1 BOULDER CREEK CONVEINIENCE STORE- AFTERNOON LONG SHOT OF THE STORE ABOUT NOON TIME
2 INT. BOULDER CREEK CONVEINCE STORE- ATERNOON
RIAN and BRITTNEY, both attractive young ladies are standing
in the middle of an aisle looking at a four pack of toilet
paper. Rian, dressed in brown cowboy boots, blue jean pants,
a plaid shirt, over an olive green undershirt, and a brown
cowboy hat, shakes her head in disgust.
BRITTNEY
Unbelievable
RIAN
God, these prices suck.
Rian rolls her eyes in annoyance.
BRITTNEY
Ten bucks for this, it's extortion.
Brittney, wearing a pink summer dress, white shoes, and a
white cowboy hat, grabs at a pack of beef jerky. Looks at
Rai, who shakes her head no, then looking defeated, puts it
back.
RIAN
Sorry babe, fifteen dollars for jerky?
Ain't happening.
Rian gives Brittney an apologetic look.
BRITTNEY
It would have been cheaper to make it
at home. Speaking of which, can we get
a dehydrator?
Brittney looks excitedly at Rian.
RIAN
Babe, relax. I still have to earn my
first paycheck.
Brittney kisses Rian's cheek and runs over to grab some soda.
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A middle-aged couple walks into the store. BILL, wearing a
blue Hawaiian shirt, and tan cargo shorts walks towards the
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beer. CONNIE, wearing capri pants, blue shirt, beaded
neckless, and a large brim hat, stops to talk with the
CASHIER.
As Brittney comes back to Rian, she looks happy. Bill over
hears their conversation.
BRITTNEY
These good choices?
Rian opens her wallet to show only fifteen dollars. Brittney
starts to look disappointed.
RIAN
Soda, or toilet paper?
BRITTNEY
Toilet paper.
Brittney defeated, takes the soda back. Bill heads back up to
the cash register. Brittney walks back to Rian.
RIAN
Soon, things will get better.
BRITTNEY
I know we don't need the soda. Still
sucks.
In the background, Bill and Connie are paying the cashier and
leave. Taking the toilet paper, and grabbing a bottle of
water, Rian and Brittney walk to the register. They put their
supplies on the counter. Rian reaches for her fifteen
dollars.
CASHEIR
I was told to tell you to keep your
money.
Rian gets a puzzled look on her face.
CASHEIR
That couple who just left said that
they were gifting you forty-dollars
towards your purchase.
Really?
Oh my God!
RIAN
BRITTNEY
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Brittney starts to cry. Rian looks at Brittney.
RIAN
Well, I guess you can get the soda.
BRITTNEY
And a few snacks?
RIAN
Sure
Brittney heads back towards the soda and snacks. Rian looks
at the cashier.
RIAN
Incredible.
CASHEIR
There are still nice people out there.
Brittney comes up behind Rian with soda and some snacks. She
sits the items on the counter, and Rian leans over to kiss
her.
BRITTNEY
Thanks, Mister.
After the transaction, Brittney and Rian grab their supplies
and walk out.
3 EXT. BOULDER CREEK CAMPGROUND-EVENING
RIAN is putting some wood on the campfire. BRITTNEY is
singing and playing her guitar.
RIAN
You sure do sound pretty. I love to
hear you sing.
Rian is hunched over the fire stoking the flame wit a stick.
Brinttney looks down at the guitar.
BRITTNEY
You make me blush, but I sing just for
you.
Rian sits down on the right side of Brittney. Rian looks
around.
RIAN
This is beautiful, I'm glad that we
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decided to do this.
BRITTNEY
Well, we are celebrating.
Rian looks at Brittney, and slides a bit closer. Brittney
nuzzles her head into Rian's shoulder. Rian touches
Brittney's thigh.
RIAN
I'm just anxious.
Brittney sits up and looks hard at Rian.
BRITTNEY
Don't be. You deserve this. You've
worked hard to get this job.
Rian bends down and gets a couple of sodas. She hands one to
Brittney and they toast.
RIAN
To new beginnings!
Rian and Brittney hit their cans together and start to
giggle.
BRITTNEY
Life's gonna change for the better.
A voice comes from off camera.
