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The Perfect Place

Looks can be deceiving

By Sarah DanaherPublished 4 months ago 4 min read
The Perfect Place
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The fresh air brought a sense of well-being as Jason left his rental. The little place was the ideal spot to clear his head. All around, the charm of a rural town appeared, with its older, quaint homes and country churches. After leaving the city, Jason was glad to take a brief break in the village of Bumbleburgh. The dozen homes around the main square looked picturesque. Jason wandered down the quiet main street to stretch his legs and check out the local shop. The smell of home cooking lured him in as the nearby diner appeared to be open. He headed for the entrance and was met by an angry look from a woman in a quirky apron.

“Locals only. You’re not welcome,” the woman stated rudely.

Jason could only turn away toward the shops, clearly identified as an outsider. As more townspeople emerged, an empty stare entered the street. All would pause and stare as he passed along the street. Uneasy, he finally entered the modest grocery. The selection was limited, but it did have the basics for several meals. The cashier gave him a silent but pointed look. Eggs, bread, and a few other items landed on the counter. The cashier rang up the purchase and announced the price. Jason pulled out some bills and handed them over. With only one thought on his mind—keep the change—he left. The prices were steep, but at least he could stay in and eat. Most places had greeted him warmly, but this town acted oddly cold. He exited to the same unmoving townsfolk who again stared silently. Jason walked past, watching them in return. Back inside, he stowed away his groceries. The rental felt safest now.

Jason tried to relax when he heard a knock at the door. He gently rose to his feet, uncertain if a mob of residents was gathering against him. Feeling tense, he prepared to leave if necessary.

“Bumbleburgh police, please open up,” the officer stated.

Jason opened the door to a single officer looking strangely at him.

“Is there an explanation you are here, officer?” Jason asked, worrying.

“People say you’re acting suspicious,” the officer replied curtly.

“I just tried to eat at the restaurant and picked up some groceries,” Jason responded calmly.

“Avoid the restaurants. Shop at the store—sparingly if best,” the officer said.

“Understood. Sorry for any trouble,” Jason replied, swallowing hard.

As Jason settled in, he began searching the town’s history on his computer, but found nothing remarkable except a retreat that burned down in the 1800s. The town had a reputation for being unwelcoming to visitors. Despite his worries, Jason decided to leave the house for a hike and packed his gear. He walked into the countryside, through beautiful green hills and green fields, eventually finding a trail leading to different locations. He sat on a rock to enjoy the view when a woman appeared on the trail, looking around as if she too had come for a walk.

“Few use this trail now—it heads to the old retreat’s ruins,” the woman said.

“The one with the mystery fire, right? Never solved,” Jason said.

“Rumor was that Isaac Trum, cult leader, lit the fire himself. He started Bumbleburgh,” she explained.

“So, my stay’s in a cult town,” Jason said in disbelief.

“Folk here don’t warm to outsiders. That hasn’t changed,” the woman replied.

“Maybe I was wrong about this place,” Jason admitted.

“Go to Frostville. Nicer people. You’ll be safer,” she responded.

“I’m leaving before something happens to me,” Jason muttered, unease clear.

“Good luck. Bumbleburgh’s odd. Enjoy the rest of your trip,” she nodded.

Jason began to head back to the house, noticing villagers keeping watch. He quietly entered through the rear door, went inside, and repacked all his things. The place hadn't even been used for sleeping, and already he felt nervous to leave. Jason cooked a final meal before leaving, leaving the rest of the food for the residents. Jason enjoyed each bite as he braced for trouble. As the sun set over the hills, he washed his dishes and readied himself for a hurried escape. The residents had retreated to their own homes for the night. So he quietly opened the back door not to alert the town. After packing his belongings into his car, Jason locked up and checked for anything suspicious before starting the vehicle. With the lights off, he left without going back, driving out through the streets to finally escape. By early morning, he was parked safely in Frostville. Though he had only booked one night, the car felt secure. His eyes finally closed with relief. In that perfect Frostville house, he felt at ease, but the strange cult town still remained in memory.

The next morning, the officer returned to discuss Jason’s visit. After knocking more without a response, the host entered the rental, everything in place, but no Jason. The bed was unused, and the dishes were put away.

“If we want our church of Isaac to thrive, we all need to treat guests better,” the host said.

“Trust isn’t given to outsiders. They always leave,” the officer replied.

“Another tenant comes next week. Maybe they’ll listen,” the host said.

“We’ll try to be more welcoming,” the officer promised, along with the cult members.

The town agreed and went to their jobs. Another sunny day began in the perfect-looking town. The peaceful hills continued to attract visitors, and Bumbleburgh endured.

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Sarah Danaher

I enjoy writing for fun. I like to write for several genres including fantasy, poetry, and dystopian, but I am open to trying other genres too. It has been a source of stress relief from my busy life.

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