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Tour Bus

A Story Every Day in 2024 Sept 7th 251/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Tour Bus
Photo by Federico Beccari on Unsplash

"And so, you'll notice on your right, Loch Nagar where the two clans of the McKenzies and the McDougalls fought a bloody battle on its shores in the 1300s. No monsters though! It's rumoured certain times of the year you can hear the battle...holy shit! What the fuck is that? It's like a giant wave! Is that water? Pete, what is that? Shit! It's going to hit us! Fuck! What can we do? Okay, those of you on the top deck, I don't want you to panic but you need to move. Now! And people here, close the windows! NOW!"

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100 words exactly

I wrote this to a prompt:

You’re in the tour bus when you see it in the distance—a series of rolling clouds, like a tidal wave made out of water vapor.

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    Written by Rachel Deeming