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Wrong Identity

chapter 18

By Forest GreenPublished about 24 hours ago 3 min read

The floorboards groaned. A heavy, metallic weight pressed against the exterior wall, and then came the sound of a magnetic clamp snapping onto the cedar siding. It was a wet, mechanical thud that vibrated through the floor and into Curtis's bones. The searchlight stopped its sweep, pinning the front door in a blinding, static glare. Through the gaps in the wood, Curtis saw the silhouette of a cleaner—a featureless, matte-black void that seemed to absorb the very light surrounding it.

The cleaner didn't knock. The door didn't open; it simply ceased to be an obstacle. There was a sound like a pressurized seal failing, and the door frame buckled inward as the figure stepped through the threshold. The entity was a study in absolute efficiency, its form a seamless, charcoal-colored composite that shifted slightly as it moved, mimicking the textures of the shadows. It didn't have eyes, yet Curtis could feel the precision of its gaze—a laser-focused scan for the specific electromagnetic frequency of his neural core.

Beside him, Silas remained as still as a stone. He didn't even blink, his breathing slow and shallow, a masterclass in invisibility. Curtis felt the "Curtis" protocols attempting to seize control again, screaming for him to deploy a tactical counter-measure, to use the heavy tea mug as a projectile, to pivot and strike. But he resisted. He leaned into the "Jake" side—the side that knew how to be small, how to be terrified, and how to hide. He slowed his heart rate, not through a programmed command, but by imagining the cold, grey Atlantic washing over him, erasing everything.

The cleaner paused. The void of its face tilted, processing the room. It was mere inches from Curtis, the smell of sterile laboratory air and cold ozone clashing with the scent of Silas’s tobacco. For a heartbeat, the creature's sensory array hovered over Curtis's chest. The HUD in his mind flickered: Detection probability: 88%... 82%... 75%. By refusing to react with the predictable efficiency of a prototype, Curtis was becoming a ghost in the machine. He wasn't a signature; he was just a shape in the dark.

Then, the cleaner spoke. The voice wasn't an external sound, but a direct-to-brain broadcast, a sterile vibration that felt like a needle sliding into his ear. "Asset 4.0. Your biological degradation is accelerating. The loop is closing. Return to the facility for recalibration."

Curtis didn't answer. The "Curtis" side of him wanted to analyze the frequency of the broadcast, to find a loophole in the command, but the "Jake" side was simply trembling. He felt the sudden, instinctive urge to apologize for being in the way, a human reaction so absurdly out of place that it almost made him laugh. The cleaner stood perfectly still, its matte-black surface absorbing the dim light of the room, waiting for the inevitable response of a trapped asset.

Then, Silas moved.

It wasn't a tactical strike or a calculated maneuver; it was a clumsy, human intervention. With a grunt of effort, Silas leaned over and slammed a heavy, cast-iron skillet—resting on the counter—directly into the side of the cleaner's head. There was no satisfying clang of metal on metal; instead, there was a muffled, dense thud, like a stone hitting a bag of wet sand. The cleaner didn't stagger or cry out, but the impact was enough to disrupt its sensory equilibrium. The void-like head snapped to the side, and for a fraction of a second, the synchronization between the cleaner and its network flickered.

"Get out!" Silas hissed, his voice no longer a whisper but a command.

Curtis didn't question the logic of the attack; he simply reacted. He lunged from the chair, his dislocated shoulder screaming in a jagged, honest chorus of pain that propelled him forward. He didn't glide; he stumbled, his boots catching on the uneven floorboards, but the momentum carried him through the gap where the door had once been. He burst into the salt-thick air of the marsh, the sudden transition from the dim interior to the strobe-like flashes of the searchlights making his vision swim.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green