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Whispers in the Dark

In the small town of Rivermoor, a place where nothing much ever happened

By Bellian Arix ArifinPublished 2 years ago • 5 min read
Whispers in the Dark
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There was a story whispered among the locals. It wasn’t something you'd read in the newspaper or hear on the radio; it was passed from ear to ear, growing darker each time. The legend was known as The Watcher of Rivermoor.

They say it started decades ago, long before anyone alive could remember. Back then, Rivermoor was even smaller, just a cluster of homes surrounding a dense, eerie forest. The town thrived on the edge of that forest, but people always said the trees held dark secrets. It was believed that the woods were cursed, haunted by an ancient spirit that watched over the town, and not in a protective way.

No one dared to venture deep into the forest. They would say that if you stood still long enough at the edge, you'd hear whispers carried on the wind, warning you to stay away. But it wasn't the forest itself that haunted the townspeople; it was The Watcher.

The Watcher was a shadowy figure that appeared in the dead of night. He would stand at the edge of the forest, just within the tree line, watching the homes of Rivermoor. Some said he had glowing red eyes, others swore he was nothing more than a dark silhouette with no face at all. Whatever he looked like, one thing was certain—once The Watcher marked you, you were never safe again.

The first recorded disappearance was a young boy, Peter Mulberry. He had wandered too close to the forest one evening, chasing after his dog. His parents searched everywhere, but Peter was never found. That night, people began reporting strange things. Some claimed to have seen a figure lurking at the edge of the woods, just standing there, still as a statue. A few brave souls swore they heard Peter’s voice calling out from the forest, begging for help. But no one dared to enter.

As the years went by, more and more children disappeared. Always the same pattern: a brief glimpse of The Watcher, followed by a child vanishing without a trace. The town’s adults tried to keep it quiet, even going as far as to forbid anyone from talking about the legend. They thought that maybe if they pretended it didn’t exist, it wouldn’t be real. But the kids, they knew better. They whispered about The Watcher in school, drawing crude pictures of him in the dirt during recess, their voices low and fearful.

One night, nearly twenty years ago, the disappearances stopped. Just like that, no one was taken. The town began to relax, thinking perhaps The Watcher had moved on, satisfied with whatever he had taken from them. But in Rivermoor, peace never lasted long.

Then, a month ago, something changed. Local teenagers had dared each other to go to the forest at night. It was a game, something they did for fun—until it wasn’t. Olivia, a bright and bold sixteen-year-old, was the first to disappear. She had laughed it off, saying that The Watcher was just a story to scare little kids. But when she didn’t return home that night, the town fell back into its old fears. Her friends claimed they hadn’t seen anything unusual; she had simply vanished as they were walking back from the woods.

A week later, Jacob, another teen, vanished. His last known location? The same woods. Panic gripped the town once again, whispers of The Watcher spreading like wildfire. People claimed they saw the figure at the edge of the forest, always there but never moving. The police searched the woods, but they never found any sign of the missing teens.

One evening, a young man named Daniel, new to the town and unaware of its dark past, decided to investigate the disappearances himself. He didn’t believe in ghosts or curses, and he certainly didn’t believe in The Watcher. Armed with a flashlight and a sense of determination, he ventured into the forest alone. He walked for hours, seeing nothing but trees and hearing nothing but the rustling of leaves. Just as he was about to turn back, he heard it—a voice, faint and trembling, calling his name.

He froze. The voice was familiar. It was Olivia. His heart pounded in his chest as he followed the sound deeper into the woods. The voice grew louder, more desperate. “Daniel, help me... please...” She sounded terrified.

But as he pushed forward, the air around him grew colder, unnaturally cold. He couldn’t shake the feeling that someone—or something—was watching him. His flashlight flickered and then died, plunging him into darkness. The whispers grew louder, not just Olivia’s voice anymore, but many others. It felt like a crowd was surrounding him, their voices overlapping in a terrifying chorus of pleas and warnings.

Daniel spun around, his breath catching in his throat. There, just on the edge of his vision, was a shadowy figure. It didn’t move, didn’t make a sound. It just stood there, staring—or at least he assumed it was staring. The longer he looked at it, the more the darkness seemed to swallow it up, until it was barely a shadow among shadows.

The voices grew louder, echoing in his mind, filling him with dread. He could no longer tell which direction he had come from. Panic set in. He tried to run, but it felt like the forest was closing in on him, the trees twisting and shifting, trapping him within their gnarled branches. The figure remained still, always just far enough away that he could never quite make out its form.

Daniel stumbled and fell to the ground. His breath came in ragged gasps as he tried to calm himself. But then, out of the darkness, a hand reached out—a small, pale hand. Olivia. Her face appeared, ghostly pale, eyes wide with fear. She was mouthing something, but no sound came out. She pointed behind him, and with every ounce of courage he had left, Daniel turned.

There stood The Watcher.

The figure was no longer distant. It was right in front of him now, towering over him, its form still shadowy and undefined, but its presence overwhelming. The air around it seemed to pulse with a dark energy, and Daniel could feel it tugging at his very soul. His legs refused to move. He was frozen in place, trapped by The Watcher’s gaze.

And then, just as suddenly as it had appeared, The Watcher vanished, leaving only silence in its wake. The voices stopped. The forest was still once more.

Daniel never spoke of what happened that night. He returned to town, shaken but alive. But he wasn’t the same. He avoided the forest at all costs, and though he tried to forget, the memory of The Watcher haunted him. The disappearances in Rivermoor never stopped, and the whispers continued to spread.

Because once The Watcher had marked you, there was no escape.

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    Written by Bellian Arix Arifin