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Wrong Identity

chapter 11

By Forest GreenPublished a day ago 3 min read

Curtis didn’t answer. He didn’t need to. While Elias was lecturing him on the inevitability of the loop, Curtis’s mind was already mapping the same structural flaws he had noticed in the lighthouse's masonry. He didn’t see the room as a room; he saw it as a series of stress points and gravitational vectors. He knew exactly how much weight the rotting floorboards could take before the salt-damaged joists gave way.

He lunged, not at Elias, but toward the transmitter on the floor. He didn't grab it to turn it off; he grabbed it and slammed it into the base of the mirror's gilded frame. The device didn't just break; it discharged its remaining energy in a violent, electromagnetic pulse.

The effect was instantaneous. The gold light in Elias’s eyes flickered and dimmed, his movements stuttering as if the frame rate of his existence had suddenly dropped. He let out a sound—not a scream, but a burst of digital static—and collapsed into a clumsy, human-like heap, his synthetic grace replaced by a heavy, jarring disorientation.

Curtis didn't waste a second. He snatched the briefcase and bolted for the stairs. As he climbed, the "Jake" side of him felt a strange, echoing grief for the man Elias had pretended to be, but the "Curtis" side was already calculating the wind speed at the top of the tower. He needed to see the horizon. He needed to know if the "cleaners" were already on the coast or if he had a window of escape.

The spiral staircase was a dizzying ascent of damp limestone and rusted iron, the air growing thinner and colder as he climbed. With every step, the "Jake" persona fought for a foothold, clutching onto the memory of a road trip that never happened, while the "Curtis" protocols analyzed the structural integrity of the tower. He could feel the lighthouse swaying slightly in the gale, a rhythmic oscillation that matched the thumping in his chest. He didn't just hear the wind; he perceived it as a series of pressure gradients, mapping the exact velocity of the gusts hitting the exterior walls.

As he reached the gallery, the same blinding beam of the lighthouse lens swept over him, a rhythmic white flash that felt like a physical blow. He stepped out onto the catwalk, and for a moment, the world opened up in a terrifying, high-definition panorama. The coast was a jagged line of charcoal and obsidian under a bruised purple sky. In the distance, three black shapes were emerging from the salt-marsh, moving with a synchronized, predatory precision. They weren't SUVs anymore; they were tactical vehicles, their headlights off, navigating by the same sonar-ping that had guided him.

"The cleaners," Curtis whispered.

The "Jake" side of him wanted to collapse, to let the wind scour the artificiality from his skin. But the "Curtis" side was already calculating the distance to the shoreline. He looked down at the briefcase, then at the transmitter he had scavenged from the foyer. He realized the broadcast hadn't just been a signal for help—it had been a beacon. He hadn't invited allies; he had signaled his exact coordinates to the very people designed to dismantle him. The "curiosity" he had praised as his saving grace was, in reality, just another programmed variable used to drive him toward a predictable conclusion.

The wind shrieked across the gallery, threatening to pull Curtis over the railing and into the churning foam below. Below him, the tactical vehicles had reached the base of the cliff, their silhouettes blending into the obsidian rocks. They didn't use sirens or spotlights; they moved in a silence that was more menacing than any noise.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green