Vintage Wheels
Vocal Community Microfiction Series - Wheel
Every time I tell my date I collect vintage wheels, it always goes like this:
Why didn't you roll up in it?
It's in the shop.
Can you take me for a ride?
Not really. It's a one-seater.
Can I see pictures of it?
I sigh and show them. The reactions are all the same:
You must be joking.
I'm not.
Seriously?
I'm serious.
You lied to me!
No I didn't!
Afterwards I pay for dinner and never see them again.
It's not my fault though.
I told them it was a one-seater.
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ROTFL🤣🤣🤣 Economical too!!! Love it!!!💕❤️
I was not expecting those wheels!
Ooh I like the twist (also, how cool would that be??). “Afterwards, I pay for dinner” is stuck in my head. What a good representation of a transactional series of dates; I feel for the speaker here.
Oi! One seater. Hahahahahahah..Very well played Lorne. I love it.
LOL very cool story!! Here's my Word Hunt entry! https://vocal.media/fiction/a-vicious-vendetta
Hehe!! I was wondering how you were going to twist this! Loved the creativity and the visual to go with it!!
Lol. Well played.
🤣 Nice! Congrats on getting to all 40 🎉
A true classic! Well done!
Lol! Good one. 😁
That's not vintage! That's classic! Naysayers gonna naysay.
Nice punch-image! Very creative!
Nice take on the challenge ❤️
Lol, was not expecting that! Also, Congratulations on your 40th! What you did wasn't an easy feat but you did it! I hope you're proud of yourself because I definitely am!
You have to watch out for those technicalities; they’ll get you every time. Excellent job as always.
Ah, you've raised the province of speed dating to new heights!
Haha, good one!
Ha ha, nice . Your Almost finished the micro, keep on writing
LOL! I love your humor and wit 🤗 Another great one!
Love it. Well done.
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Very funny!!! Congratulations for accomplishing your feat...!!!