CONNIE
Look Bill, it's the two lovebirds from
the store.
BILL and CONNIE walk towards Rain and Brittney's campsite.
Brittney looks a bit confused as the couple gets closer.
Hello?
BRITTNEY
CONNIE
Hi, I'm Connie, and this is my husband
Bill. We we just on a stroll and
noticed you two seemed to be
celebrating.
RIAN
Brittney, this is the couple from the
store.
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Brittney still looks a bit confused.
RIAN
They paid for our stuff.
BRITTNEY
Oh!
Brittney gets excited, jumps up, and hugs Bill and Connie.
BRITTNEY
Thank you both, so much! It really
meant a lot to us.
Brittney lets go of the hug and tears up.
BRITTNEY
You two are the nicest ever.
Connie pats Brittney on the back.
CONNIE
It's no problem. You two looked like
you could use some kindness.
RIAN
Would you like to join us? It's the
least we could do
Bill walks up and shakes hands with Rian.
BILL
I'm Bill, nice to meet you.
RIAN
Rian, and this is Brittney.
Rian points at Brittney. Connie takes a seat across from
Rian.
CONNIE
That sounds nice, I'm Connie by the
way.
BRITTNEY
It's really nice to meet you both.
Bill and Brittney shake hands. Connie digs into her bag for
her crocheting needles and some yarn. Bill sits next to
Connie.
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BILL
So, what's the occasion?
CONNIE
Bill, don't be rude.
BRITTNEY
Ri and I are celebrating Ri's new job.
Brittney leans over and gives Rian a peck on the cheek.
BILL
Well, hell, congratulations.
Rian gets a smile.
RIAN
Thank you. I landed a job at an army
base near Paradise's Bluff.
Connie looks up from her craft approvingly.
CONNIE
That's lovely, Bill and I are from the
Bluff.
Bill nods approvingly.
BILL
Those jobs pay fairly well.
Bill stands up.
BILL
I know just the thing. Excuse me for a
moment.
Bill heads out back away from the campsite.
CONNIE
Soon you'll be rolling in the money.
BRITTNEY
I sure hope so.
RIAN
I've never had steady work like this
before.
CONNIE
You'll do well, I'm sure.
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Connie looks around.
CONNIE
I wonder where that man went off too?
Rian looks at Brittney.
RIAN
Sing us a song, baby.
Brittney grabs her guitar tightly, and starts to play. She
starts to sing a melancholy song.
MOMENTS LATER
Bill comes back with some drinks. He sits back down next to
Connie and leans towards her. He whispers in her ear.
BILL
What did I miss?
CONNIE
Rian was just talking about her
nervousness over the new job.
Brittney finishes her song. Bill over enthusiastically claps.
BILL
Bravo my dear! Bravo! Truly special.
Brittney gets a bit shy at the compliment.
BRITTNEY
Thank you, Bill.
Bill hands drinks all around as he sits down.
BILL
So tell us about yourselves.
CONNIE
Bill! They don't know us from Adam.
Sorry girls.
Brittney looks at her drink and puts it down.
BRITTNEY
Maybe later.
RIAN
It's okay Connie, we don't mind. It's
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actually nice to have someone who's
genuinely asking us questions.
Connie gives an approving look. Bill takes a drink. Connie
goes back to crocheting.
BRITTNEY
My family doesn't speak to me. Hell,
this trip feels like it's the first
time things have gone right for us in
a long time.
BILL
Why would your family shun a lovely
girl like you?
BRITTNEY
My father doesn't approve of who I
chose to marry.
Connie looks a Brittney.
CONNIE
Oh?
Rian clenches her jaw.
RIAN
It's always been this way. We were
teased in school for being different.
Brittney stares into the fire. She speaks with a bitter look
on her face.
BRITTNEY
People don't seem to like seeing two
pretty dykes together.
Bill gets a sympathetic look on his face.
BILL
Kids can be cruel. I'm sorry.
BRITTNEY
Adults aren't any better.
CONNIE
You're two sweet girls. We don't
judge.
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BRITTNEY
That's appreciated.
RIAN
It only got worse after graduation.
One night, Brittney's car got tagged
with you lesbos need a good dick.
Bill gets a horrified look across his face. Connie looks down
and shakes her head.
