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Unveiling Ayana

Luxury, love and lurking danger.

By Zahra NazwaPublished 2 years ago • 4 min read

Chapter 1: A Message Ayana frowned as she stared at her phone screen. A new message popped up from an unknown number. No name, no saved contact. Who could this be? She let out a sigh, curiosity creeping in. Her mind wandered, trying to guess who might’ve sent it. A friend? An acquaintance? Or… a stranger? With her heart beating a little faster, she opened the message. "Be careful. Someone likes watching you from afar." Ayana froze. Her heartbeat quickened. Was this… a joke or something serious? Her hands trembled slightly as she typed a reply: "What do you mean? How do you know?" The reply came almost instantly. "I just observe. Not everyone realizes when they’re being watched." Ayana swallowed hard. A mix of curiosity and unease bubbled inside her. Who was this person? And why did they seem to know more about her than they should? This was getting weird. What was this supposed to mean? She tried to think back—had she met someone who might recognize her and have a reason to send this kind of message? But no matter how hard she tried, her mind drew a blank. Something felt off, and that feeling only grew stronger. Her eyes stayed locked on the screen, fingers hovering over the keyboard, unsure whether to reply. Taking a deep breath, she tried to steady herself. Who was this? She tapped on the unknown number’s profile, hoping for a clue. Nothing. No picture, no name—just a blank number that only added to the mystery. Biting her lip, Ayana's mind raced. Could this be some kind of prank from her friends? Or just a random creep messing with her? But… how did they know about her habits? She swallowed her nerves and typed out a firm reply: "I don’t like games like this." Seconds passed. Then minutes. No reply. Ayana exhaled in relief, hoping that was the end of it. But just as she was about to put her phone down, the screen lit up again. "This isn’t a game, Ayana. I just want to make sure you’re safe." Her heartbeat pounded against her ribs. This wasn’t just some random message anymore—this was something else. Why did this person sound like they were actually watching her? Without thinking, her fingers moved swiftly across the keyboard. "If you really care, tell me who you are." Message sent. But this time, there was no immediate reply. The silence stretched on. Five minutes. Ten. Half an hour. Nothing. Frustration mixed with curiosity. Whoever this was, they had successfully gotten under her skin. And the longer she waited without an answer, the deeper that feeling burrowed. Ayana clenched her jaw. Was this person deliberately messing with her? Why go silent now? Half an hour turned into a full hour. Still nothing. With an annoyed huff, she tossed her phone onto the bed and ran a hand down her face, trying to shake off the uneasy feeling settling in her chest. But the words kept replaying in her head. "I just want to make sure you’re safe." What did that even mean? Why did it sound so ominous? Ayana paced back and forth in her room, replaying every possible encounter in her head. Had there been anyone suspicious? Anyone who might’ve been keeping an eye on her without her knowing? Nothing. Sighing, she grabbed her phone again. If this person was trying to creep her out, she wasn’t going to let them win. "If you really care about my safety, then tell me who you are. If not, I’m just going to assume this is some pathetic prank." Message sent. This time, the response came quicker than expected. "Alright. If you’re that curious, take a look outside —your window." Her breath hitched. Her gaze immediately snapped to her bedroom window. The night outside was dark, only dimly lit by the streetlights. Hands trembling, she took a hesitant step forward, pulling the curtain aside—just a tiny bit. Her eyes scanned the front yard. The street was empty. No one was there. But… Across the road, standing under the dim glow of a streetlamp— A figure. Motionless. Silent. Ayana staggered back, her breath caught in her throat. Her phone buzzed again. "He's always watching you, Ayana." Panic clawed at her chest. Her grip tightened on the curtain as her mind whirled. This wasn’t just some random text. Whoever this was… they were watching her. And that meant this wasn’t just a joke. Frozen in place, Ayana’s fingers clutched at the fabric of her curtain. Her body refused to move as she stared at the dark figure outside. Who was that? How long had they been standing there? Her heart pounded violently, and for the first time since this strange exchange began, fear completely took over. This wasn’t just some creepy text. This was real. With shaking hands, she grabbed her phone and typed as fast as she could. "Who the hell are you? And who’s the person watching me?" Silence. Ayana glanced back outside. The figure was still there, standing unnervingly still. Her mind raced. What should she do? Call someone? The police? Her parents? But what if this was just some weird misunderstanding? No. This was not a misunderstanding. Her fingers quickly scrolled through her contacts, stopping at one name—Naila. Without hesitation, she hit the call button. "Come on, Nai… pick up," she whispered urgently. The dial tone rang a few times before the line finally connected. "Helloo? What’s up, Ayy?" Naila’s voice was groggy—she must’ve been sleeping. Ayana swallowed hard, her gaze flickering to the window again. The figure hadn’t moved. "Nai… something weird is happening," her voice trembled. "There’s someone outside my mansion. He’s just standing there. Not moving. And I just got these creepy texts—" Naila was instantly alert. "Wait, wait. What do you mean? What kind of person?" "I don’t know!" Ayana’s voice cracked with panic. "Nai… I’m scared. What do I do?" A short pause. Then Naila’s voice came back, firm but calm. "Okay, first—don’t panic. Lock your doors and windows. Your parents aren’t home, right?" Ayana nodded quickly, even though Naila couldn’t see her. "O-okay. I’m locking them now." With shaky steps, she hurried to her bedroom door and turned the lock. Then, cautiously, she peeked out the window again. But this time… The figure was gone. Her breath hitched. Her eyes darted across the street, scanning every shadow, every darkened corner. Nothing. Her phone vibrated. Another message. "Don’t worry, Ayana. I will always protect you." A shiver ran down her spine. Whoever this was, and whoever had been standing outside— Were they the same person? Or were there two of them?

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    Written by Zahra Nazwa