I wasn't aware it was stolen until it was too late, that is the beauty of a perfect theft. Eventually I noticed. I woke one morning and knew it was gone. Unfortunately, it took years before I realized it.
It began with an encounter, an average night in an average bar. From the way she smiled, I should have known better.
No one smiles that much unless they have an ulterior motive and boy, did she have a motive. Feigning interest I listened, until suddenly I was captivated. I mean, I melted on every honey dipped word that flowed from her beautiful mouth.
Her dark eyes burned with intensity as she grasped my hands whispering. "You deserve it all, tell me you want everything I have to offer?"
I stuttered "Yeah, I want it all."
"Do you trust me?"
I nodded.
"Say you trust me."
"I trust you." I heard the words, not realizing it was me who spoke them.
"I promise, you will have it all." Leaning in, she kissed me. “Tomorrow, it begins.”
Now I have it all, money, fame, adoration. All it cost me was my soul, stolen with a promise, sealed with a kiss.
Damned forever.
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (10)
I love this, it has that forbidden and sultry feel to it! Really well written JBaz!! Nice work!
nice one
Nicely done 😈
Oh wow. This is great. That ending was not where I was expecting it to go. Well done.
Captivating! Didn't anticipate the ending
So interesting. Loved your twist.
Nice twist, Jason! I think I know her. Well done!
Oh I was thinking his youth was stolen but I did not see that coming. That's even better! I loved your take on this!
Whoa, that was a surprise! Very creative take. Well done Jason!
Jason, what a tale & twist!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