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The Train Between Two Shadows

The last train left the station at 11:47 p.m.

By Silvia FelacoPublished a day ago • 3 min read

Clara remembered the time because the clock above platform three had stopped at exactly that minute. Its hands never moved, even though the station announcements continued and trains arrived and departed as if nothing were wrong.

She was alone in the carriage.

Or at least, she thought she was.

Outside, the countryside disappeared into darkness. Every few seconds, the windows reflected her pale face, her tired eyes and the small suitcase resting beside her feet.

She had been travelling for three hours, but she couldn't remember buying the ticket.

In fact, she couldn't remember where she was going.

She reached into her coat pocket and found a folded piece of paper.

There were only six words written on it:

Do not get off at midnight.

Clara read the sentence twice.

Then she heard footsteps.

At the other end of the carriage, a man was standing beside the door. He wore a dark coat and held a newspaper folded beneath his arm.

She hadn't seen him enter.

"Excuse me," she said. "Do you know where this train is going?"

The man slowly raised his eyes.

"That depends," he answered. "Are you travelling towards something or away from it?"

Clara frowned.

"I just want to get home."

The man smiled sadly.

"Everyone says that."

The lights flickered.

For a moment, the windows became mirrors. Clara saw herself sitting in the seat, but behind her reflection stood another woman.

The woman had the same face.

The same eyes.

The same frightened expression.

Clara turned around.

Nobody was there.

When she looked back at the window, the second woman was still standing behind her reflection.

And she was crying.

"Who are you?" Clara whispered.

The man closed his newspaper.

"Perhaps the more important question is who you were before you boarded this train."

A distant announcement interrupted them.

"Next stop: The Station of Forgotten Things."

Clara stood up.

"That's impossible. There is no such station."

The man looked at his watch.

"Midnight is approaching."

She glanced at the folded paper in her hand.

Do not get off at midnight.

The train began to slow down.

Outside, a small station appeared beneath a single yellow lamp. There were no passengers, no signs, no buildings. Only an empty platform and a woman standing at its far end.

The woman in the window.

The doors opened.

Cold air entered the carriage.

"Don't you want to know why you're here?" the man asked.

Clara looked at him.

"Tell me."

He unfolded his newspaper. It was completely blank.

"Three years ago, you boarded a train just like this one. You were carrying a suitcase, a photograph and a letter you never sent."

Clara's breathing became uneven.

A memory surfaced.

A rainy evening.

A telephone ringing.

A voice asking her to come back.

And her decision to leave.

"Where is the letter?" she asked.

The man pointed towards the empty seat beside her.

There, beneath the suitcase, was a small envelope.

Her name was written on it.

Clara opened it with trembling hands.

Inside was a photograph of two little girls standing beside a railway station.

One was Clara.

The other was her younger sister, Anna.

On the back, someone had written:

Some departures are not about leaving a place. They are about leaving someone behind.

Clara remembered everything.

The argument.

The accident.

The final conversation she had refused to finish.

She looked towards the platform.

The woman was no longer crying.

She was smiling.

"Anna?" Clara whispered.

The train doors began to close.

For the first time, Clara understood the warning.

The train wasn't taking her somewhere.

It was giving her one last chance to remember.

She stepped towards the door, but the man stopped her.

"If you get off, you will have to face what you have spent years avoiding."

"And if I stay?"

"Then you will keep travelling between the person you were and the person you pretend to be."

The clock above the door changed.

11:59.

Clara looked at her reflection.

There were no longer two women in the glass.

Only one.

She closed her eyes.

And stepped onto the platform.

The doors shut behind her.

When she opened her eyes again, she was standing at the old railway station in her hometown.

It was morning.

A train passed in the distance.

Her suitcase was gone.

Her hands were empty.

But for the first time in three years, she could breathe.

On the platform bench lay a small photograph.

Two little girls.

And beneath it, a final message:

You cannot change the past, Clara. But you can stop living inside it.

She looked towards the rising sun.

Somewhere behind her, a train whistle echoed through the morning.

And then, silence.

Perhaps every journey has two shadows: the one we leave behind and the one we carry with us.

And sometimes, the longest journey is the one that finally brings us back to ourselves.

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    Written by Silvia Felaco