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The Third Door in the Old Corridor

Some Doors Should Never Be Opened

By RiwapraPublished 2 years ago • 5 min read
Third Door

The antique shop bell chimed as I stepped out into the chilly night air, my breath forming little clouds in front of me. Madame Elvira's final warning echoed in my ears: "No one comes back from that corridor unchanged, Raya. Some doors should remain unopened."

I tightened my scarf and glanced at my watch - 11:09 PM. Two more minutes.

The alley behind the shop looked ordinary enough during daylight - just a narrow passage between brick buildings where stray cats prowled and old newspapers collected in damp corners. But at exactly 11:11 every night, something unnatural happened. The alley stretched longer than physics should allow, its walls seeming to breathe as dim gas lamps flickered to life along its length.

Last week, my little brother Niko had dared me to time it. We'd watched in stunned silence as the bricks rippled like water and the alley extended itself into impossible depths. That's when Niko heard the voice.

"Ray..." he'd whispered, eyes wide. "It's calling my name."

I'd grabbed his arm, but he shook me off with that reckless grin I knew too well. "I'll just peek inside! Back in five minutes!"

That was seventy-two hours ago.

My watch beeped softly. 11:11.

As I watched, the familiar transformation began. The alley walls seemed to step back, the cobblestones beneath my feet shifting like puzzle pieces rearranging themselves. The air smelled suddenly of ozone and old books, that peculiar scent that always preceded a thunderstorm in grandmother's attic.

Taking a deep breath, I stepped forward.

The change was immediate. The sounds of the town - distant car engines, a dog barking - cut off abruptly. My footsteps echoed strangely, as if I walked through a cathedral rather than a narrow urban passage. The gas lamps cast long, wavering shadows that didn't quite match the shapes around them.

Doors began appearing along the walls, their numbers shimmering like heat haze.

Door One: Memories

I pressed my palm against its surface and immediately jerked back as a childhood memory flooded my mind - Niko's seventh birthday, when he'd cried because I'd gotten a bigger slice of cake. The memory was so vivid I could taste the vanilla frosting.

Door Two: Dreams

This one showed me last night's nightmare - Niko trapped behind glass, screaming soundlessly as shadowy figures closed in around him. My stomach twisted. This wasn't just a dream. It was real. He was showing me where he was.

But where was the third door?

I walked further down the ever-lengthening corridor, my pulse quickening. The air grew thicker, harder to breathe. Then I saw it - a black door with no number, materializing from the shadows like a developing photograph.

As I reached for the handle, the gas lamps flared violently. Words carved themselves into the wood before my eyes:

Door Three: The Forgotten

The moment my fingers touched the brass knob, a jolt ran up my arm like static electricity. The door swung open silently, revealing not the alley's continuation, but an enormous circular library that defied all spatial logic.

The ceiling soared hundreds of feet above, lost in gloom. Books floated through the air like lazy birds, some trailing wisps of smoke. The smell of old paper and candle wax was overwhelming. And there, in the center of the vast space, stood a glass cage - exactly like in my dream.

Niko pressed his palms against the transparent walls, his mouth moving but no sound emerging. His eyes widened when he saw me, frantically gesturing to something behind me.

I whirled around to find a woman standing so close our noses nearly touched. She wore an elaborate Victorian mourning dress, her ashen face partially obscured by a black lace veil. When she smiled, her teeth gleamed like polished bone.

"Another reader," she murmured in a voice that scraped like pages turning. "How delightful."

I stumbled back, hitting one of the floating books. It fell to the floor with a thunderous crash, pages fluttering open to reveal not text, but shifting images - moments from people's lives.

The woman - the Librarian, as she called herself - circled me slowly. "Your brother was unusually curious. Most don't make it past the Second Door." She gestured to the thousands of books surrounding us. "Every volume here contains a life. Some merely borrowed... others permanently added to the collection."

My blood ran cold as I understood. The books weren't just records - they were prisons.

Niko pounded on the glass, pointing desperately at the book he'd been holding when trapped. I could just make out the title: The Unfinished Story of Niko Veldt.

The Librarian followed my gaze. "Ah yes. Such potential in that one. But stories need endings, don't they?" She reached toward my face. "Perhaps you'd like to help write his final chapter?"

I ducked, making a desperate lunge for Niko's book. The moment my fingers touched the cover, pain lanced through my skull - a thousand memories that weren't mine flooded my mind. I saw soldiers dying on ancient battlefields, lovers whispering final goodbyes, explorers vanishing into jungle mists. All the stories the library had collected over centuries.

Gritting my teeth, I focused on one thought: Niko. My brother. Coming home.

With a scream of effort, I slammed the book shut.

The effect was instantaneous. The glass cage exploded outward in a shower of crystalline shards. The Librarian howled as her form began unraveling like loose thread, the library itself shaking apart around us.

"Run!" Niko grabbed my arm as books rained from the sky, their pages bursting into blue flame as they fell. We sprinted through the collapsing nightmare, the corridor buckling like a dying serpent behind us.

We tumbled out onto cold, normal cobblestones just as the town clock struck midnight. The alley behind us was once again just an alley - no doors, no unnatural length.

But as we caught our breath, laughing with giddy relief, I felt something in my jacket pocket. A single folded page, crisp as new parchment. In elegant script, it read:

"The Fourth Door awaits those brave enough to finish what they start. Return when the moon swallows the sun."

Niko's smile faded as he saw it. "We're not really done, are we?"

I stared at the paper, which dissolved into ash moments later. Somewhere beyond the waking world, I could almost hear the whisper of turning pages.

(End - For Now)

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    Written by Riwapra