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The Washing of the World

On the Clarity That Comes After the Storm

By Mark Lim Published about an hour ago 3 min read
The Washing of the World
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The rainwater dripped from the leaves above us. The city lights were barely visible through the trees.

It was a gentle sound. Rhythmic. Soothing. Drip. Drip. Drip. Like a metronome counting down the seconds of the old world and ticking up the seconds of the new. Each drop hit the mud, the leaves, the pavement, washing away the dust, the pollen, the debris of the day. It washed away the footprints of the Client. It washed away the scent of his fear. It washed away the last remnants of the lie.

I stood there, watching the waterfall. Watching it bead on the surface of the leaves, heavy and clear, before falling to join the earth below. It was a cycle. Ancient. Unstoppable. Pure.

The Client was still on his knees. He hadn’t moved. His head was bowed, his shoulders shaking with silent sobs. The gun lay in the mud beside him, half-buried, already beginning to rust in the damp air. It looked like a relic from another era. A toy from a childhood that had ended badly.

I didn’t pick it up. I didn’t kick it away. I just let it be. Let the rain take it. Let the earth swallow it. Let time do its work.

Through the dense canopy of rubber trees and bamboo, I could see the faint, hazy glow of Kuala Lumpur. The Petronas Towers were just twin spears of light in the distance, piercing the low-hanging clouds. The highways were ribbons of red and white, flowing like blood through the veins of the city. It looked beautiful from here. Distant. Detached. Safe.

But I knew what it cost. I knew the secrets hidden in those towers. The deals weremade in those cars. The lives broken in those apartments. I had been part of that machinery. I had been a cog in the engine. And now, I was free of it.

Not because I had escaped. But because I had outgrown it.

The rain fell harder now. A steady drumming on the leaves. A curtain of silver between me and the city. Between me and the past. Between me and the person I used to be.

I closed my eyes. Let the water hit my face. It was cold. Shocking. Real. It ran down my cheeks, mixing with the tears I hadn’t realized I was crying. It soaked into my hair, my clothes, my skin. It didn’t hurt. It felt like baptism. Like cleansing. Like forgiveness.

I am here, the rain seemed to say. And you are here. And we are both real.

I opened my eyes. The Client was looking up at me. His face was wet. His eyes were red. But he was alive. He was breathing. He was present.

"Go," I said. My voice was soft, carried away by the sound of the rain.

He blinked. Confused. "What?"

"Go home," I said. "Take off the suit. Wash your face. Look in the mirror. And decide who you want to be. Not who you think you have to be. Not who the money says you are. But who you are."

He stared at me. For a long moment, I thought he would argue. I thought he would stand up, grab the gun, try one last time to assert control.

But he didn’t.

He nodded. Slowly. Weakly. But honestly.

He stood up. His legs shook. He wiped the mud from his knees. He looked at the gun one last time, then turned away from it. He didn’t pick it up. He left it there. In the mud. In the rain. In the dark.

He walked back toward the road. Toward his car. Toward the city. Toward the life he had built on sand.

I watched him go. I didn’t feel triumph. I didn’t feel pity. I just felt… peace.

He had his journey. I had mine. And for the first time, our paths were no longer tangled.

When he was gone, when the sound of his car engine faded into the distance, I was alone again.

But not lonely.

Just alone.

With the rain. With the trees. With the truth.

I looked up at the sky. The clouds were breaking. The rain was slowing. A single star blinked into existence, faint but persistent, above the tree line.

I smiled.

Then I turned toward the village. Toward the smoke. Toward the light.

Toward home.

My steps were light. My heart was open. My hands were empty.

And I was ready.

Fantasy

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Mark Lim

Hi I am mark an automotive student and a car, tech and food enthusiast ! Im gonna try and post daily & hope you enjoy what I write and do share my page with people you know. I would gladly appreciate it! Cheers

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    Written by Mark Lim