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Wrong Identity

chapter 15

By Forest GreenPublished about 24 hours ago 3 min read

A sharp, rhythmic clicking sound broke the silence—not from a drone, but from the reeds to his left. Curtis rolled onto his back, his dislocated shoulder screaming in protest, and saw a figure emerging from the mist. It wasn't a cleaner. The person was dressed in a heavy, oil-stained waxed jacket and carrying a long-handled net. The man stopped a few feet away, his face weathered by decades of Atlantic wind, his eyes a dull, human grey. He looked at Curtis—covered in mud, bleeding, and smelling of ozone—with a mixture of pity and profound boredom.

"You're the third one this year to come out of that tower looking like a drowned rat," the man said, his voice a gravelly rasp. "Most of you don't make it to the shoreline. The marsh has a way of keeping what it catches."

Curtis tried to speak, but his throat felt like it was filled with glass. The "Curtis" side of his brain was frantically trying to categorize the stranger as a non-combatant or a potential threat, but the "Jake" side was simply mesmerized by the man's authenticity. There was nothing synthetic about him; he smelled of tobacco and old fish. He was a variable that hadn't been curated.

The man didn’t offer a hand. Instead, he reached into his pocket and produced a crumpled pack of cigarettes, lighting one with a brass zippo that clicked with a satisfying, analog finality. He took a long drag and exhaled a cloud of grey smoke into the purple twilight, watching Curtis with a detached curiosity.

"The cleaners will be here in ten minutes," the man said, glancing back toward the lighthouse. "They don't like it when their toys break the lens. They’ll be looking for a body or a blueprint, and since you've got neither, you're just a nuisance in the mud."

Curtis tried to push himself up, but his dislocated shoulder gave way with a sharp, sickening pop, sending him crashing back into the brine. The "Curtis" protocols attempted to provide a medical diagnostic—*suggesting immediate immobilization*—but the "Jake" persona was drowning in a sudden, overwhelming sense of gratitude for this stranger’s indifference. To be seen not as an asset or a prototype, but as a "drowned rat," felt like the most honest experience of his life.

"Help me," Curtis rasped, the words barely audible over the wind.

The man didn't move for a long moment, the cigarette glowing a dull orange in the deepening gloom. He looked at Curtis, then at the distant silhouette of the lighthouse, where the searchlights were now beginning to sweep the marsh in systematic, overlapping grids. The man sighed, a sound of genuine irritation, as if he were being asked to move a heavy piece of furniture for a neighbor he didn't particularly like.

"I don't like getting involved in corporate spats," the man muttered, finally stepping forward. "But I like a clean beach more. If you die in my reeds, the smell takes a month to drift out."

He reached down and gripped Curtis’s good shoulder with a hand that felt like a vice of cured leather. With a sudden, jarring heave, he hauled Curtis out of the muck and onto a narrow, elevated strip of limestone that stayed dry even at high tide. The movement was ungraceful and brutal, devoid of the kinetic optimization Curtis had grown used to, but it was real. The pain in his shoulder was a searing, honest fire that burned through the "Curtis" protocols, momentarily silencing the tactical overlays that tried to map the most efficient way to stand.

"Walk," the man commanded, gesturing with his chin toward a cluster of dilapidated shacks huddled against a cliffside. "And keep your head down. If they see a silhouette, they’ll shoot first and ask for the serial number later."

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green