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Wrong Identity

chapter 97

By Forest GreenPublished about 12 hours ago 3 min read

He looked back toward Sunset Vista. The motel didn't look like a building anymore; it looked like a lure, a brightly colored piece of bait set in the middle of a wasteland. The realization hit him with a cold, logical clarity: he hadn't been found by accident. He had been steered here. The amnesia, the "manager," the clinical woman—they were all part of a controlled environment, a psychological centrifuge designed to spin the "Curtis" persona away until only "Elias" remained.

A low, mechanical hum vibrated through the soil beneath his boots. He froze, pressing himself deeper into the scrub. From the direction of the parking lot, a single scout-drone rose into the air. It didn't scream or siren; it simply hovered, a floating obsidian eye that began to project a wide-spectrum ultraviolet beam across the brush. The light moved in slow, methodical sweeps, searching for the specific heat signature of a synthetic core in distress.

Curtis didn't run; running was a calculation the drone already expected. Instead, he remembered the river. He remembered the thermal blur, the way the freezing water had masked his presence. He looked at the ground and saw a narrow, muddy drainage gully cutting through the scrub, leading toward a dense thicket of rusted iron-woods. It would be a gamble—the mud would slow him down, but the mineral density of the clay might scramble the drone's thermal sensors.

Curtis slid into the gully, the thick, iron-rich mud claiming his legs with a suction-like grip. He didn't fight the sludge; he pressed his chest into the cold clay, allowing the mineral-heavy silt to coat his synthetic skin. As the ultraviolet beam swept overhead, he felt a strange, dampened sensation, as if he were being wrapped in a lead blanket. The drone’s hum grew louder, a persistent, irritating drone that vibrated in the base of his skull, but the signal remained refracted. For the first time since waking in Room 12, the noise in his head—the static of the facility's frequency—began to dim.

He crawled forward, the mud filling his ears and nostrils, a visceral contrast to the sterile chemical smell of the motel. Every movement was an agony of friction, but the desperation of the hunt drove him. As he reached the edge of the iron-wood thicket, he paused, his fingers brushing against the leather notebook. The amber glow of the geometric symbols had intensified, pointing him not toward the road, but deeper into the wilderness of the scrub-lands, toward a jagged ridge of obsidian that mirrored the Black-Vein narrows from his fragmented memories.

A sudden, sharp crack of a branch echoed behind him. Curtis spun around, his heart hammering, only to find the gully empty. But the silence that followed was different; it wasn't the void of the motel, but a living, breathing stillness. From the shadow of a nearby rock formation, a figure emerged. It wasn't a charcoal-suited agent or a synthetic handler. It was a man, older, wearing a coat made of patched furs and heavy canvas, carrying a long-barreled rifle that looked more like a relic than a weapon.

"You're leaking," the man said, his voice a low, gravelly rumble that sent a jolt of recognition through Curtis. "And you're smelling like a fresh-baked circuit board. The drones can't see you through the mud, but the wind is carrying your scent straight back to the Vista."

Curtis stared at the man, his mind frantically searching for a match in his fragmented database. The voice was wrong for Silas—too deep, too weathered—but there was a familiar, grounded quality to it, a lack of the clinical precision that defined the facility’s agents. He looked down at his arm, where the mud was already starting to dry into a grey, cracked crust, revealing the iridescent shimmer of synthetic fluid leaking from the shoulder wound.

"Who are you?" Curtis rasped, his voice sounding foreign to his own ears.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green