearing: 12 degrees. The protocols were no longer just suggesting a path; they were trying to seize the wheel, attempting to optimize his stride and synchronize his breathing with the lighthouse’s pulse.


He pushed through a thicket of stunted, wind-bent pines, and there it was. The cottage was a skeletal ruin, its walls partially collapsed and its roof surrendered to the elements. It clung to the cliffside like a dying barnacle, a few remaining stones standing guard over a void where a door had once been. Yet, even in its decay, the architecture matched the sketch in the ledger perfectly. He stepped over a fallen beam, his heart hammering against his ribs—not as a biological function to be monitored, but as a visceral reaction to the sight of the hearth.

The interior was filled with the debris of a life interrupted. A rusted kettle lay on its side; a single, salt-stained chair remained upright, facing the window that looked out toward the sea. Curtis walked toward the window, his movements cautious. As he reached the spot where the amber light had lived in his memories, he felt a sudden, violent surge of static in his mind. The "Curtis" protocols screamed a warning: Unauthorized zone. Signal interference is high. Recalibration required. He ignored the noise and touched the windowsill. The wood was grey and rotten, but as his fingers brushed the grain, a flash of genuine warmth bloomed in his chest—a sensation that didn't come from a pre-programmed memory, but from a physical resonance with the place.

"You're a stubborn piece of hardware, aren't you?"

The voice was a low, sandpaper rasp, coming from the shadows of the collapsed entryway. Curtis spun around, his synthetic HUD instinctively attempting to highlight the target in a neon-red outline, but the figure remained a blurred smear of grey and brown, blending perfectly into the salt-worn stones. As the man stepped forward into the dim light, Curtis saw a face that looked like a distorted mirror of his own—older, weathered by decades of Atlantic wind, with a network of deep-set wrinkles that looked like a map of the coast itself.

"I've been watching you climb that ridge for an hour," the man said, his eyes twinkling with a mixture of amusement and profound sadness. "Most of the others just run for the valley and stay there until they fade into the peat. But you... you had that look. The look of someone searching for a ghost he's already carrying in his pocket."

Curtis stared at him, the air between them thick with an unspoken recognition. The man wasn't a synthetic; there was no hum of a core, no rhythmic gold pulse beneath the skin. He was purely, devastatingly human, yet the resemblance was undeniable. It was as if the project had not just used a blueprint, but had stolen a soul and attempted to replicate its geometry.

"Who are you?" Curtis asked, though the answer was already vibrating in the marrow of his bones.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green