BRITTNEY
Rian got a text saying that he needed
to be raped real good, and know what a
man feels like.
Connie sympathetically looks at Rain.
CONNIE
You poor thing.
Rian hugs Brittney.
RIAN
It's hard to survive when nobody wants
to rent to a lesbian couple.
BILL
We'd rent to you two any day.
Brittney looks at Bill with a puzzled expression. Bill gets
up and moves to sit between Brittney and Rian.
BILL
We know a thing or two about being
landlords. Connie and I have our own
real estate investment company.
CONNIE
We just happen to have a few places in
Paradise's Bluff.
Brittney gets an excited expression.
BRITTNEY
That's awesome.
Brittney looks at Rian.
BRITTNEY
Ri!
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Brittney then gives Bill an enthusiastic hug. Bill looks at
Connie and she smiles back.
BILL
As impressive as that may sound, we've
ran into a slight problem.
Brittney's face turns from excitement to defeat. Rian has a
similar reaction to the news.
BILL
We invested in an apartment complex.
It looked promising at first, but it's
quickly become a money pit.
RIAN
Oh.
BILL
Now we've seem to become slum lords.
CONNIE
William! Don't you dare call us that.
A fearful look comes across Bill's face.
CONNIE
We honestly do try to make sure our
places are as good as can be.
Rian gets a look on her face that says she doesn't really
believe Connie. Connie puts down her crocheting.
CONNIE
We believe that everyone should have a
decent place to stay, regardless of
their income.
Brittney gets a hopeful look in her eyes.
CONNIE
Not everyone can have a luxury
apartment, and none of ours are, but
even low income should be able to
maintain a level of dignity.
Bill nods in agreement and takes a swig of his drink.
BILL
Hell, we've been there ourselves.
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Brittney strums her guitar and stares into the fire.
BRITTNEY
We just need to catch a break. Just
one time.
Rian gets up and kneels in front of Brittney. She grabs
Brittney's hand and kisses it.
RIAN
It's gonna be okay. Life is starting
to look up.
Bill grabs the bottles and takes them back to the box behind
Connie. Then he sits down next to his wife. Rian looks over
her shoulder towards Connie and Bill.
RIAN
We've been dealing with judgmental
people for so long... it's just nice
to meet people who are different.
BILL
It's no problem.
CONNIE
Besides, you did get that new job.
BRITTNEY
Yeah, that'll help.
Brittney pats her belly.
BRITTNEY
Our baby will have a better chance
than we did.
Bill and Connie react to the news.
BILL
Baby?
Rian and Brittney giggle at the reaction. Rian then stands
up.
RIAN
We're having a baby!
Connie gets an even more puzzled look on her face.
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CONNIE
How can..?
BRITTNEY
Oh, Ri's brother donated his seed so
that we could share DNA.
Bill picks up a bottle of Rum, and pours shots.
BILL
Hell, that explains why you haven't
touched your drink. We should
celebrate!
Bill hands Rian a shot. The smell makes Brittney
nauseous.Brittney whispers to Rian.
BRITTNEY
I'm not feeling so good. I think I'm
gonna lie down.
RIAN
Okay baby.
Brittney looks at Connie and Bill.
BRITTNEY
I'm sorry, I think the baby is telling
me to settle down. I'm gonna turn in
for the night.
CONNIE
Get some rest dear.
BILL
Take care.
Brittney gets up and goes to the trailer. Bill tries to hand
Connie a shot, but she declines.
CONNIE
No thanks Sweetie, but you two have
fun. I'm feeling a bit tuckered
myself.
Connie gets up, gives Bill a kiss, and heads towards her
trailer.
CONNIE
Don't party too hard.
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The scene shows Bill and Rian trading shots, and having a
good time.[This will be filmed in 120fps for the slow effect]
4 INT. RIAN'S CAMPER-MORNING
RIAN is passed out on the bed next to BRITTNEY, who's
completely wrapped up in a blanket. The sun from the vent is
pouring down into Rian's eyes. The sunlight causes Rian to
stir. As she opens her eyes, Rian turns her head towards
Brittney who appears to have her back towards Rian. Rian
starts to feels sick and turns her head towards the edge of
the bed. She vomits, then moans and grabs her head.
