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Wrong Identity

chapter 1

By Forest GreenPublished 3 days ago 3 min read
Wrong Identity
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"If you touch that dial again, I am personally going to throw your phone into the swimming pool," Elias said, leaning over the dashboard of the rusted sedan.

He was talking to a small, handheld transistor radio that was currently screaming static and high-pitched whistles, a device that had been the centerpiece of their road trip for three days. The radio didn't answer, of course, but it continued to emit a low, rhythmic thumping sound that sounded vaguely like a heartbeat underwater. They were driving through a stretch of the coast where the salt air clung to the windshield like a second skin, and the road was nothing more than a grey ribbon winding through a landscape of scrub brush and limestone. Neither of them was talking about the destination anymore; they were simply driving until the gas tank hit empty or the map ran out of ink.

Jake shifted in the passenger seat, his head resting against the cool glass of the window. He remembered the way the light had hit the cliffs an hour ago—a sharp, blinding white that made his eyes ache—and he remembered the feeling of absolute freedom that comes with having nowhere to be. He had spent the last few months feeling like a ghost in his own life, moving through a series of offices and apartments that felt like staged sets for a play he hadn't auditioned for. Being in the car with Elias, listening to the chaotic noise of the radio, felt like the first honest thing he had done in years.

The trip had been a blur of roadside diners and overpriced motels, the kind of journey where the goal wasn't a place, but a mood. They had spent hours debating the merits of old architecture and the strange way the local dialects shifted every fifty miles. Jake had felt a strange, reflective peace settle over him, a sense that the world was much larger and more indifferent than he had ever imagined. He had fallen asleep somewhere between the last gas station and the sound of the ocean, the hum of the tires acting as a lullaby.

"The carpet smells like a wet dog that's been smoking for twenty years."

That was the first coherent thought Jake had as he opened his eyes. He was lying flat on his back, staring up at a popcorn ceiling that looked like it was holding up a colony of mold. His head throbbed with a rhythmic, dull pressure, as if his brain were trying to beat its way out of his skull. He didn't remember the motel, he didn't remember the room, and most distressingly, he didn't remember how he had gotten from the passenger seat of the rusted sedan to this specific, depressing expanse of beige polyester.

He rolled over slowly, his muscles feeling heavy and unresponsive, like they were made of wet clay. On the nightstand—a particle-board slab with a peeling veneer—sat a glass of lukewarm water and a small, plastic card. He sat up, wincing at the spike of pain in his temples, and reached for the card. It wasn't a credit card or a hotel key. It was a government-style I.D. card, the kind used for secure facility access, featuring a holographic seal and a grainy photo of a man who looked vaguely like Jake, but with a harder set to his jaw. The name printed in bold, black letters wasn't Jake's. It read: Curtis Penhaligon, Chief Logistics Officer.

The silence of the room was shattered by three sharp, authoritative knocks on the door. They weren't the hesitant raps of a housekeeping cart or the casual thud of a neighbor; these were the knocks of someone who expected the door to open immediately. Jake froze, his breath hitching. He looked around the room, searching for Elias, but the space was empty save for the smell of old cigarettes and the distant hum of a vending machine in the hallway. The sedan, the coast, the feeling of absolute freedom—it all felt like a dream he’d had a lifetime ago.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green