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Who Do You Call a Loser?

For the 'Oh, Jeff' unofficial challenge

By K.D. PopielPublished 2 years ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read

‘Oh, Jeff… I love you too… but…’

Brakes screeching, an ear-splitting crash, and we were disconnected. The police came and saw a heartbroken husband. The funeral was lovely.

I inherited everything. Everyone understood I couldn’t bear staying where each little thing reminded me of her. The house fetched a hefty sum.

The key to success? Don't give your wife time to change the will.

(64 words)

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And here is Raymond G. Taylor's unofficial challenge, feel free to check it out:

https://vocal.media/writers/oh-jeff-flash-fiction-challenge

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K.D. Popiel

A translator, a writer. Two languages to reconcile, two countries called home.

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    Written by K.D. Popiel