RIAN
(mumbling) What Ruf niaa
Rian starts to struggle to get up and swings her legs off the
side of the bed. She tries to sit upright. After a few
moments, she gains her composure and standup, stepping into
the vomit. She slips and falls on her butt.
RIAN
Ow!
With a painful expression on her face, Rian pushes herself up
off the floor. She rubs the spot that she landed on with her
right hand.
RIAN
Urp!
Rian looks like she's going to get sick again when she feels
the vomit covering her leg and hand.
RIAN
Shit!
Rian looks towards Brittney to make sure she didn't get
disturbed. Rian hobbles to the sink and gets a washcloth wet.
She then wipes herself down.
RIAN
Never drinking rum again.
Rian throws the washcloth into the sink. She washes her hands
and rubs her temples.She limps towards the bathroom, pulls
down her panties, and sits on the toilet. She rests her head
against the wall. Looking around, she realizes something
isn't right.
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RIAN
Brit? Honey? Was that you?
Rian quickly pulls up her panties and starts to get up. as
she stands, there is a thump and the trailer bounces.
RIAN
Shit! We're moving!
Rian catches her balance. She then gets to a window and pulls
back the curtain to reveal that the window is blackened out.
RIAN
The hell?
Rian looks towards the bed.
RIAN
Brit? Baby?
With another bump, the trailer jerks up, knocking Rian to the
floor. Rian tries to get up quickly, but as she raises, she
smacks her head on the table, and knocks herself out.
5 EXT. BOULDER CREEK CAMPGROUND-NIGHT BILL and RIAN are still celebrating.
BILL
I hope she gets to feeling better.
Rian holds up her shot glass.
RIAN
Fix this for me, will ya?
Bill grabs her glass, and fills both glasses up. He then
hands Rian back her glass.
RIAN
I guess the rum made her sick.
Bill gets a serious look on his face.
BILL
But she didn't drink.
RIAN
She's got super pregnancy smell.
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Bill and Rian bust up laughing. Bill raises his glass.
BILL
Salue! A toast to super pregnancy
senses!
They continue laughing, then Rian raises her glass.
RIAN
To new friends, and new starts!
BILL
New jobs, and kids!
Rian stops, and gets a serious look on her face.
RIAN
I'm gonna be a parent.
6 INT. RIAN'S CAMPER-MORNING
RIAN starts coming too. She tries to clear the fog and get
focus back. She starts to shake her head. The trailer starts
to slow down.
RIAN
Oh God! We're stopping! Brit, help!
Rian starts trying to get back to her feet. As she gets
steady the trailer speeds up and she looses her balance.
RIAN
Brit! Baby! Wake up!
While the trailer moving at higher speed, Rian struggles to
get to the bedroom.
RIAN
I need to to wake up.
7 EXT. BOULDER CREEK CAMPGROUND-NIGHT
CONNIE is cleaning around the campsite. She's putting bottles
in a trash bag. BRITTNEY walks out of her trailer, yawning
and stretching. Seeing movement, she gets startled.
BRITTNEY
Shit!
Connie looks at Brittney.
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BRITTNEY
You scared me.
CONNIE
I'm sorry dear.
Connie continues to clean.
BRITTNEY
It's no, you're good. It's just...
Connie stops and looks at Brittney.
CONNIE
What is it?
BRITTNEY
You and Bill are great.
CONNIE
Thank you. You and Rian are both
wonderful too. But?
BRITTNEY
It's just...things are finally going
good for us for once. I'm just scared.
Connie walks over to Brittney and gets closer to talk. Then
she gives Brittney a hug.
CONNIE
It's gonna be alright Sweetie. Things
are going to be okay.
Brittney looks unsure of herself. Tears start to roll down
Brittney's cheeks as she shuffles back a few steps.
BRITTNEY
Oh, Connie...It's just life has been
so rough... even before Ri came into
my life.
Connie gets a surprise look on her face.
CONNIE
I figured that you two had been
together forever.
BRITTNEY
We were fifteen.
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CONNIE
Anyway, you were saying?
BRITTNEY
Before Ri...my life was a mess. Mom
died when I was eleven.
Connie gives Brittney a tighter hug and pats her back.
CONNIE
I'm sorry, it must've been rough. How
did your daddy take it?
