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What if I were in his shoes?

For Kayleigh Fraser's micro-fiction challenge

By Mohammed DarasiPublished about a month ago 1 min read
What if I were in his shoes?
Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

I’ve finally found him. I chased him two miles, but that’s him there. He thought I would give up? How could he run on those tattered shoes? Who's that raggedy little girl? Why not take care of her instead of running around stea- oh.

Tires screech as he drives away.

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About the Creator

Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a month ago

    Such a well written story about the sad plight of all too many of our less well off brothers and sisters.👍🏼

  • JBazabout a month ago

    I read the explanation and I get it.. nice one

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    I don't understand 😅 If you don't mind, can you please explain it to me? 😅

  • Donna Reneeabout a month ago

    Oooh nice one, Mohammed! I’d better check out this challenge 😁

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