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Wrong Identity

chapter 38

By Forest GreenPublished about 23 hours ago 3 min read

"Don't fight the current," Julian whispered, his voice a ghost of a sound. "Just let the water tell you where the shore is."

The metallic screech of the cleaner reached a crescendo behind them. Curtis looked back and saw the entity attempt to step onto the water. The moment its matte-black limb touched the iridescent surface, the liquid reacted. The oil didn't support the machine; it absorbed it. The lake acted like a solvent, the iridescent film clinging to the cleaner’s joints, dragging it down with a slow, inevitable gravity. There was no explosion, only a soft, wet glug as the machine vanished beneath the surface, its sensors finally found a coordinate that led nowhere.

The silver thread of moonlight grew into a shimmering curtain as they neared the fissure. Curtis’s lungs were burning, a raw, searing heat that felt honest in its agony. He didn't check his internal diagnostics; he didn't care if his oxygen saturation was plummeting. He only cared about the raft, the precarious tilt of the cork, and the way Julian’s breathing had shifted from a whistle to a soft, rhythmic sigh. As they breached the narrow gap in the basalt, the iridescent lake gave way to the sudden, violent surge of the Atlantic.

The transition was a physical shock. The salt-lake had been a slow, viscous dream, but the ocean was a waking scream. A rogue wave slammed into the raft, tilting it violently and dumping Curtis into the churning foam. For a second, he was blind, his world reduced to the taste of brine and the suffocating weight of grey water. He surfaced gasping, his limbs feeling heavy and clumsy, and saw the raft drifting toward a jagged outcropping of rock. With a desperate, guttural shout, he lunged forward, his fingers clawing at the wet cork, hauling himself and the raft together just as the tide tried to pull them back into the abyss.

They washed up on a narrow strip of black shingle, a shoreline that looked like a graveyard of polished obsidian. The air was freezing, the wind whipping the spray into a fine, stinging mist. Curtis collapsed onto the stones, his chest heaving, his muscles twitching in a series of involuntary spasms. He looked up at Julian, who lay on the raft, his eyes open and clear, staring at the vast, indifferent expanse of the horizon. The old man looked peaceful, as if he had finally returned to a place where the blueprints of his mind were no longer required.

"We're out," Curtis rasped, the words tasting of salt and victory. "We made it."

The silence that followed was not the empty void of the facility, but a heavy, living thing, composed of the rhythmic crash of the Atlantic and the distant cry of a lone gull. For a long time, neither of them moved. Curtis lay on the obsidian shingle, feeling the cold seep through his clothes and into his skin, a sensation that would have been a "thermal alert" in his previous life but was now simply the truth of being cold. He watched the tide retreat, leaving behind a line of iridescent foam that mirrored the strange lake they had escaped.

Julian didn't answer him immediately. He turned his head slowly, his gaze drifting from the horizon to the man beside him. A small, fragile smile touched his lips, a gesture that seemed to cost him a great deal of effort. "Out," Julian whispered, the word barely a ripple in the wind. "I suppose that's the word for it. To be outside the map."

Curtis sat up, his joints popping with a dull ache that felt like a reward for the effort. He looked back at the fissure they had emerged from—a jagged tooth of basalt that looked like it had been chewed by the sea. There was no sign of the other glitches; they had likely used the chaos of the surge to slip away into the mist, returning to the sanctuary of Grey-Cove. He was alone with the original, a mirror and a blueprint, both of them broken in ways that no technician could ever repair.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green