Brittney gets a disgusted look on her face.
BRITTNEY
My father wasn't very nice. He lost it
when my mom died. He started drinking,
but it didn't stop there...
Connie gets a shocked look on her face.
CONNIE
He hit you?
Brittney nodded.
CONNIE
Oh, honey.
BRITTNEY
There were night's, he'd get really
drunk...then he'd get lonely...did
things...
Connie starts to tear up.
BRITTNEY
He'd get on top and pin me down. The
smell of rum on his breath.
Connie starts to get uncomfortable with the conversation. She
grabs a shovel and starts to work on putting out the fire.
BRITTNEY
The sound of his voice, calling my
mom's name out.
Connie looks at Brittney.
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CONNIE
No child should endure that.
BRITTNEY
After that, I got into drugs,
partying.
Connie goes back to cleaning up.
CONNIE
All kids rebel at some point.
Brittney starts to sob.
CONNIE
Honey, it's okay with everything you
went through. I'm not judging you.
BRITTNEY
I'm not sure I can do this.
Brittney falls to her knees. Connie moves in like she's going
to try and catch Brittney.
CONNIE
I know it's scary, but you have Rian.
BRITTNEY
My childhood was so fucked up. I don't
want this baby's life to be hard.
CONNIE
You can only do your best. You and
Rian seem to have good heads on your
shoulders.
BRITTNEY
After all the abortions, this may be
my only chance to have a re-do.
Connie gets a scowl across her face.
CONNIE
What did you say?
BRITTNEY
I had a few abortions. I was
stupid..and reckless...
Connie gets angry at hearing this and starts to move towards
Brittney with a threatening look.
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CONNIE
Abortions? As in more than one?
Brittney starts to look at Connie.
BRITTNEY
Yes, Connie..what..what...
CONNIE
How could you? How could you end a
precious baby's life like that?
Connie picks up the shovel again and starts to grip it tight.
Brittney gets frightened and starts to scoot back.
BRITTNEY
I was scared.
CONNIE
There are other options!
Connie lifts the shovel above her head.
BRITTNEY
What are you doing?
CONNIE
Some of us aren't lucky to have
children!
Brittney tries to shield herself while Connie smashes down
the shovel on Brittney's head.
8 INT. RIAN'S CAMPER-MORNING
RIAN pulls back the blanket to reveal BRITTNEY covered in
blood, with her head smashed in. Rian falls back and screams.
RIAN
Oh, no...
Rian crawls over to Brittney.
RIAN
Oh...baby...
Rian kisses Brittney's cheek.
RIAN
Oh...baby
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The trailer stops and the momentum shifts. Rian reacts and
starts towards the door.
9 EXT. WAREHOUSE-MORNING
The trailer is being backed into a dilapidated warehouse.
CONNIE gets out and starts to unhook the trailer. Screaming
and banging are being heard from the inside. Connie double
checks to make sure there's no way to escape. She then goes
back towards the highway and hitchhikes back to camp.
10 INT. RIAN'S CAMPER-MORNING
As the camper backs up, the light from the vents stat to go
dark. The trailer stops, and RIAN begins to look around.
RIAN
Help! Help!
Rian starts to scream and bang the walls as the noise of
Connie unlatching the trailer.
RIAN
Someone...help...
11 INT. BILL AND CONNIE'S RV
CONNIE sneaks in to the RV and undresses. She fills up a
glass of water and takes some pills. She heads to bed where
BILL is still sleeping.
Bill wakes up and grabs his head.
BILL
I'm not twenty-one.
Bill looks at Connie, who's sleeping heavy. She starts to
stir and thrash like she's having a nightmare. Bill wraps his
arms around her. Connie jerks wide awake.
CONNIE
No!
Bill pulls Connie down and kisses her forehead.
BILL
It's okay, I'm here.
Connie starts to tear up.
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BILL
You're not in the war.
CONNIE
Those girls! Bill...I...I...
BILL
No, sweetie. it was just a dream.
12 EXT. WAREHOUSE-EVENING
A MAN and his KIDS are in a pick-up truck on the highway. The
LITTLE BOY posts to a warehouse in the distance.
BOY
Look Daddy! Let's check that out!
FADE TO BLACK.
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