The Prophetess And The Witch
One Twin Born with a Inborn Gift
Lika and Kali were identical twins. Lika has been born with a gift to prophecy. Kali was always jealous of the gift her sister had. Kali started wicca at thirteen to try to out shine her twin sister. Kali started with the Ouija board, which was the Ancient Egyptian way of foreseeing good luck.
Their family relationship started to deteriorate because Kali was controlled by the entity in the Ouija board. Lika warned her sister but Kali was already too far gone.
The curse of the Ouija board, cause their parents to die in untimely death.
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (21)
Oh no sibling rivalry gone wrong
I liked that. I have noticed a lot of these microfiction stories are like the blurb on the sleeve of a novel, getting you excited for what's to come. They are great names for the twins.
Trying to outshine each other, they lost what loved most ❤️
Great micro fiction! I enjoyed reading that.
I read this when you published it but I didn't leave a comment and I thought I did ❤️😉📝well sorry my friend❗ This Story is awesome and I like the names of the characters...
Yikes! Be careful what you wish for, eh?
Oh man!!! That didn't turn out like I thought it would. When healthy competition goes bad. I enjoyed the story :)
Great story and you chose an image that's magical. I love mysticism so this was right up my alley.
That was a great weaving of different mystical entities
Oh man, such an intriguing take! Great job packing so much emotion in here; I’d love to know more! ❤️
A brilliant display of how utilizing magic can wreck havoc on a person's life! I enjoyed this cautionary tale! Well done Mariann!
Amazing!!! Well done, Mariann!!!💖💖💕
Oooh this is lovely. You evoke so much emotion in just a small amount of words that you really feel for poor Kali. I want to know more! Great job!
I do feel sorry for the parents. But poor Kali. I mean she only wanted to outshine her sister but she went about it the wrong way. So now Kali is still controlled my the entity from the Ouija board. I wonder if it can be stopped to save Kali. Hopping for a part 2!
Mariann this was a great story! I love its balance of simplicity and complexity in the creation of the plot and the characters! Do you have plans to extend it into a large story at all?
nicely done
A tale as old as time itself, be it of Cain & Abel, Rachel & Leah, or Jacob & Esau (or any of countless others). Jealousy & the unintended toll it exacts.
Ohhh I need to read the full version of this one! 😁 Typo in the first line? Wear, should be were?
good job, the world you made in such a short amount of words was impressive. great job
Don't trifle with dark/light magic. Consequences await.
Very good microfiction story. The words you wrote caused me to imagine the dynamics between the twin sisters. There was irony in the fact that the jealousy Kali felt toward Lika was perceived by her prophetess sister as an omen of danger ahead. The climax of their parents' deaths shows that Lika's warning was fulfilled. And you told it all in less than 100 words. Well done!