The Situation
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Inside the Small Restroom, I gaped at my Reflection and softly spoke to myself, “Will, I feel trapped forever”.
A wavering spectacle
Of security and Doubt-
Washed over my Sanity, but didn't
Kill my Pride;
As Humans, We Stack our hopes on High, and we Plunge head first.
I left the Restroom and I noticed that everyone was leaving…
“Restaurant is closing in 5 minutes Sir,” a waiter said to me as I hurried to the table I had been sitting at Earlier…
I retrieved my jacket from the back of the chair and I scurried out the Door.
Once inside my car, I searched for my phone and I realized that I sat it on the table when I picked up the jacket!
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Comments (11)
This one is really amazing like another moment of silence somehow in the end I laughed I dont know why maybe because it is so human with the moment and experience of life and emotion thoughts from it, an image and how You wrote it very sophisticated one and title which was the reason I arrived in here ! it has this climate of reading and being in the mind and the world of another mentally and visually !
Splendid and relateable!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Such a small simplistic moment but it said so much without saying, well done Lonzo! 🤍
That kinda sounds like me. I always forget things when I'm in a hurry! Loved your story!
Run back quickly. Surely they already know you'd be returning! (Can anyone survive anymore without their cellphone in hand?)
Good work Lonzo. What an ending. I hope he went back for his phone.
I love the idea of a character so lost in thought, hurried on, and forgetful. Very relatable! Well done 😁
Very well done!
I could feel that urgency of the constant shifting in focus. The world does hurry us all along. We'll done.
Nice micro store very realist, when A person is understress
oooooh. Lots of intrigue built into such a short bit of writing. Like this a lot, Lonzo!